經(jīng)典word整理文檔，僅參考，雙擊此處可刪除頁眉頁腳。本資料屬于網(wǎng)絡(luò)整理，如有侵權(quán)，請聯(lián)系刪除，謝謝！Somepeoplebelievethattobecomethevegetarianistheonlywaytokeephealthy.Doyouagreeordisagree?有人認為：成為素食主義者是保持健康的唯一方式，是否認同?【點評】本文主題是論證如何保持健康?！窘】殿悺縏hegovernmenthasthedutytoensureitscitizenshaveahealthydiet,whileothersbelieveitisindividuals’responsibility.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.政府有責任保障人們的健康飲食，健康飲食是個人的責任，討論兩種觀點，給出你的意見。【作家立場】【點評】文本主題是論證如此保持健康?！緦懽麟y點】1.沒有觀點2.沒有語言3.表達不精彩【寫作策略】作理解，就是謀篇布局+遣詞造句。語料庫就是打造完美范文的一塊塊磚，料，讀資源和個性化的原創(chuàng)思想?！局袊忌治龅头值脑蚪馕觥?.模板和背誦的痕跡過重，讓人不相信是原創(chuàng)作品。2.沒有文采，很多表達已經(jīng)是陳詞濫調(diào)。3.基礎(chǔ)薄弱，錯誤較多?！窘馕鰞蓚€寫作術(shù)語】petwordsn小狗詞匯——作家喜歡的詞匯fossilization石主義——固定輸入【雅思寫作評分標準】☆任務完成情況(TaskAchievement)否有邏輯性?！钸B貫與銜接(CoherenceandCohesion)☆詞匯資源(LexicalResource)解析：用詞的精準可以加分。詞匯的精彩體現(xiàn)在表達的個性化以及多元化?！钫Z法的多樣性和準確性(GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy)【雅思寫作的5個步驟】【讓步反駁話題的布局圖】+爭議焦點+作家立場+總結(jié)理由【作家立場】為了保持健康，多食水果蔬菜也許是一種有效的方式，但是，不是最佳的和唯一的方式?！舅悸吠卣埂克厥持髁x為何可以保持健康1.素食主義者避免了糖分、脂肪、和過多的熱量的攝入。2.并且，水果蔬菜中含有豐富的維生素，因此，多食水果蔬菜真的是可以保持健康。但是，我想反駁的是：過度攝入水果蔬菜會導致營養(yǎng)的不均衡。素食主義為何不是保持健康的唯一方式1.其實，保持健康，僅僅避免肉類的攝入不是最佳的方式。2.第一，加強體育鍛煉是很好的保持健康方式，規(guī)律的體育鍛煉可以使人放松身心、增強人的免疫力、提高人的健康指數(shù)。3.第二，勞逸結(jié)合是健康的生活方式的保障，因為，現(xiàn)代人面對激烈的競爭，康管理?！驹瓌?chuàng)語料庫】1.Happinessfirstof2.vegetarians=thosewhoarekeenoneatingvegetablesor主義者3.vegetarians=peoplewhoconsciouslyavoidtheintakeofmeat主義者4.istheonlyway=isthesolemethod唯一的方式5.keephealthy=keepfit=embarkonahealthierlifestyle=haveawholesomelifestyle【范文賞析】作家立場Happinessofhealth.Healthenablesustobravecareerchallengesenergeticallyandharmonizefamilylifeoptimistically.Theawarenessofahealthierlifestylehasbeenmakingnumerouspeoplealtertheirdietaryhabits,whichexplainstheincreaseofvegetarians.Mystandisthattoeatfruitsandvegetablesmightbeaneffectivewayintermsofkeepinghowever，itisnotthebestandonlystrategy.【解析】Mystandisthat=myfirmconvictionisthat=tovoicemyopinion我認為……【拓展】intermsofIndeed,Ihavetoconcedethatpeoplewhoconsciouslyavoidtheintakeofmeatcan,tosomeextent,helpthemembarkonawholesomelifestyle.Moreprecisely,vegetarianeatinghabithelpspeopleavoidexcessiveintakeofsugar,fatandcalorie.Meanwhile,richnutrientsandvitaminsarecontainedinplentyoffruitsandvegetables.WhatIwanttorebut,however,isthattoomuchconsumptionoffruitsandvegetablesmightresultintheimbalanceofnutritionalvalue【解析】embarkonawholesomelifestylev開始健康的生活方式【拓展】WhatIwanttorebut,however,istoavoideatingmeatleavesmuchtobedesiredasfaraskeepingfitisconcerned.Otherwaysshouldbeexplored.First,strengtheningthephysicalexerciseisalsoacommendablewaybecauseregularphysicalactivitieshelpusrelaxourbodiesandeaseourminds.Hence,one’simmunesystemcanbeimprovedandone’shealthindexcanbeenhanced.Also,modernpeopleusuallyhavetofacefiercecompetitionandhugepressurederivingfromeitherstudyorwork.Tostandout,numerouspeopleburnthemidnightoil,whichunderminestheirhealth.Inthissense,tostrikeaproperbalancebetweenrestandworkcanalsoensurepeople’shealthmanagement.Toillustrate,occupiedworkersorstudentsshouldbeurgedtoarrangeholidaytriporfriendsreunionfromtimetotime.【解析】leavesmuchtobedesired【拓展】burnthemidnightoil=workfarintothe深夜)Inre-affirmmyconvictionthatregularsportsactivitiesandreasonableschedulewillhaveindispensab