專(zhuān)題09書(shū)面表達(dá)（解析版）

1.（2025·江西·中考真題）

今年是“體重管理年”，為了促進(jìn)“健康中國(guó)”建設(shè)，學(xué)校校刊英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄以“EatWell”為題向?qū)W生征文。請(qǐng)你根

據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，介紹你的日常飲食、飲食習(xí)慣及改進(jìn)措施。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1．Whatdoyouoftenhaveforthreemeals?

2．Whatareyourgoodandbadeatinghabits?

3．Howcanyouimproveyoureatinghabits?

寫(xiě)作要求：

1．短文應(yīng)包括所有寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清晰，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息；

3．短文不少于80詞。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

EatWell

Eatingwellisimportantforhealth.

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【答案】例文

EatWell

Eatingwellisimportantforhealth.Inmydailylife,Iusuallyhaveabowlofporridge,anegg,andsome

vegetablesforbreakfast.Forlunch,Ipreferricewithfishorchicken,alongwithabowlofsoup.Dinnerissimilar

tolunch,butIsometimesreplacericewithnoodles.

Ihavegoodhabitslikedrinkingplentyofwatereverydayandeatinglotsoffruits,whichhelpsmestay

energetic.IalsoavoidfastfoodbecauseIknowit’shighinfatandsalt.However,Ihaveabadhabitofeating

snackslateatnight,especiallychipsandchocolate.SometimesIeattooquickly,whichisbadfordigestion.

Toimprovemyeatinghabits,Iplantocutdownonsnacksandsetafixedtimefordinner.Iwillalsotryto

addmorewholegrainsandlessprocessedfoodtomymeals.Additionally,I’llpracticeeatingslowlytoenjoyeach

biteandhelpmybodydigestbetter.Ibelievethesechangeswillmakemydiethealthierandkeepmeingood

shape.

【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；

③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。

[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步，介紹自己的三餐飲食；

第二步，介紹好的和不好的飲食習(xí)慣；

第三步，介紹如何改善自己的飲食習(xí)慣。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①alongwith和

②besimilarto與……相似

③replace...with...用……替代……

④plentyof大量的

⑤cutdown削減

[高分句型]

①I(mǎi)havegoodhabitslikedrinkingplentyofwatereverydayandeatinglotsoffruits,whichhelpsmestayenergetic.

（which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）

②IalsoavoidfastfoodbecauseIknowit’shighinfatandsalt.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）

③Ibelievethesechangeswillmakemydiethealthierandkeepmeingoodshape.（省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句）

2.（2024·江西·中考真題）

我國(guó)義務(wù)教育階段實(shí)施“雙減”政策以來(lái)，學(xué)生擁有更多的課余時(shí)間。為了引導(dǎo)學(xué)生更好地利用課余時(shí)間，

增強(qiáng)時(shí)間管理意識(shí)，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)以“MakingBetterUseofTime”為題向?qū)W生征文，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)

寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1．Whendoyouhavefreetime?

2．Whatdoyouoftendoinyourfreetime?（Give3examples）

3．Doyouthinkyourfreetimeisbetterused?Whyorwhynot?

要求：

1．短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息；

3．詞數(shù)80—120，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

MakingBetterUseofTime

Asajuniorhighschoolstudent,Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.

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【答案】例文

MakingBetterUseofTime

Asajuniorhighschoolstudent,Ihavegotmorefreetimeinrecentyears.Iamalwaysfreeonweekends.

WhenIamfree,Ihavemanyactivities.Iusuallyplaythepianoandfootball.Ilikeplayingfootballvery

much.IfIhavetime,Ioftengototheparkwithmyfriendstoplayfootballonweekends.Ihavepianolessons

twiceaweek.Ialsohaveplentyoftimetoexerciseintheevening.Sometimes,myparentsandIlookatthestars

outside.

IthinkmyfreetimeisbetterusedbecauseIdowhatIwanttodoandIbalancestudyandentertainment.

【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；

③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的課余時(shí)間活動(dòng)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步，介紹自己什么時(shí)候有空閑時(shí)間；

第二步，介紹自己空閑時(shí)間的活動(dòng)；

第三步，介紹自己是否利用好自己的空閑時(shí)間以及原因。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①onweekends在周末

②plentyof大量的

③lookat看

[高分句型]

①WhenIamfree,Ihavemanyactivities.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)

②IthinkmyfreetimeisbetterusedbecauseIdowhatIwanttodoandIbalancestudyandentertainment.

