HowtodescribeaplaceinEnglish基礎(chǔ)寫作之地點描述

班級:高二8班授課人:胡曉萍

London,themostimportantcityofEngland,serveasthecentreofitspolitical,andeconomicandculturallife.LocatinginthesoutheastofEngland,itcoversaareaof1580squarekilometers.Theweatherischangeablebutitrainedoften.Peoplecanenjoytheconvenienceofthemeanoftransportation,butatanextremeexpensiveprice.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Londonattractsvisitorsallovertheworld,leavethemadeepimpression.Ⅰ.Checking&Leadingin作業(yè)檢查導(dǎo)入課題

London,themostimportantindustrialcityofEngland,serveasthecentreofitspolitical,andeconomicandculturallife.LocatinginthesoutheastofEngland,itcoversaareaof1580squarekilometers.Theweatherischangeablebutitrainedoften.Peoplecanenjoytheconvenienceofthemeanoftransportation,butatanextremeexpensiveprice.Withitsbeautifulscenery,Londonattractsvisitorsallovertheworld,leavethemadeepimpression.∧serveslocatedanandrainsextremelyfromleavingmeansⅠ.Checking&Leadingin作業(yè)檢查導(dǎo)入課題

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HowtodescribeaplaceinEnglish

1.Location2.population3.Area4.history5.climate6.transportation7.PlacesofinterestⅡ.LearningAims學習目標

1.Remeberthephrasesandexpressionsonhowtodescribeaplace.

記住描寫地點的詞匯及句型2.Masterhowtopolishyoursentences.

掌握潤色語言的技巧3.Learnhowtoorganizeyourarticle.

學會謀篇1.location位于lie__(內(nèi)部)/___(相離)/__(接壤)theeastof___the(eastern)coastof______________(...的中央)坐落于be_____in/on/to/…由…包圍______________坐落于

stand

___________腳下___________/頂部

in

to

on

off

inthecenterof

atthefootof

located

besurroundedby

onthetopofⅢ.Self-learningFeedback課前自學檢查

1)Chinahasalargepopulationof1.4billion.2)Thepopulationofchinais1.4billion.3)Chinaisabigcountrywithapopulationof1.4billion.2.population/history/area

Translation翻譯句子中國是一個擁有14億人口的大國(1.4billion)1)hasalargepopulation/longhistory/anareaof...2)Thepopulation/history/areaof…is….3)…isa…citywithapopulation/historyof...★_____/___anareaof…squarekilometers

…isa…city____/______anareaof…4)追溯到___________/___________covershas

withcovering

datebackto

datefrom3.climate/transportation

1)Ithasa

____/________/________

climate.2)...isacitywith________/______transportation.3)冬不冷夏不熱。________________________________________4)氣溫高達40度。________________________________________

mild

pleasant

changable

convenientcrowdedItisneithertoocoldinwinternortoohotinsummer.Thetemperaturecanreachashighas40degree.4placesofinterest/resources/sights自然資源豐富____________________

因（作為）…聞名____________________

是...的故鄉(xiāng)______________來自國內(nèi)外的大量游客____________________________________________________

isrichinnaturalresourcesiswell-known/famousfor/as

ishometo

alarge/anincreasingnumberoftouristsathomeandabroad.位置廣東省東部歷史一個有很長歷史的沿海城市面積5200平方千米，總?cè)丝?60萬人。資源自然資源如礦產(chǎn)、森林、農(nóng)產(chǎn)品等非常富。氣候氣候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷熱。旅游勝地著名的旅游勝地如鳳山祖廟,紅海灣旅游景區(qū)等，每年都吸引大量游客。Ⅳ.GuidingandLearning師導(dǎo)生學合作探究寫篇介紹廣東汕尾市的短文(《創(chuàng)新方案》p.87)Step1Findoutthekeypoints提取要點1.汕尾位于廣東東部。

Shanwei

islocated/lies/isintheeastofGuangdong.2.汕尾是一個有很長歷史的沿海城市（coastalcity）

Itisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.3.汕尾總面積5200平方千米。

Itcoversanareaof5200squarekilometers.

4.汕尾總?cè)丝?60萬人。

Ithasapopulationofabout360million.Step2Translatethekeypoints翻譯要點5.汕尾氣候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷熱。

Theclimatehereispleasant,neithertoohotinsummernortoocoldinwinter.6.汕尾自然資源如礦產(chǎn)、森林、農(nóng)產(chǎn)品等很豐富。

Itisrichinnaturalresources,suchasmine,forest,farmproduceandsoon.7.著名的旅游勝地如鳳山祖廟(Feng

shanTemple)紅海灣(RedBay)等每年都吸引了大量的國內(nèi)外游客。

Everyyear,thefamousplacesofinterestsuchasFeng

shanTempleandRedBayattractmanytouristsathomeandabroad.1.ShanweiislocatedintheeastofGuangdong.Itisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.

