Unit3話題作文指導(dǎo)20252026人教版英語七年級上冊一、文檔定位目標受眾：20252026學(xué)年人教版英語七年級上冊學(xué)生。核心功能：幫助學(xué)生掌握英語寫作技巧，提升英語綜合運用能力，特別是在描述學(xué)校生活、校園環(huán)境、家庭情況、個人興趣愛好等基礎(chǔ)話題方面。二、內(nèi)容構(gòu)成八大板塊：涵蓋回復(fù)筆友郵件介紹個人情況、回復(fù)郵件介紹教室情況、介紹學(xué)校及校園生活、描述學(xué)校建筑和活動、分享初中生活、介紹學(xué)校平面圖等實用寫作場景。寫作指導(dǎo)：每個板塊均提供寫作要求、范文示例及寫作詳解，涵蓋寫作步驟、亮點詞匯和高分句型，幫助學(xué)生寫出條理清晰、語句通順的文章。三、出題特點緊扣教材：題目設(shè)計貼合教材重點與考試大綱，匹配學(xué)生學(xué)習進度。實用性與創(chuàng)新性：融合基礎(chǔ)寫作框架與多樣化主題，激發(fā)學(xué)生寫作興趣與創(chuàng)造力。能力培養(yǎng)：同時鍛煉學(xué)生語言與思維能力，引導(dǎo)其思考、分析與總結(jié)。四、教學(xué)價值提升寫作水平：幫助學(xué)生在基礎(chǔ)話題寫作上取得進步，提升英語寫作能力。培養(yǎng)綜合素養(yǎng)：通過多樣寫作任務(wù)，增強學(xué)生觀察力、邏輯思維與跨文化交流能力。備考助力：為學(xué)生在英語寫作板塊取得優(yōu)異成績提供支持。五、適用場景日常學(xué)習：學(xué)生可參考寫作指導(dǎo)，提升英語寫作水平。課堂教學(xué)：教師可將文檔內(nèi)容融入教學(xué)，豐富教學(xué)資源，提高教學(xué)效果。家庭作業(yè)：作為作業(yè)幫助學(xué)生鞏固課堂所學(xué)，提升寫作能力。一、書面表達1．假如你是李華，你的加拿大筆友Fred給你發(fā)來一封電子郵件，請你閱讀后回復(fù)。DearLiHua,Iamhappytobeyournewpenfriend.Iwanttoknowmoreaboutyou.Howmanypeoplearethereinyourfamily?What’syourroomlike?Ilikerabbitsbest.Whatareyourfavouriteanimals?Istudyataniceschool.Doyoulikeyourschool?What’syourfavouriteplaceatschool?Why?Canyoutellme?Yours,Fred1.郵件應(yīng)回答所有問題，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；2.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名3.詞數(shù)80左右。郵件的格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearFred，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearFred,Thankyouforyouremail!Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily:myparents,myyoungersister,andme.Myroomisnottoobigbutcozy.Ithasabluedeskontheleftandabookshelfnexttoit.Ialsoloverabbits!Theyarecuteandgentle.Yes,Ilikemyschoolverymuch.Myfavoriteplaceisthelibrarybecauseit’squietandfullofinterestingbooks.Ioftenreadthereafterclass.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,Li

Hua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)題干提示，回答Fred的問題，介紹自己的家庭情況、房間布置、喜歡的動物和學(xué)校情況，注意內(nèi)容齊全，保證語句通順，無單詞和語法錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的家庭信息以及房間的擺設(shè)以及喜歡的動物；第二步，介紹自己的學(xué)校情況和最喜歡的學(xué)校設(shè)施；第三步，表達對成為筆友的期待。[亮點詞匯]①nextto緊挨著sth./doingwardtosth./doingsth.期待某事/做某事[高分句型]①Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily:myparents,myyoungersister,andme.

