經(jīng)典word整理文檔，僅參考，雙擊此處可刪除頁眉頁腳。本資料屬于網(wǎng)絡整理，如有侵權，請聯(lián)系刪除，謝謝！什么總是提不上去?今天為大家總結了那些年我們掉進的雅思寫作的坑。下面就和大家分享雅思寫作避開這幾個誤區(qū)，來欣賞一下吧。雅思寫作避開這幾個誤區(qū)一、避免空洞的單詞和詞組1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如：Whenallthingsareconsidered,youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthanthoseoftheirparents,inmyopinion。這句話當中的“whenallthingsareconsidered”和“inmyopinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：Youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthantheirparents。2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換例如：Duetothefactthatourgrandparentswereunderanobligationtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehaveatthispointintime。“duetothefactthat”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子，可以替換，簡化為下面的表達方式：Becauseourgrandparentswereobligatedtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehavenow。二、避免重復1.盡量避免重復使用同樣的詞匯?；蛘哂械臅r候雖然詞匯沒有重復，但意思卻有重復。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子：Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslargeinsize。large對一個farm來說就是size方面的largeinsize可以去掉，改為：Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslarge。更簡潔的表達方式為：Mygrandfathergrewuponalargefarm。2.有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換例如：Mygrandfatherhassaidoverandoveragainthathehadtoworkonhisparentsfarm。這里的overandoveragain就可以改為repeatedly簡潔：Mygrandfatherhassaidrepeatedlythathehadtoworkonhisparentsfarm。三、選擇最恰當?shù)恼Z法結構選擇合適的語法結構可以使句子意思的表達更為精確和簡可以參考的原則：1.一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思例如：Thesituationthatresultedinmygrandfathersnotbeingabletostudyengineeringwasthathisfatherneededhelponthefarm。從意思上來分析，上面這句話需要表達的重要的概念是“grandfathersnotbeingabletostudy”，而在表達這個概念時，原句用的主語是situation，謂語動詞是was，不能強調需要表達的重點概念，可以改為下面這句話：Mygrandfathercouldntstudyengineeringbecausehisfatherneededhelponthefarm。2.避免頻繁使用“therebe”結構例如下面的句子：Therewere25cowsonthefarmthatmygrandfatherhadtomilkeveryday.Itwashardworkformygrandfather?？梢愿臑椋篗ygrandfatherworkedhard.Hehadtomilk25cowsonthefarmeveryday。更簡潔的句式為：Mygrandfatherworkedhardmilking25cowsdaily。3.把從句改為短語或單詞例如：Dairycowswereraisedonthefarm,whichwaslocated100kilometersfromthenearestuniversityandwasinanareathatwasremote。簡潔的表達方式為：Thedairyfarmwaslocatedinaremotearea,100kilometerstothenearestuniversity。4.僅在需要強調賓語而不是主語的時候，才使用被動語態(tài)例如：Inthefall,notonlydidthecowshavetobemilked,butalsothehaywasmowedandstackedbymygrandfathersfamily。本句不夠簡潔的原因是本句的重心應該是忙碌的家庭-mygrandfathersfamily”cows和hay。下面的表達方式是主動語態(tài)，相對來說更簡潔一些：Inthefall,mygrandfathersfamilynotonlymilkedthecowbutalsomowedandstackedthehay。5.用更為精確的一個動詞來代替動詞短語例如：Mygrandfatherdidnthavetimetostandarounddoingnothingwithhisschoolfriends。Standarounddoingnothing其實可以用一個動詞來表達，即loiter：Mygrandfatherdidnthavetimetoloiterwithhisschoolfriends。6.有時兩句話的信息經(jīng)過組合，完全可以用一句話來簡練地表達例如：Profitsfromthefarmwerenotlarge.Sometimestheyweretoosmalltomeettheexpensesofrunningafarm.Theywerenotsufficienttopayforauniversitydegree。兩句話的信息可以合并為下面這句更為簡潔的句子：Profitsfromthefarmweresometimestoosmalltomeetoperationalexpenses,letalonepayforauniversitydegree。雅思寫作Task2社會類考官范文Trafficandhousingproblemsinmajorcitiescouldbesolvedbymovinglargecompaniesandfactoriesandtheiremployeestothecountryside.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?ModelAnswer:Thesedayswithincreasingurbanpopulations,therearemajorproblemswithcongestionandnotonlytheprice,butalsoavailabilityofaccommodationinlargecitiesoftheworld.Itseemsthatonepossiblesolutioncouldbetorelocatelargecompaniesandfactories