①用并列句

②分詞短語③同位語④.定語從句2.Itcoversanareaof5200squarekilometers.Ithasapopulationofabout360million.

①With結(jié)構(gòu)②分詞短語3.Theclimatehereispleasant.Itisrichinnaturalresources.

notonly…butalso4.

Everyyear,thefamousplacesofinterestsuchasFeng

ShanTempleandRedBayattractmanytouristsathomeandabroad.

①.Therebe…定語從句/分詞短語

②....befamousfor…sothat

③.With...,itisnowonderthatStep3Polishsentences合并潤色(小組討論)1.ShanweiislocatedintheeastofGuangdong.Itisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.（并列句/分詞短語/同位語/定語從句）

1).ShanweiislocatedintheeastofGuangdonganditisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.2).LocatedintheeastofGuangdong,Shanweiisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.

3).Shanwei,acoastalcityintheeastofGuangdong,hasalonghistory.

4).Shanwei,whichisacoastalcityintheeastofGuangdong，hasalonghistory.

ShowingTime魅力展示解疑答惑2.Itcoversanareaof5200squarekilometers.Ithasapopulationofabout360million.（With結(jié)構(gòu)，分詞短語）3.

Theclimatehereispleasant.Itisrichinnaturalresources.

(notonly…butalso)1)Itcoversatotalareaof5200squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout360million.2)Ithasapopulationofabout360millioncoveringanareaof5200squarekilometers.

Notonlyis

theclimateherepleasant,butalsoitis

richinnaturalresources.4.

Everyyear,thefamousplacesofinterestsuchasFengShanTempleandRedBayattractmanytouristsathomeandabroad.

1).Therebe…定語從句/分詞短語2).With...itisnowonderthat...3)....befamousfor…/sothat…

1)TherearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinShanwei,suchas

FengshanTempleandRedBay,

attracting/whichattractsmanytouristsathomeandabroadeveryyear.2)WithmanyfamousplacesofinterestinShanwei,suchasFengshanTempleandRedBay,itisnowonderthateveryyearitattracsanincreasingnumberoftouristsathomeandabroad.

3)Shanwei

isfamousforitsplacesofinterest,suchasFengShanTempleandRedBay

sothat

itattractsquantitiesoftourists...everyyear.1.語句美

2.

3.

step4Organizeyourarticle謀篇(三段式)

首段引話題，語言簡潔目的明

二段扣要點，表意流暢句多變

過渡詞句記心間

尾段作總結(jié)，可表心愿可號召

結(jié)構(gòu)美

書寫美

作文三美1.連句成段脫口而出1.ShanweiislocatedintheeastofGuangdong.2.Itisacoastalcitywithalonghistory.3.Itcoversanareaof5200squarekilometers.4.Ithasapopulationofabout360million.5.Theclimatehereispleasant,neithertoohotinsummernortoocoldinwinter.6.Itisrichinnaturalresources,suchasmine,forest,farmproduceandsoon.7.ThefamousplacesofinterestsuchasFeng

shanTempleandRedBayattractmanytouristsathomeandabroadeveryyear.Ⅴ.Test達標檢測LocatedintheeastofGuangdongprovince,ShanWeiisacoastalcitywithalonghistoryandcoversatotalareaof5200squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout360million.Besides,notonly

istheclimateherepleasant,neithertoohotinsummernortoocoldinwinter,butalsoitisrichinnaturalresources,suchasmine,forest,farmproduceandsoon.Mostimportantly,therearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinShanwei,suchastheFengshanTempleandRedBay,whichattractsmanytouristsathomeandabroadeveryyear.

Thesecondparagraph1)Itismypleasureto

giveabriefintroductiontoShanwei.2)Ihavebeentomanybeautifulplaces,butitisShanwei

that

madeadeepimpressiononme.3)Of

manyplacesinGuangzhou,whatimpressedmemostis

Shanwei.Nowpleaseallowmetointroduceit.

4)Therearemany

famousplacesinGuangzhou,ofwhich

Shanweiattractsmemost.5)AreyouinterestedinShanwei?Iamconvincedthat

themore

youknowaboutit,themorelikelyyouaretofallinlovewithit.

2.寫出首尾段Thefirstparagraph佳句共享

1)Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourselveshere.2)Inaword,Shanweiissuchabeautifulplacethat

itisworthyourvisit.

3)Asisdescribedabove,Ibelieveitisworthwhiletopayavisitto

Shanwei.

4)Believeitornot,itwillbeagreatpityifyoufailtovisitShanwei.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyouhere.5)Asthesayinggoes,“Seeingisbelieving.”WelcometoShanweiandhaveagoodtime.

Thelastparagraph佳句共享OfmanyplacesinGuangzhou,whatimpressedmemostisShanwei.Nowpleaseallowmetointroduceit.

LocatedintheeastofGuangdongprovince,ShanWeiisacoastalcitywithalong