第=page11頁，共=sectionpages33頁第=page11頁，共=sectionpages33頁Unit4單元作文專項訓練人教版英語八年級下冊簡介：這份文檔圍繞人教版英語八年級下冊Unit4“Whydon'tyoutalktoyourparents”展開作文專項訓練，旨在提升學生的寫作能力，強化對單元話題相關表達的運用。Unit4聚焦于青少年在成長過程中與父母、朋友等相處時出現(xiàn)的溝通問題，以及如何解決這些問題。本專項訓練緊扣單元話題，提供了8個不同情境和要求的寫作任務，涵蓋演講稿、電子郵件、征文等多種體裁。從如何成為陽光的人、幫助他人交朋友，到如何做積極的學生、更好的青少年，以及分享健康生活方式等內(nèi)容，引導學生結(jié)合單元所學知識，圍繞青少年成長中的自我提升、人際交往等方面進行寫作。每個寫作任務都給出了詳細的要求，如包含要點、適當發(fā)揮、語句通順、運用特定句型等，還提供了例文和寫作步驟分析，幫助學生明確寫作思路，積累亮點詞匯和高分句型，逐步提升寫作水平，使學生能夠熟練運用英語表達對單元話題的理解和思考。一、書面表達1．現(xiàn)在很多青少年沉溺(indulgein)網(wǎng)絡，不愛學習，不愛運動，不與人交際(communicate)，愛吃垃圾食品等等，這些嚴重影響了他們的身心健康。為此，學校決定本周五下午舉辦一場主題為“我陽光，我健康”的演講比賽。你也想?yún)⒓舆@場演講比賽，請根據(jù)下圖提示以“HowtoBeaSunnyPerson”為題寫一篇演講稿。HowtoBeaSunnyPersonGoodhobbies:listeningtomusic,drawingLessinternet:fewercomputergames,studyMoresports:run,swimHealthyhabits:fruit,vegetables,washhands…Dream:…要求:1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點，并適當發(fā)揮一至兩點。2.語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名、校名和地名。4.詞數(shù)80詞左右。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))HowtoBeaSunnyPersonHello,everyone.Iamgladtobeheretogiveyouareportabouthowtobeasunnyperson.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,ifwetryourbest,wewillbecomebetterandbetter.Ihopeeachofyoucanbeasunnyperson.【答案】例文：HowtoBeaSunnyPerson

Hello,everyone.lamgladtobeheretogiveyouaspeechabouthowtobeasunnyperson.

Firstofall,usingthelnternetproperlyisimportantforustobeasunnyperson.Ifweuselessinternet,wewillplayfewercomputergames.Wecanusethelnternettostudyinsteadofplayinggames.What’smore,itishelpfultodomoresports,suchasrunningandswimming.Wecanrunforhalfanhoureverydaytokeephealthy.Inaddition,itisgoodtodevelopgoodhobbieslikedrawingandlisteningtomusic.Themoreknowledgewelearn,thebrighterfuturewewillhave.Finally,weshouldalsodevelophealthyeatinghabits.Wecanhavemorevegetablesandfruitsandwashourhandsfrequently.