(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)

3.（2023·江西·中考真題）

通過(guò)閱讀理解A篇我們感受到戶(hù)外活動(dòng)的有趣。本月底你校將舉辦一次戶(hù)外活動(dòng)，為了更好地開(kāi)展這次活

動(dòng)，校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正在向?qū)W生征集意見(jiàn)。假設(shè)你是張華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文（先介紹你喜歡的戶(hù)外

活動(dòng)，再說(shuō)明理由，最后就活動(dòng)安排提出合理的建議），向社團(tuán)投稿。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)參考句型

1.Whatoutdooractivitydoyoulike?

We’dbetter…

2.Whydoyoulikeit?Maybewecan…

It’llbebetterif…

3.Howdoyouarrange(安排)it?

…

(when,where,whattodo…)

備注：如果出現(xiàn)地名，請(qǐng)以East________代替，例如：EastMountain…要求：

1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；

3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearSir,

I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.

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Hopemysuggestionshelp.

Yours,

ZhangHua

【答案】

Dearsir,

I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.Ilikeclimbing

mountainswithmyclassmates.Wecanenjoythebeautyofnature.Wecanalsomakefriendsandhelpeachother

ontheway.

Tomaketheactivitymoreinteresting,IhopetogotoEastMountainonJune25th.Sinceit’salittlefar,we’d

bettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.Wecancollectsomehistorystoriesaboutthe

famousmountainsothatwecansharethemtogether.It’llbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.In

theafternoon,wecanpickuptherubbishtoprotecttheenvironment.Thenwecangohomeat4:30p.m.We’resure

tohavegreatfun.

Hopemysuggestionshelp.

Yours,

ZhangHua

例文2：

Dearsir,

I’mhappytoheartherewillbeanoutdooractivityinourschoolattheendofthismonth.Iliketravellingto

thecountrysidewithmyclassmates.Icannotonlyenjoyfreshairbutalsotakeexercise.It’sagoodexperienceto

learnaboutnature.

Tomakethetripmoreinteresting,I’dliketosharemysuggestions.Firstly,IhopetogotoEastFarmonJune

25thbecauseit’snotfar.Secondly,we’dbetterdosomefarmwork.Wecantalkwiththefarmerssothatwecan

knowaboutdifferentplants.Afterthat,forlunch,maybewecancookandeatthevegetableswhichgrowthere.

Finally,it’llbebetterifwecanmakefriendswiththechildreninthecountrysideintheafternoon.I’msurewewill

haveanicetime.

Hopemysuggestionshelp.

Yours,

ZhangHua

【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；

③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，要注意不要遺漏提示的相關(guān)要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。

[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步，介紹你喜歡的戶(hù)外活動(dòng)。

第二步，說(shuō)明理由。

第三步，就活動(dòng)安排提出合理的建議。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①thebeautyofnature自然之美

②hopetodo希望做某事

③pickup拾起，撿起

[高分句型]

①Sinceit’salittlefar,we’dbettermeetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andgotherebybus.(原因狀語(yǔ)從句)

②It’llbeniceifwecantrysomelocalfoodforlunchthere.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句)

4.（2022·江西·中考真題）

學(xué)校決定開(kāi)展向航天女英雄王亞平學(xué)習(xí)的英文演講活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你按下面表格要求寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。先簡(jiǎn)單介紹

王亞平的個(gè)人信息，再談?wù)勀銖谋揪硗晷翁羁誃篇中感受到的她的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)（personality），最后說(shuō)說(shuō)你打

算如何向她學(xué)習(xí)。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)具體內(nèi)容

●Age:42

1.Personalinformation●Birthplace:asmallvillageinShandongProvince

●Hobby:sports

2.Personality根據(jù)完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）

①________

3.Yourplans②________

…

要求：

1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；

3.詞數(shù)80—120，短文開(kāi)頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Hello,everyone!It’smyhonortointroduceanastronauthero—WangYaping.

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Thankyou!

【答案】例文：

Hello,everyone!It’smyhonortointroduceanastronauthero—WangYaping.Wangisa42-year-old

womanborninasmallvillageinShandongProvince.Shelikesplayingsportsverymuch.

WangYapingisthefirstfemaleastronautwhoperformedspacewalkbyShenzhouXIII.Shedeservesour

highestrespectforherpersistenceinhardtraining.Shelovesherworkandnevergivesup.

TolearnfromWangYaping,Iamgoingtoreflectonourweakpointsandworkhardtodobetter.I’mgoing

toovercomethedifficultiesImeetjustasWangdid.Hardworkcanpayoff.

Thankyou!