(therebe句型)②Myfavoriteplaceisthelibrarybecauseit’squietandfullofinterestingbooks.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)2．假如你是李梅，你的英國網(wǎng)友Mary給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件詢問你們教室的情況，請你仔細閱讀并用英語給她回郵件。LiMei,How’sitgoing?Ineedtogiveareportabouttheclassroomsintheworldnextweek.Canyoutellmesomethingaboutyourclassroom?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply(回信).Thankyousomuch.Yours,Mary提示問題：1．Whatdoyouhaveinthefrontoftheclassroom?2．Whatdoyouhaveinthemiddleoftheclassroom?3．Whatdoyouhaveatthebackoftheclassroom?4．Whatdoyouoftendoinyourclassroom?5．Whatdoyouthinkofyourclassroom?參考詞匯：blackboard,smartwhiteboard,desk,chair,notice,studyhard,clean…要求：1．請根據(jù)提示問題，選擇使用參考詞匯完成郵件，可適當發(fā)揮；2．語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4．詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。）DearMary,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourclassroom.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMei【答案】DearMary, I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourclassroom.Ourclassroomisalivelyspace.Inthefrontoftheclassroom,wehaveablackboardandasmartwhiteboardforteaching.Inthemiddleoftheclassroom,wehavedesksandchairswhicharearrangedforustostudy.Atthebackoftheclassroom,wehaveanoticeboardtokeepusupdated.Weoftenstudyhardinourclassroom.Ithinkourclassroomiscleanandtidy.Ihopethisinformationishelpfulforyourreport. I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)根據(jù)提示要點進行書面表達，不要遺漏要點，可適當發(fā)揮。應(yīng)能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務(wù)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出話題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。具體介紹教室的情況以及對教室的評價。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達自己的收獲和感悟。[亮點詞匯]①inthefrontof在……的前部②behelpfulfor對……有幫助③studyhard努力學(xué)習④lookforwardto期待……[高分句型]①Inthemiddleoftheclassroom,wehavedesksandchairswhicharearrangedforustostudy.(定語從句)②Ithinkourclassroomiscleanandtidy.(賓語從句)3．親愛的同學(xué)，七年級上學(xué)期的校園生活即將畫上句號，回顧這段時光，你的學(xué)校給你留下了怎樣的印象呢?請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你的學(xué)校、你最喜歡的校園一角以及你對同學(xué)和老師們的看法。內(nèi)容提示：1.Whatisyourschoollike?2.Whichplacedoyoulikebest?Why?3.Whatdoyouthinkofyourclassmatesandteachers?注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。dreams.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________dreams.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：Aschoolisaplacetostartourdreams.Myschoolislargeandbeautiful.Ithasmanyclassrooms,alibrary,aplayground,andagarden.TheplaceIlikebestisthelibrary.Itisquiet,andtherearemanyinterestingbookstoread.Ienjoyspendingtimethere,especiallywhenIneedsomepeace.Asformyclassmatesandteachers,Ithinktheyarefriendlyandhelpful.Myclassmatesarealwaysreadytohelpme,andmyteachersarekindandpatient.Theymakemefeelfortableandencouragemetodomybest.I’mhappytobeapartofthisschool!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：主要使用“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息“內(nèi)容提示”的內(nèi)容，適當增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，簡要介紹學(xué)校的整體環(huán)境和設(shè)施；第二步，說明自己喜歡的校園一角，并給出理由；第三步，描述同學(xué)和老師的特點，表達對他們的積極看法。[亮點詞匯]①enjoydoing喜歡做某事②asfor至于③beapartof成為……的一部分[高分句型]①Myclassmatesarealwaysreadytohelpme,andmyteachersarekindandpatient.(并列句)②Ithinktheyarefriendlyandhelpful.(賓語從句)4．當?shù)赜⑽膱笳陂_展一項關(guān)于學(xué)校生活的征文活動，邀請你校學(xué)生投稿，請你按照征稿要求以“Myschool”為題寫一篇文章投稿，介紹自己的學(xué)校和你的學(xué)校生活。提示：1.Whatisyourschoollike?2.Howmanybuildingsarethereinyourschool?3.Whatisyourfavoriteplaceinyourschool?Why?4.Whatdoyouliketodoatschool?注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的個人信息和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)60左右。Myschool________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Myschoolisasbeautifulasapark.Therearesixbuildingsinourschool.TheplaygroundismyfavoriteplacebecauseIcandoexerciseandplaygameswithmyfriendsthere.Ireallyenjoyplayingsoccerwithmyclassmatesonthesoccerfield.Ialsolikerunningontheplaygroundanditmakesmestrong.IlovemyschoolbecauseIcanlearnandmakefriendsthere.【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；

③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節(jié)，使行文更連貫。

[寫作步驟]

第一步，表明寫作對象——介紹自己的學(xué)校；

第二步，具體介紹自己的學(xué)校建筑和活動。

[亮點詞匯]

①asbeautifulas和……一樣美麗；

②doexercise做鍛煉；

③makefriends交朋友。

[高分句型]

①Therearesixbuildingsinourschool.(therebe句型)

