話題寫(xiě)作（七）快樂(lè)成長(zhǎng)第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題主要包括成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程、成長(zhǎng)煩惱及成長(zhǎng)感悟等。涉及的要點(diǎn):1.成長(zhǎng)體驗(yàn)及感悟;2.成長(zhǎng)煩惱與困惑;3.關(guān)于更好地成長(zhǎng)的方法與建議。你的初中生活即將結(jié)束。此時(shí)此刻,正是回顧過(guò)去,展望未來(lái)之際。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活的感受和對(duì)高中生活的向往。短文須包括如下要點(diǎn):(1)師生關(guān)系;(2)學(xué)業(yè)成就;(3)生活樂(lè)趣;(4)感受初中;(5)向往高中。典例分析[注意](1)語(yǔ)言通順,要點(diǎn)齊全,意思連貫,條理清楚;(2)詞數(shù):100左右。

【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉:主題是回顧初中生活,展望高中生活。文章有兩個(gè)要點(diǎn):(1)回顧初中生活;(2)展望高中生活。2.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。3.確定人稱:第一人稱。【寫(xiě)作架構(gòu)】【基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作】Ⅰ.寫(xiě)主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補(bǔ)全下列各句。)1.我甚至一度進(jìn)入我們班的前三名。(getinto;thetop)Ieven

inourclassonce.

2.我已經(jīng)在常規(guī)課程上取得了巨大進(jìn)步。(makeprogress)I've

inregularacademicclasses.

3.我也喜歡做其他的事情,包括參加各種俱樂(lè)部。(including)Ialsoenjoymyselfindoingotherthings,

.

gotintothetopthreemadehugeprogressincludingjoiningvariousclubsWiththeirgreathelp,I‘vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.

3.Myseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.(用Ibelieve改寫(xiě)句子)

Ibelievethatmyseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.joiningvariousclubs,doingsportswithmyniceclassmatesandthestaff.However,thosegoldendaysfulloflaughterandtearsaregone.

Inaword,myjuniorschoollifeisanunforgettableexperience.AndIbelievemyseniorhighschoollifewillbemoremeaningful.【參考諺語(yǔ)】1.Timeflies.時(shí)光易逝。2.AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大路通羅馬。3.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無(wú)難事,只要肯登攀。4.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。拓展積累【亮點(diǎn)句型】導(dǎo)入主題句1.Asweknow,therearemanywaystorealizeourdreams.2.Everycoinhastwosides.Thereisnotonlysadnessbutalsohappinessinourlife.Butwhatshouldwedotohaveahappylife?3.Thereisnodoubtthateveryonehastofacedifficultiesinhislife.Weshouldtreattheminaproperway.4.Peoplealwayssaythatlifecan'tgoonwellallthetimebecausewewillmeetallkindsofdifficulties.文章發(fā)展、過(guò)渡句1.Firstofall,weneedtorealizethatdifficultyisapartoflifeandweshouldgetusedtoit.2.Next,weshouldbepositivetofindoutwaystodealwiththedifficultieswemeet.3.Ontheotherhand,weshouldfindthehappinessaroundusbyheart.4.What'smore,weshouldbelieveinourselves.文章結(jié)尾句1.Nomatterwhatwesuffer,weshouldstillbelievethattheharvestaftertheeffortisbeyondourexpectation.2.Nomatterwhatyoudo,themostimportantthingistoenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.3.Thepleasurewegetmakesusproud.4.Inmyopinion,whenwefacethedifficulttime,weshouldconsideritasatestforusandwhenwegetthroughit,wewillgainvaluableexperience.AWriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“There'sAlwaysHope”.(以“常懷希望”為題,寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的短文)。面臨困惑的時(shí)候,經(jīng)歷變化的時(shí)候,感覺(jué)挫敗的時(shí)候,遭遇逆境的時(shí)候……來(lái)自內(nèi)心的堅(jiān)持、他人的幫助、社會(huì)的關(guān)愛(ài)和科技的發(fā)展等,總能讓人常懷希望。請(qǐng)選取一個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕睦斫?可結(jié)合自身或他人的經(jīng)歷)。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息。)Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)Jgetoutofdifficulty

Jgive…ahandJneverlosehope

Forme,thekeytosuccessissimplebutpowerful—there'salwayshope.[提示詞語(yǔ)]self-disciplined(自律的),plan,goal,habit,improve[提示問(wèn)題]·Whatdidyoudotobeself-disciplined?·Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromdoingso?

Self-disciplineplaysanimportantroleinourlife.

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Self-disciplineplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Itmakesmeabetterstudentatschoolandabetterchildathome.Iusedtofollowallkindsofrulesandhandinthetasksappointedontimeatschool.AndIcouldnotonlyrespectallmyteachersbutalsogetonwellwithmyclassmates.Athome,Iwasabletobalancehouseworkandhomework.Iusually