Inaword,ifwetryourbest,wewillbecomebetterandbetter.Ihopeeachofyoucanbeasunnyperson.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：材料已給出，寫作時注意表述清晰，做到無語法和單詞拼寫錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，打招呼，引出主題；第二步，具體介紹如何成為一個陽光的人；第三步，收尾并表達美好祝愿。[亮點詞匯]①firstofall首先②insteadof代替③inaddition此外[高分句型]①What’smore,itishelpfultodomoresports,suchasrunningandswimming.(it固定句式)②Ifweuselessinternet,wewillplayfewercomputergames.(if引導的條件狀語從句)2．假如你是李華，你在校報上看到你們學校新來的Lisa說她很孤獨，性格內(nèi)向，不擅長交朋友，希望能得到幫助。請根據(jù)以下提示，給她寫一封郵件，介紹一下你的好朋友HanMei，希望她們能成為朋友，并對如何交朋友提出你的看法和建議。要求：1.簡單介紹韓梅的情況以及你們是好朋友的原因。2.你對如何交朋友的看法和建議?？蛇m當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.使用至少一個if從句。4.100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。5.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息DearLisa,I’mLiHua,welcometoourschool.I’msorrytohearthatyou’refeelinglonely._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearLisa,I’mLiHua,welcometoourschool.I’msorrytohearthatyou’refeelinglonely.Don’tworry,letmehelpyou.IhaveagoodfriendandhernameisHanMei.Sheismoreoutgoingandfriendly.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothersandsheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme,sosheisagoodfriend.Ifyoucanmakefriendswithher,you’llhavefuntogether.Howtomakefriends?Hereissomeadvice.First,ifyouareshy,youcanasktheteachersforhelp.What’smore,youmustbefriendlytoyourclassmates,trytohelpthemiftheyhaveproblems.Lastbutnotleast,youcanalsojointheschoolclubs.Ifyouareintheclubs,youwillmakesomefriendsbecauseyouhavethesameinterest.Whatdoyouthinkofmyadvice?Hopeyoucanmakegoodfriendsandfeelbettersoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，簡單介紹韓梅的情況以及成為好朋友的原因；第二步，介紹如何交朋友的看法和建議；第三步，書寫結(jié)尾，提出希望。[亮點詞匯]①bereadytodo準備做……②bringout激發(fā)，使顯現(xiàn)③makefriends交朋友[高分句型]①Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothersandsheoftenhelpstobringoutthebestinme,sosheisagoodfriend.（so連接的因果并列句）②Ifyouareintheclubs,youwillmakesomefriendsbecauseyouhavethesameinterest.（if引導的條件狀語從句）3．學校英語報正在開展以“Tobeanactivestudent”為主題的英語征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下圖表，寫一篇英文短文，向?？陡濉Ｔ~數(shù)80左右。注意事項：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地點。TobeanactivestudentAsajuniorhighstudent,itisveryimportanttobeactive.Buthowtobeanactivestudent?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TobeanactivestudentAsajuniorhighstudent,itisveryimportanttobeactive.Buthowtobeanactivestudent?Firstly,weneedtoeatdifferentkindsoffruitsandvegetablesandplaysportstokeephealthy.Secondly,itisnecessarytobekindtoothers.Wewillmakelotsoffriendsanditcanalsohelpuslivehappily.Thirdly,havinghobbieslikepainting,readingorplayinganinstrumentcanmakeourlifemorewonderful.Fourthly,youshouldhaveanicedreamandworkhardforit.Lastly,wecanhelpothersoften.Stayactiveandenjoyyourtime.Itmustbeniceandunforgettable.

Inaword,let’sworkharderandtrytobeanactivestudentfromtodayon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”。③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏要點。注意行文連貫，邏輯清晰，無拼寫和語法錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接給出的開頭，另起一段介紹做一個積極的學生的方法；第二步，詳細介紹如何能成為一名積極的學生，從生活、社交、愛好等方面介紹；第三步，寫出總結(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①differentkindsof不同種類的②bekindtoothers對其他人友好③helpuslivehappily幫助我們幸福地生活④fromtodayon從今天開始[高分句型]①Thirdly,havinghobbieslikepainting,readingorplayinganinstrumentcanmakeourlifemorewonderful.(動名詞作主語)②Stayactiveandenjoyyourtime.(祈使句)4．作為新時代青少年，我們應當以“愛國愛家，向上向善”為目標不斷提升自己。近期，學校英語報以“HowtoBeaBetterTeenager”為主題開展征文活動。請你根據(jù)下圖提示，寫一篇英文短文投稿。詞數(shù)80詞左右。要求：1.必須包含所有提示信息，并適當發(fā)揮一至兩點，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。HowtoBeaBetterTeenagerAsamiddleschoolstudent,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoBeaBetterTeenagerAsamiddleschoolstudent,beingabetterteenagermeansalottous.Firstofall,it’simportantforustoloveourcountry.WeshouldbequietwhenwewatchthenationalflaggoupandbeproudofChineseculture.Then,weshouldloveourfamily.Helpingwithhouseworkisagoodwaytoshowourloveforourparents.Also,weneedtostudyhardandreadmorebookstoimproveourselvessothatwecanhelptomakeourcountrybetterinthefuture.Weshouldalwaysbekindtoothers.Forexample,wecanhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Lastbutnotleast,wemustdomoreexercisetokeephealthy.It’sthemostimportantthingifwewanttomaketheworldbetter.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttobeabetterteenager.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明做更好的青少年的意義；第二步，詳細列舉如何成為更好的青少年；第三步，適當增加細節(jié)，總結(jié)全文。[亮點詞匯]①beproudof...對……感到驕傲②sothat以便，為了③Lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的一點[高分句型]①Firstofall,it’simportantforustoloveourcountry.(it作形式主語)②WeshouldbequietwhenwewatchthenationalflaggoupandbeproudofChineseculture.(when引導時間狀語)③Also,weneedtostudyhardandreadmorebookstoimproveourselvessothatwecanhelptomakeourcountrybetterinthefuture.(sothat引導目的狀語)5．假設你是李華，你學校英語俱樂部正在開展“我是健康達人”主題活動。請根據(jù)以下圖示提示，寫一篇題為“Healthylife,Betterfuture.”的演講稿，參加俱樂部舉行的演講比賽。詞數(shù)80。注意事項：1．必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3．請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地點。HealthyLife,BetterFuture.Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.Today,Iwanttosharemyhealthylifewithallofyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallaboutmyhealthylife!Thankyouforlistening.【答案】例文HealthyLife,BetterFuture.

