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1/28Task-writing

Howtodevelopanarrative

April19th,2/28Pleasereadthefollowingpassagefirst:

Everyonehasanexperiencetheywouldratherforget.Someareembarrassing,somearemoving,andsometeachusalesson.Hereisastoryofmine.LastSundayIwentfishing.Aftersettingupmyfishingrod（釣魚竿）withbait（魚餌）,Isatdownonthebankofthelake.Buttwohourslater,Ididn’tcatchanyfish.Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff（收拾東西）,preparingtogobackhome.Justthen,Isawanoldmansittingnearme.Tomysurprise,hisbasketwasfulloffish,soIwentovertohim,wantingtoknowwhy.“Excuseme,buthowlonghaveyousathere?”Iasked.“Aboutfourhours,”heanswered.“Fourhours?”Icouldn’tbelievemyears.“Yes.It’sveryimportanttobepatient,”theoldmansaid.“Don’tconsiderfishingatiringsport.Justenjoyit.”3/28Suddenly,Iunderstandwhathesaid.Imustlearntobepatient.ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently.Ifeltafishtouchthebait,butIdidn’tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin（卷收釣魚線）.Atlast,Icaughtit.Thismademeveryhappy.Inthefollowingsixhours,Icaughtover10fish.Onmywayhome,Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank.Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.4/28Whatstyleofwritingisthispassage

?Anarrative(記敘文).5/28Writingcontentandrequirements［寫作內(nèi)容］1)以約30個(gè)詞概括短文關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)；2)然后以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇記敘文，描寫你認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心主要性一次經(jīng)歷，并包含以下關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：a)敘述你認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心主要性一次真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)經(jīng)歷；b)你是怎樣認(rèn)識(shí)到耐心主要性；c)耐心對(duì)你生活、學(xué)習(xí)有什么影響。［寫作要求］(1)能夠參考閱讀材料篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，組織故事，但不得直接引用原文中句子；(2)標(biāo)題自定。6/28Whatstyleofastorydoesitaskustowrite?Anarrative,too.7/28評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(assessingcriteria)1.概括準(zhǔn)確性。語言簡(jiǎn)練明了，能客觀、準(zhǔn)確、全方面地轉(zhuǎn)述所給文字材料。2.語言規(guī)范性。語言合乎語法，地道自然。（無中國(guó)式英語）3.內(nèi)容適當(dāng)性。選材必需切題；內(nèi)容符合寫作要求；論據(jù)能證實(shí)論點(diǎn)4.篇章連貫性。文章主題（一個(gè)）要明確且貫通全文；層次分明有條理；銜接過渡自然。8/28讀寫任務(wù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(assessingprinciples)

1、本試題總分為25分，分兩部分給分①短文概括5分②主題寫作20分。2、強(qiáng)調(diào)內(nèi)容健康，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，說服力強(qiáng)，表述清楚?？蓞⒖奸喿x材料內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中句子。3、評(píng)分時(shí)，選依據(jù)文章語言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容適當(dāng)及篇章連貫性初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次要求衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最終給分。4、語言規(guī)范：拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言規(guī)范一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際影響程度給予考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯使用方法均可接收。5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。9/281.Title2.Summary[Abouttheoriginalpassage(About30words)]3.Atransitionalsentence4.Anarrative

(Aboutthesametopic)5.Anendingparagraph(Pointoutthemainidea)Thewritingtempletofanarrative(敘述類文章寫作模板)：(1分)(5分)(19分)

10/281.TitleWhat’sthetitlethatweshoulduse?1.PatienceIstheSecretofSuccess2.PatienceIsImportant3.TheImportanceofPatience8.PatienceIsNecessary4.TheKeytoSuccess─Patience5.HowImportantPatienceIs!6.PatienceLeadsto/ResultsinSuccess7.OurLifeNeedsPatiencekeywords11/28Suggestions:Whatshouldwepayattentiontowhenwritingatitle?Weshoulduseanounphraseorasentenceasatitle.2.Thefirstletterofeverywordinatitleshouldbewritteninacapital(大寫)letterexceptarticles(冠詞),prepositions(介詞)andconjunctions(連詞).3.Thenumberofatitlehadbetternotbemorethan10words.12/282.Howtosummarizeastory:Skill:Combinationoffiveelements要素串聯(lián)法

WhatWhoWhenWhereWhattolearnwastaughtalessonbyanoldmanthewriterandanoldmanwhengoingfishinglastSundayonthebankofthelakePatienceisimportant.Patienceisthesecretofsuccess.

