高三英語復(fù)習(xí)課程

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WritingSB1Module4ASocialSurvey—MyNeighbourhood

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Areyougoodatproofreading?RevisionProofReadingXiamenisabeautifulcity,whichislocatinginthesoutheastofFujianProvince.Itcoversareaofaround1699km2

withapopulationof3.67million.3.FamoussightincludeGulangIsland,aswellasNanPutuoTemple.4.TouristscometoGulangIslandbecausewecanenjoyagoodviewandlearnaboutthehistoryofpianos.ProofReadinglocated∧ansightsthey動詞形冠詞連詞須關(guān)注名詞數(shù)代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟2pointseachProofReading5.Besidesplacestovisit,youcertainlycan’tmisslocalsnackssuchlikestickyriceballs(麻糍)andfriedoyster['??st?](海蠣煎).6.Xiamenalsoenjoysareputationasabeautifullygardencity.7.TakingawalkaroundGulangIslandbutvisitingalocalseafoodmarketareamongtheactivitiesthatwillgetyouacloserlookatXiamen.ProofReadingas介詞短語常常考，習(xí)慣用法要記住beautiful還要注意形和副and冠詞連詞須關(guān)注Theusefulexpressions!

Xiamenisabeautifulcity,whichislocatedinthesoutheastofFujianProvince.Itcoversanareaofaround1699km2

withapopulationof3.67million.

Famoussightsinclude

GulangIsland,aswellasNanPutuoTemple.TouristscometoGulangIslandbecausetheycanenjoyagoodviewandlearnaboutthehistoryofpianos.

Besidesplacestovisit,youcertainlycan’tmisslocalsnackssuchasstickyriceballs(麻糍)andfriedoyster(海蠣煎).Xiamenalsoenjoysareputationasabeautifulgardencity.TakingawalkaroundGulangIslandandvisitingalocalseafoodmarketareamongtheactivitiesthatwillgetyouacloserlookatXiamen.underlineandappreciateProofreadingtoabetterwriting

Xiamenisabeautifulcity,whichislocatedinthesoutheastofFujianProvince.Itcoversanareaofaround1699km2withapopulationof3.67million.FamoussightsincludeGulangIsland,aswellasNanPutuoTemple.TouristscometoGulangIslandbecausetheycanenjoyagoodviewandlearnaboutthehistoryofpianos.Besidesplacestovisit,youcertainlycan’tmisslocalsnackssuchasstickyriceballs(麻糍)andfriedoyster(海蠣煎).Xiamenalsoenjoysareputationasabeautifulgardencity.TakingawalkaroundGulangIslandandvisitingalocalseafoodmarketareamongtheactivitiesthatwillgetyouacloserlookatXiamen.SentenceMaking中國有著悠久的歷史和文化。2.它位于亞洲東部，有著960萬平方公里的疆域和13億人口。3.中國有著許多美麗的山川，以及豐富的自然資源。4.長江是世界上最長的河流之一，長城是世界七大奇觀之一。5.中國人民勤勞勇敢，他們的勤奮和智慧在過去的二十年里給中國帶了巨大的變化。6minutes5pointseachShareyoursentencesProofreadthesentences!1.Mymotherland---Chinaisagreatcountry________________and___________richculture.withalonghistory2.It___intheeastofAsia,______________9,600,000squarekilometersand__________________1.3billionlieswithanareaof

(with)a

populationof3.________manybeautiful___________________,aswellas_________________inChina.4.TheYangtzeRiver,__weallknow,isamong________________intheworld,andtheGreatWallis_____________________ontheearth.

mountainsandrivers

richnaturalresourcesasthelongestriversoneofthesevenwondersThereare5.TheChinesepeopleare___________and_____people.Their_______and________havebrought___________inChinainthepast20years.wisdomgreatchangesdiligencehard-workingbraveWelcometoGuangyuan!Introduceourcitytothestrangers,50wordsorso.Howtointroduceaplace?BriefintroductionMainbodyLocationandareaPopulationFamousthingsandpeopleConclusionYourcomments/feelingsaboutthecity…ShowTime!Shareyourwritings!10pointseachPersonally,IthinkthepassagebyGROUP_______

iswellwritten,because_________

needsimprovement,because_________itcoversmuchinformationaboutGuangyuan.itiswrittenincorrectsentencesandtherearefewmistakesinthepassage.IgetlittleinformationaboutGuangyuanfromit.therearestillsomemistakesinthepassage.Evaluation(評價）3pointseachBenefitfromproofreadingcorrectmistakeswritecorrectlypromotewritingqualityhighermarksmoreconfidencePracticemakesperfect.stepwordsandphrases單詞詞組搭配sentences句子passages短文bystep