②TheplaygroundismyfavoriteplacebecauseIcandoexerciseandplaygameswithmyfriendsthere.(原因狀語從句)5．同學(xué)們，時光荏苒，仿佛昨日你們才滿懷憧憬地邁入初中大門，而今，一個學(xué)期的學(xué)習生活已悄然落幕。在這段寶貴的時間里，相信你們對自己的初中學(xué)校有了更為深刻的了解與感受?，F(xiàn)在，請拿起你的筆，向我們簡單介紹一下你的初中學(xué)校。MyMiddleSchoolWhatisinyourschool?Whichonedoyoulikebest?Why?Buildingsclassroombuilding;asportsfield;......Subjects(學(xué)科)Maths;English;......要求：1）必須包括所給信息,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫；2）文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；3）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyMiddleSchoolLetmetalkaboutmymiddleschool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

MyMiddleSchoolLetmetalkaboutmymiddleschool.Myschooliswonderful.Therearemanybuildingsliketheclassroombuildingandthesportsfield.WehavedifferentsubjectssuchasMathsandEnglish.IlikethesportsfieldbestbecauseIlovedoingsports.Theclassroombuildingisalsogreat,whichprovidesagoodenvironmentforourstudy.Ilovemymiddleschool.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，描述了作者的中學(xué)生活；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：介紹學(xué)校的建筑、你喜歡的學(xué)科，表達對學(xué)校的熱愛。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇表明要談?wù)撟约旱闹袑W(xué)；第二步，介紹學(xué)校的建筑，你喜歡的學(xué)科，說明自己最喜歡運動場的原因等；第三步，結(jié)尾表達對中學(xué)的喜愛。[亮點詞匯]①wonderful極好的；精彩的②suchas例如③provide提供[高分句型]①IlikethesportsfieldbestbecauseIlovedoingsports.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)②Theclassroombuildingisalsogreat,whichprovidesagoodenvironmentforourstudy.(which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)6．假如你是紅星中學(xué)七年級學(xué)生李華，現(xiàn)?？e辦“分享美好時光”的主題活動。請你以“Myschoollife”為題向?？⑽膶谕陡澹榻B你的初中生活。內(nèi)容包括：1.校園環(huán)境；2.課外活動；3.個人感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)為60左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱。參考詞匯:beautiful（adj.美麗的）,afterschoolactivities（課外活動）,enjoy（v.喜歡）MyschoollifeI’mLiHua,astudentfromGradeSeven._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyschoollifeI’mLiHua,astudentfromGradeSeven.Myschoolisbigandbeautiful.Therearesomebuildingsandaplayground.Myclassroomisonthefirstfloorandit’scleanandbright.Afterschool,Iusuallyrunorplayfootballintheplayground.FootballismyfavouritesportandIjointhefootballclub.Ilikenewfriendsthereandit’shappytotrainwiththem.IlovemyschoolandIenjoymyschoollife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示的要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山。介紹自己的基本信息，引出下文。(開頭已給出)第二步，具體闡述。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，介紹校園環(huán)境、課外活動等。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達自己對學(xué)校和初中生活的感受。[亮點詞匯]①afterschool放學(xué)后②playfootball踢足球③train訓(xùn)練[高分句型]①Therearesomebuildingsandaplayground.(therebe句型)②FootballismyfavouritesportandIjointhefootballclub.(and并列結(jié)構(gòu))7．假設(shè)你是LiMing，你的美國筆友Daniel詢問你初中生活的近況，請你用英文給他回復(fù)郵件，介紹你的生活，要點如下：1.校園美麗，有圖書館、餐廳等；學(xué)?；顒迂S富：……2.飲食健康：……；經(jīng)常運動：……3.最愛的中國節(jié)日是……，(介紹慶祝方式)。要求：1.所寫短文必須包括要點提示內(nèi)容，并作適當發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)不少于70，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearDaniel,I’mhappytohearfromyou.Nowletmetellyouaboutmylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiMing【答案】例文DearDaniel.I’mhappytohearfromyou.Nowletmetellyouaboutmylife.Myschoolisbeautiful.Thereisabrightlibrary,abigdininghalland4classroombuildings.Wehavemanyinterestingactivitiesatschool.Forexample,wehaveasportsmeetinginautumn.Ihaveahealthydiet.Ilikebeefandvegetables.Iseldomeatsweetsnacks,becausetheyarebadformyteeth.Ioftendosports.Iplayvolleyballonceaweek.MyfavouriteChinesefestivalistheSpringFestival.Weusuallyhaveabigdinnerwithrelativesandfriends.It’sgreatfun!Bestwishes,LiMing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹美麗校園及學(xué)?；顒樱坏诙?，介紹健康飲食和運動；第三步，介紹最愛的中國節(jié)日及慶祝方式。[亮點詞匯]①manyinterestingactivities許多有趣的活動②ahealthydiet一個健康的飲食③relativesandfriends親朋好友[高分句型]Iseldomeatsweetsnacks,becausetheyarebadformyteeth.(原因狀語從句)