九年級(jí)寫作課件Module6ProblemsWritingcourseLet'senjoyasong!Doyouhaveanyprblems?Pre-writingproblemscomunicationcomputerphonestudytimefriendshipnolisteningnotalkingloseoneselfspendtoomuchtimebebadforyoureyesargumentfailtheexamnogoodhabitnogoodplanPre-writingHowdoyousolvetheproblems?Pre-writingIfyou___________inthecomputer,youshould_______________,don't____________________computer.loseyourselfmakeatimeplanspendtoomuchtimeplayingPre-writingyoushould_______________them,and________________them.Ifyourparentsdon'tunderstandyou,comunicatewithmakeadealwithPre-writingIfyourdeskmatersleepinclass,youshould___________.wakeherupPre-writingIfyoudon'twanttosleepinclass,youshouldgotobedearly____________stayingup,oryouwill____tired___learnwell.insteadoftootoPre-writingyoushould____________.Ifyou____________,makeamistakeSaysorrytoPre-writingyoushouldlistencarefullyintheclassand___________.Ifyoudon'twantto____________,failtheexamstudyhardPre-writingplease_________youreyes,and_____yourself______phonebeforesleep.Ifyoudon'twanttobeshortsightedprotectstopplayingPre-writingEveryonehasdifferentproblems.Katehasoneproblem,sheaskherfriendAnnaforhelp,andwritealettertoAnna.NowreadtheletterandfindoutAnna'sproblem.Pre-writingDearKate,Ihaveaseriousproblemnow.MyparentsmadeanewruleformeafterIbecameastudentintheninthgrade.Theyaskedmetospendallmyeveningstudyingbecausetheywantedmetogetbettergrades.I'mnotallowedtowatchTV,chatwithfriends,orevenplaythepianoonschoolnights.Tothem,goodgradesareeverything.I'mreallystressfulnowbecauseoftherule.WhatshouldIdo?Canyouhelpme?Yours,Annathereasontheproblemsthefeeling1.ThereasonherparentsaskedAnnatospendallhertime2.ThethingsAnnaisn'tallowtodo3.Anna'sfeelingBecauseherparentswantedhertogetbettergrades.watchTV,chatwithfriends,playthepianostressful假如你是Kate，請(qǐng)你給Anna回一封80詞左右的信。內(nèi)容包括：1、簡(jiǎn)單分析Kate的問題；2、提出自己的想法和建議(至少2條)。Pre-writingHowtohelpothersandgivesomeadvice?Pre-writing

BeginningWritingBodyEnding分析問題提出建議，解決問題表達(dá)祝福You'renotalone.I'mgladto.........youshouldexplain...youneedto...youcanmakeadealwith...youshouldpromiseto.........firstsecondlast...Ihope...Pre-writingDearAnna,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,KateWritingPracticetime(15minutes)while-writingReadyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.朗讀文章并檢查是否符合以下要求1.要點(diǎn)齊了嗎？2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)了嗎？3.句子連貫嗎？4.單詞都寫對(duì)了嗎？5.有沒錯(cuò)誤的語法？6.書寫整潔嗎？CheckbyyourselfPost-writing

展示（showyourpassage）showtimePost-writing內(nèi)容分：7分（1）引出對(duì)方提出的問題（2分）（2）對(duì)提出的問題進(jìn)行分析、給出建議（4分）（3）總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)以及表達(dá)愿望（2分）語言分：8分第一檔：8分內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫,符合邏輯，只有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔：6-7分內(nèi)容涵蓋絕大多數(shù)的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯，但有少數(shù)語言錯(cuò)誤。第三檔：4-5分內(nèi)容涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)較為清楚、連貫，但有一些語言錯(cuò)誤。第四檔：1-3分內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，寫出少量句子，但整體表達(dá)不連貫，卻語言錯(cuò)誤較多。第五檔：0分空白卷或完全沒有相關(guān)內(nèi)容。評(píng)分檔次和要求：Post-writing

Workingroups1.要點(diǎn)齊了嗎？2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)了嗎？3.句子連貫嗎？4.單詞都寫對(duì)了嗎？5.有沒錯(cuò)誤的語法？6.書寫整潔嗎？小組內(nèi)互評(píng)：注意（作文通用修改符號(hào)：優(yōu)美句子~，漏詞∧，錯(cuò)詞O，去掉/）Post-writingDearAnna,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,KateWritingDearAnna,I'mgladtohearfromyou.Don'tworry.You'renotalone.Manystudentshavethesameproblem.NowI'mgladtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtosolvethisproblem.First,youshouldexplaintoyourparentsthatyouwon'tmindspendingmoretimestudying.However,youstillneedtodosomeactivities.Oryouwillbetootiredtolearnwell.Second,tellthemhowmuchyouloveplayingthepiano.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldpromisetoworkharderatyourlessons.Ifyougetbettergrades,theywon'tputpressureonyou.Ih