【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求介紹王亞平的個(gè)人信息并結(jié)合本卷完形填空B篇中的內(nèi)容談?wù)勊膬?yōu)秀品

質(zhì)，在最后講打算如何向她學(xué)習(xí)。

2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要結(jié)合一、三人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)結(jié)合一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般將來(lái)時(shí)。演講稿可分為四段式：第一段

介紹王亞平的個(gè)人信息；第二段談其優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)；第三段講自己的計(jì)劃；最后一段收尾，感謝大家的聆聽(tīng)。

要做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

5.（2021·江西·中考真題）

失敗乃成功之母。本卷閱讀理解B部分文章討論了失敗對(duì)于獲取成功具有重要的價(jià)值請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提

示，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀闳绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)，采取有效行動(dòng)，失敗為成功。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1WhathaveyoulearnedfromApple’sstory?

2Haveyoueverexperiencedafailure?Whatwasit?

3Whatwillyoudototurnitintoasuccess?

要求：

1短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；

3詞數(shù)不少于80。

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Failurecanleadtosuccess.Weshouldstudyitandlearnwhywemakemistakes,thenfindwaystosolveour

problems.Also,weshouldnevergiveup!

Ioncetriedoutforaspeechcompetition.Ipracticeditmanytimes.Unexpectedly,Ifailed.I’veneverspoken

infrontofthepubliceversince.

Apple’sstoryisquiteaninspirationforme.WhatcanIdotomakeit?First,beconfidentandtrytospeakin

publicplaces.Second,askmyteachersorfriendsforsomeadviceandimprovemylanguageskills.Finally,be

persistentandpracticespeechesoverandoveragain.

I’msureIwillsucceedsomeday.

寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第一部分介紹從Apple的成功

中學(xué)習(xí)到了什么，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二部分描寫(xiě)自己的失敗經(jīng)歷，時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)；第三部分為如

何把失敗變?yōu)槌晒Γ瑫r(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要行文連貫，條理清晰，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。

1.（2025·江西九江·三模）

健康是身體的基石。維持良好的身心健康對(duì)于個(gè)人的幸福和成功至關(guān)重要。你校健康周刊以“GoodWaysto

KeepHealthy”為題向同學(xué)們征稿。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1.Whyisitimportanttokeephealthy?

2.Whatareyoursuggestionsforkeepinghealthy?(Giveatleast3suggestions)

3.Calloneveryonetokeephealthy.

要求：

1.短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息；

3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

GoodWaystoKeepHealthy

Asweallknow,it’simportantforustokeephealthy.

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【答案】例文

GoodWaystoKeepHealthy

Asweallknow,it’simportantforustokeephealthy.Goodhealthhelpsusstudybetter,workefficiently,and

enjoylife.Withoutit,wemayeasilyfeeltiredorevengetsick.

Tostayhealthy,first,weshouldeatabalanceddietwithenoughfruits,vegetables,andwholegrains.Second,

regularexerciseisnecessary,suchasrunning,swimming,orplayingsports.Third,gettingenoughsleepand

avoidingstayinguplatearealsokeytokeepingenergetic.

Healthisthemostvaluabletreasureinlife.Let’stakeactionnowtodevelopgoodhabitsandliveahealthier

life!

【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。

③提示：根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)作。注意行文連貫，邏輯清晰，無(wú)拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步：承接給出的開(kāi)頭，介紹健康的好處；

第二步：給出三條保持健康的建議；

第三步：呼吁大家養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣并過(guò)健康的生活。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①getsick生病

②stayhealthy保持健康

③stayinguplate熬夜

[高分句型]

①Third,gettingenoughsleepandavoidingstayinguplatearealsokeytokeepingenergetic.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))

②Let’stakeactionnowtodevelopgoodhabitsandliveahealthierlife!(祈使句)

2.（2025·江西撫州·一模）

閱讀理解C中提出，全國(guó)在今年已經(jīng)基本落實(shí)了“雙休”政策。雙休是國(guó)家教育制度發(fā)展的必然趨勢(shì)，旨在

篩選創(chuàng)新能力和深度思考能力的人才。請(qǐng)按照以下寫(xiě)作要求談?wù)勀銓?duì)“雙休”政策的看法以及你對(duì)自己成為

“人才”的計(jì)劃。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：

1.Whatdoyouthinkofthe“doubleweekend”policy?

2.Whatcanthispolicybringtoyou?

3.Howareyougoingtodotobea“talent”forthecountry?

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【答案】例文

Ithinkthe“doubleweekend”policyismeaningfulasitprovidesstudentswithmoretimetorestandtakeup

personalinterests.What’smore,reducingacademicpressureallowsustodevelopcreativityandindependent

thinking.