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13/28Wemaybeginlikethese:1.Thepassageisaboutthewriter’sunforgettablelessonfromanoldman.2.Thewritertellsusabouthisunforgettablelessonfromanoldman.3.Thestoryisaboutthewriterwhowastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman.4.Theauthortellsusthat

hewastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman.14/28Inthispassage,thewritermainlytellsushisexperienceoffishingandwastaughtanunforgettablelessonbyanoldman.

Heknewtheimportanceofpatienceandfinallygotsomefish.(33words）Myversionforthesummary15/28Mainlyusethekeywordsandphrasesintheoriginalpassage.Donotincludeyourownopinion,butbesuretouseourownwords.2.Writeitinthethirdperson.（第三人稱）3.Controlthenumberofwordsbetween28and35.Suggestions:Whatshouldwepayattentiontowhenwritingasummary?16/283.Howtowriteatransitionalsentence1.Itoccurstomethatasimilarstoryofminehappened3yearsagoandtaughtmealesson.2.Ihadasimilarexperienceatonetime,too.3.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ihaveasimilarexperience.4.Ihavesuchasimilarexperience,too.5.Ihaveasimilarexperiencetothewriter’s.6.Ialsohaveasimilarexperience.Wemaywritelikethese:17/28Myversionforthetransitionalsentence:

Ialsohaveanexperienceaboutbeingpatient.Iwouldlikeyou,thereader,toshareitwithme.18/284.Makeupyoursimilarstory:Skill:Combinationoffiveelements要素串聯(lián)法

WhatWhoWhenWhereWhattolearnTakewaitingforabusforexample:waitedforabusIwhengoingtoschoolatthebusstopPatienceisimportant19/28

Ihaveasimilarexperience.

OnceIwaitedforthebus

atthestopfor30minutes,nobuscame.Icouldn’twaitanylongeranddecidedtowalktoschool.ButnosoonerhadIleftthanthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIwantedtotakethenextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.OnlythendidIrealizetheimportanceofpatience.Beingimpatientwillwastealltheeffortsthatwehavemade.Patiencealsoplaysanimportantpartinourstudyandwork.Withitwecanachievegreatersuccess.(110words)20/285.Howtowriteanendingparagraph

Allinall,patienceisveryimportant.Everyoneshouldhavepatiencetodoeverything.

(Pointoutthemainidea)Myversion21/28Let’senjoythepossibleversionfortheoriginalpassage!(Usingthebus-waitingsituation)22/28Patienceisthesecretofsuccess

Thestoryisaboutanunforgettablelessonofthewriterfromanoldmanwhilefishing,throughwhichthewriterrealizedpatiencewasveryimportantandthatitwasthesecretofsuccess.

(33words)23/28

Ihaveasimilarexperience.OnceIwaitedforthebusatthestopfor30minutes,nobuscame.Icouldn’twaitanylongeranddecidedtowalktoschool.ButnosoonerhadIleftthanthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminute,Iwouldhavecaughtit.IfIwantedtotakethenextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.OnlythendidIrealizetheimportanceofpatience.Beingimpatientwillwastealltheeffortsthatwehavemade.Patiencealsoplaysanimportantpartinourstudyandwork.Withitwecanachievegreatersuccess.(110words)24/28

Now,wheneverIamtolosemypatience,I’llthinkoftheexperienceofwaitingforabus.(18words)

(161words)25/28Homework

Writeapassageaccordingtothesecondpassageonthehandout,usingthewayswelearnedinthisperiod.26/28Thanks!

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言情小說ioq495fgk得很，嘹扎了，就是今天菜好，菜好得很，還有碎娃就是小孩。扎勢(shì)是擺譜意思。馮工對(duì)陜西方言十分精通，是個(gè)陜西通?！薄拔乙痪湟猜牪欢秃孟耨R啟明剛過來時(shí)聽我們?cè)捯粯?。”張鋼鐵笑著說道，沒想到陜西話里也有“鳥語”。要是馬啟明“鳥語”和張鋼鐵“鳥語”夾雜在一起吵架話，那就是妖魔鬼話連篇了吧。