Hello,everyone!I’mLiHua.Today,Iwanttosharemyhealthylifewithallofyou.

IalwaysgotobedearlyandgetupearlytomakesureIhaveenoughsleep.Andbeforegoingtobed,Iusuallyreadforawhile.Ithelpsmewithmystudies.Iusuallyexercisethreetimesaweek.Iloveplayingbasketballandswimming.Onweekends,Ioftentakepartincommunityservice.Ivolunteeratanursinghomenearmyhouse.Ichatwitholdpeople.Wesingsongsandplaygamestogether.

Let’sdevelopgoodhabitsandenjoyahealthylifetogether!

That’sallaboutmyhealthylife!Thankyouforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節(jié)，注意字母大小寫以及標點符號。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)提示，介紹自己的健康生活方式；第三步，號召大家一起養(yǎng)成良好的習慣，享受健康的生活并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①gotobed去睡覺②makesure確保③onweekends在周末④takepartin參加[高分句型]IalwaysgotobedearlyandgetupearlytomakesureIhaveenoughsleep.(賓語從句)6．親愛的同學們，進入新的一年，我們都期許成為更好的自己。學校英語專欄以“Makingmyselfbetter”為題面向?qū)W生進行征文。請你根據(jù)寫作要求，用英語寫一篇短文，向?qū)谕陡?。寫作要求?）介紹你將怎樣變得更好（可以從生活習慣、性格愛好、知識學習、保護自然、恰當使用網(wǎng)絡幾方面說明）；注意：至少2至3方面2）闡述你的理由；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；4）詞數(shù)100左右。MakingmyselfbetterEverydayisvaluableandshouldbemadegooduseoftomakemyselfbetter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakingmyselfbetterEverydayisvaluableandshouldbemadegooduseoftomakemyselfbetter.Firstly,goodlivinghabitsareimportanttome.Therefore,I’llsleepandgetupearly.Secondly,I’mgoingtoeatmorevegetablesandlessmeat,becauseeatinghealthilymattersalot.What’smore,Ialsoplantodevelopahabitofreadingdifferentkindsofbooksbecausereadingcanmakemeknowwhat’sgoingonaroundtheworld.Ithelpsopenmymind,too.ThemorebooksIread,themoreknowledgeIwillget.Lastbutnotleast,Iwillavoidplayinggamesonlinebecauseitisawasteoftimeanddoesharmtomyeyes.I’msurethatI’llmeetabettermeinthenewyear.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明自己新的一年會變更好；第二步，從不同的方面具體闡述怎樣成為更好的自己，并說明理由；第三步，展望未來，給自己樹立信心。[亮點詞匯]①areimportantto對……很重要②developahabitof...養(yǎng)成……的習慣③avoidplayinggames避免玩游戲④awasteoftime浪費時間[高分句型]①I’mgoingtoeatmorevegetablesandlessmeat.(一般將來時)②ThemorebooksIread,themoreknowledgeIwillget.(the比較級...，the比較級...)②I’msurethatI’llmeetabettermeinthenewyear.(that引導賓語從句)7．青少年是國家和民族的希望，是建設社會主義現(xiàn)代化的未來棟梁。擁有一個快樂、有價值的人生，對青少年和整個民族都具有重要意義。請根據(jù)以下要點和要求，從中學生的角度，以“Howtoliveahappylife”為題寫一篇短文。1.要點：(1)Havehealthylivinghabits;(2)Haveagoodhobby;(3)Haveawonderfuldream.2.要求：（1）文章須包含以上所有要點，可作適當發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)100左右。Howtoliveahappylife___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoliveahappylifeToliveahappylife,havinghealthylivinghabitsisimportant.Weshouldgetenoughsleep,eatbalancedmeals,andexerciseregularly.Thesehabitskeepourbodiesstrongandmindssharp.What’smore,havingagoodhobbycanbringjoyandrelaxationintoourlives.Whetherit’splayingamusicalinstrument,painting,orplayingsports,hobbiesofferanescapefromdailystressandimproveourmood.Finally,havingawonderfuldreamgivesuspurpose.Dreamsinspireustoworkhardandachievegreatthings.Inaword,combinehealthyhabits,enjoyablehobbies,andmeaningfuldreamstoliveatrulyhappylife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求以“Howtoliveahappylife”為題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進行寫作，