Thispolicybringsmetwomainbenefits.Firstly,Icanuseweekendstotakeuphobbieslikereadingor

sports,improvingbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Secondly,extrafreetimeenablesmetodivedeeperinto

subjectsI’mpassionateabout,suchasscienceexperimentsorcodingprojects.Atthesametime,Icanspendmore

timewithmyfamilieswhichisveryimportantforme.

Tobecomeatalentforthecountry,Iwillbalancestudyandleisurewisely.Iplantocreateaweekend

schedulesothatIcanmakefulluseoftheweekend.Besides,Iwilltakepartindifferentactivitiestodevelopmy

skillsandmyabilitiesofsolvingproblems.Inaddition,Iwillkeepreadingmorebookstogetmoreknowledgeand

trytoexploretheworld.IbelieveIcanbesuccessfulaslongasIfighton.

【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；

③提示：根據(jù)題干要求，需圍繞“雙休政策”的看法、個(gè)人受益及成才計(jì)劃展開(kāi)，邏輯清晰，避免遺漏要點(diǎn)。

[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步，開(kāi)篇直接表明對(duì)“雙休政策”的積極態(tài)度，并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明其意義；

第二步，分點(diǎn)論述政策帶來(lái)的具體好處；

第三步，提出具體行動(dòng)方案。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①takeuphobbies培養(yǎng)興趣

②divedeeperinto深入探索

③makefulluseof充分利用

④exploretheworld探索世界

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①I(mǎi)thinkthe“doubleweekend”policyismeaningfulasitprovidesstudentswithmoretimetorestandtakeup

personalinterests.（賓語(yǔ)從句，原因狀語(yǔ)從句）

②IplantocreateaweekendschedulesothatIcanmakefulluseoftheweekend.（目的狀語(yǔ)從句）

3，（2025·江西宜春·三模）

人工智能AI(ArtificialIntelligence)自誕生起，已經(jīng)極大地改變了我們的生活。最近學(xué)校英語(yǔ)角邀請(qǐng)你（李華）

分享“AI助力學(xué)習(xí)”的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，分享AI工具的使用心得和建議，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)善用AI，做學(xué)習(xí)的主人。請(qǐng)根據(jù)

以下提示，寫(xiě)一封英文建議信。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.WhatdoyouthinkofAI?

2.HowhasAIhelpedyouinyourdailylifeandstudies?

3.WhatareyoursuggestionsaboutusingAItoolsproperly?

要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息；

3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dearfriends,

I’mLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.IamexcitedtosharemyideasaboutAI.

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Dearfriends,

I’mLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.IamexcitedtosharemyideasaboutAI.IbelieveAIisapowerfultool

thataregoodforourlifeandlearningifitisusedwisely.It’snotmagic,butitmakesourlifeandstudyingmore

efficientandenjoyable.

Inmydailylife,AIhelpsmeinmanyways.Forexample,Iuselanguage-learningappstopracticeEnglish

pronunciationandincreasemyvocabulary.WhenIfacemathproblems,AItoolsexplainitstepbystep,helpingme

understanddifficultpoints.Besides,AIhelpsmetoplanmystudy,savingmetimeandreducingstress.

However,it’simportanttouseAltoolsproperly.First,planyourtimewiselyandavoiddependingtoomuch

onAI.Second,combineAIwithtraditionallearningmethods,suchasreadingbooksandpracticingwith

classmates.

Let’smakethemostuseofAI.

LiHua

【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：這是一一篇關(guān)于人工智能（AI）的議論文，屬于材料作文寫(xiě)作。

②時(shí)態(tài)：主要使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；

③提示：材料所給要點(diǎn)需完整表達(dá)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步：引入話(huà)題，以自我介紹開(kāi)始，引出“我對(duì)AI的看法”這一主題；

第二步：結(jié)合日常生活中的具體場(chǎng)景說(shuō)明使用AI的好處；

第三步：提出建議與提醒；

第四步：總結(jié)全文，發(fā)出倡議。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①apowerfultool一種強(qiáng)大的工具

②usedwisely明智地使用

③moreefficientandenjoyable更高效且更有趣

④increasemyvocabulary增加詞匯量

⑤stepbystep逐步地

⑥avoiddependingtoomuchonAI避免過(guò)度依賴(lài)AI

⑦makethemostuseof充分利用

[高分句型]

①I(mǎi)believeAIisapowerfultoolthataregoodforourlifeandlearningifitisusedwisely.(that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，

if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)

②WhenIfacemathproblems,AItoolsexplainitstepbystep,helpingmeunderstanddifficultpoints.(when引導(dǎo)

的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ))

4．（2025·江西新余·三模）

要讀萬(wàn)卷書(shū)，更要行萬(wàn)里路，現(xiàn)在旅行成了備受歡迎的重要休閑方式，人們能從中體驗(yàn)到無(wú)限樂(lè)趣。你們

學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)將要舉辦一次主題為“Mydreamvacation”的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格

中的提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向社團(tuán)投稿。

寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)

Placestovisit...

Location...

Temperature...

Transportation...

Thingstodo...

Meaningoftravel...

要求：

1.短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名等信息。

3.詞數(shù)80-120，短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

MyDreamVacation

Thesummervacationorwintervacationisagoodtimetotravel.

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MyDreamVacation

Thesummervacationorwintervacationisagoodtimetotravel.Travelingisnotjustaboutrelaxation,it’sa

journeytoexploretheworldandenrichoursouls.MydreamvacationisatriptoHainan,atropicalparadisein

southernChina.Hainan,knownasthe“HawaiioftheEast,”issurroundedbytheSouthChinaSea.Summerin

Hainaniswarm,withtemperaturesrangingfrom25℃to32℃—perfectforoutdooractivities.

MyparentsandIwillflytoHaikou,thecapital,whichisbothconvenientandtime-saving.We’llswiminthe

crystal-clearwaters,buildsandcastles,andwatchbreathtakingsunsets.Exploringcoralreefsandtrekkingthrough

rainforestswillletusconnectwithnature.TastingHainanesechickenrice,visitinglocalmarkets,andlearning

abouttraditionalcustomswilldeepenmyunderstandingoftheisland’sgreatculture.

Thistripismorethanavacation—it’sagoodchancetoescapefromdailystress.Itisalsoanopportunityto

broadenmyhorizons.Throughtravel,wecanappreciatenature’sbeauty,embracenewexperiences,andcreate

unforgettablememorieswithfamily.

Inconclusion,mydreamvacationtoHainancombinesrelaxation,adventure,andculturaldiscovery.I

believewewillenjoyourselvesduringthevacation.

【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；

③提示：材料所給寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)不得遺漏，注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。

[寫(xiě)作步驟]

第一步，介紹旅行的意義以及夢(mèng)想旅行地的基本情況；

第二步，詳細(xì)介紹旅行的行程安排；

第三步，總結(jié)旅行的深層價(jià)值，表達(dá)期待，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①knownas被稱(chēng)為；以……而聞名

②escapefrom逃脫

③connectwithsth.與某物聯(lián)系

[高分句型]

①Exploringcoralreefsandtrekkingthroughrainforestswillletusconnectwithnature.（動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)）

②Ibelievewewillenjoyourselvesduringthevacation.（賓語(yǔ)從句）

5.（2025·江西·三模）

近年來(lái)，隨著人們生活水平的提高，體重管理愈發(fā)受到重視。國(guó)家也出臺(tái)了系列舉措，引導(dǎo)民眾關(guān)注

體重，擁抱健康生活。請(qǐng)以“WeightManagement:StartYoung”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

提示詞匯：weightmanagement(體重管理);unhealthydiet(不健康飲食);physicalactivity(體育活動(dòng));balanced

diet(均衡飲食)

內(nèi)容包括：

1.描述身邊青少年因體重問(wèn)題引發(fā)的健康困擾；

2.分析導(dǎo)致青少年體重問(wèn)題的主要原因，如不健康飲食、缺乏運(yùn)動(dòng)；

3.結(jié)合國(guó)家倡導(dǎo)，提出青少年進(jìn)行體重管理的可行方法。

要求：

1.詞數(shù)70詞以上；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。

WeightManagement:StartYoungInrecentyears,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,

weightmanagementhasreceivedmoreandmoreattention.

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【答案】例文：

WeightManagement:StartYoung

Inrecentyears,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,weightmanagementhasreceivedmore

andmoreattention.However,manyteenagersaroundmefacehealthproblemsbecauseoftheirweight.Someare

tooheavy,oftenfeelingtiredorhavingtroublebreathingduringPEclass.Otherslackenergytostudyorplay.

Theseproblemsaffecttheirdailylivesandgrowth.

Therearetwomainreasonsforthis.First,manyteenagershaveunhealthydiets.Theylovefastfoodlike

hamburgersandchips,orsweetsnacksandsoftdrinks.Second,theylackphysicalactivity.

Thankfully,thecountryencouragesustolivehealthily.Tomanageweight,teenagerscantakesimplesteps.

First,eatabalanceddiet.Choosevegetables,fruits,andwholegrains,andlimitjunkfood.Second,domore

physicalactivity.Walkorbiketoschool,playbasketballwithfriends,orevendanceathome.Smallchangescan

makeabigdifference.

Startingweightmanagementyounghelpsusgrowupstrongandhealthy.Let’stakeactiontoday