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2.13熱點(diǎn)話題表達(dá)微技能3（旅游見聞+景色描寫技巧）

英語寫景段落欣賞

NaturalPhenomena自然現(xiàn)象

1.TheClearSky晴空

Whenyoulookattheskyonaclearday,itseemsasiftheearthiscoveredbyablue

dome.If

youstandataplacewherethesurfaceoftheearthisflat;theskyseemstomeettheearth

inanydirectionyoulook.在晴朗的日子，你看到天空就像一個(gè)藍(lán)色的大圓盤.如果你極目遠(yuǎn)眺,無論從

那個(gè)方向,看到的都是天地相接的地平線.

2.SummerEvenings夏夜

SometimesIwillseefallingstarsdrawbrightlinesinthesky.Thereisharmonybetween

themoonandstarsinthequietskyandtheslowpaceofthevillage.Ireallyenjoythe

peacefulsummereveningsinthevillage.有時(shí)我得到流星在天空中劃出明亮的線條，寧靜的夜空中掛

著一輪明月和閃爍的星星,與慢節(jié)奏的村莊形成一幅和諧的美景.我非常喜歡村莊寧靜的夏夜.

3.TheSunrises日出

Thenextday,thesunlightwokehimveryearly,hidingthestarsunderapinkblueand

bluesky.Butthestarskeptwatchinghimfromabove.第二天，日出的光線很早就將他喚醒.夜晚的

星星都被陽光藏在粉藍(lán)色的天空下.但是它們?nèi)匀粡奶焐峡粗?

4.BeautifulDawn凌晨美景

Itwastheperfectmorningforourdailywalk:Abriskwindsweepingoceanairacross

ourfaces,freshmoundsofkelplaughinginclumpsalongthebeach,andthesuncomingup

fromitsflatbedoffog,redandnewandfullofpromises.對(duì)我們每日的散步來說，這是一個(gè)宜

人的清晨.清冽的微風(fēng)夾著海洋的氣息撲面而來.一簇簇新鮮的海藻在海灘隨處可見.旭日從霧靄中冉冉升

起,東升紅彤彤,新鮮而充滿生機(jī).

5.TheMoon月亮

Itisabeautifulandquietnight.Themoonislikeadischangingonthedarksky,which

castsitslightoneverything.一個(gè)美麗而寧靜的夜晚，月亮像一個(gè)圓盤掛在黑暗的夜空中，淡淡的月光

普照萬物.

6.SummerRain夏雨

Thefirstdropsofrainarehuge;theysplitintothedustontheground,andplunkonthe

roof.Therainnowbecomesatorrent,flungbyarisingwind.Togethertheybatterthetrees

andlevelthegrasses.Waterstreamsoffroofs.Thereisonlywater.開始雨點(diǎn)很大，濺起地上的

灰塵,打在屋頂上丁當(dāng)作響.接著大更大的風(fēng)助威下，瓢潑大雨傾盆而下，雨水砸向樹木,踏平草地.立即，雨

水像溪流一樣從屋頂奔流而下.到處都是水的世界.

7.Rainbow彩虹

Iamdrawnoutsidewhiletherainstillfalls.Allaround,thereiscoolandwelcomefeeling.

Ibreathedeeplyandwatchthesun'sraysstreakthroughbreakingclouds.Oneraycatches

thedropsthatfromontheedgeoftheroof,andIamtreatedtoarowoftiny,quivering

colors一myprivaterainbow.Theyarered,orange,yellow,green,blue,indigo,andviolet,

whichmakesawonderland.雨一直在下，我跑出去，享受周圍那一絲絲清涼的感覺.我深深地吸了一口氣，

看著陽光明媚穿過殘?jiān)?一縷陽光正好照在屋檐邊的雨滴上,形成了只有我才看見的一條細(xì)細(xì)的，忽隱忽現(xiàn)

的彩虹.五顏六色——赤橙黃綠青藍(lán)紫,簡(jiǎn)直就像仙境一般.

9.AThunderStorm雷雨

Theskyisfullofblackclouds.Flashesoflightninglitupthecourts,oldhouses,and

ramshackleporches,andthunderbeginstoroaroverhead.Nobirdssinganylonger,butthe

leavesofthetreesrustleandawindblowsagainstourfaces.Adropofwaterfalls,then

another,andthentherainfallsontheleavesofthetreesandtheironroofswithanoise

remindingusofthebeatingofdrums.Abrilliantstripeoflightfillsthesky.Suddenly

therecomesaterriblethunderclapoverhead,andthentheskyisfullofroarsofthunder.

天空烏云密布，雷電閃閃，照亮了天井、老屋,還有那搖搖欲墜的走廊.一聲驚雷在頭頂上炸響.只有樹葉的

沙沙聲.風(fēng)吹打在臉上,雨開始一滴一滴地下著，雨滴打在樹葉和鐵皮屋頂上,就像敲鑼打鼓的聲音.一道閃

電越過天空,緊接著頭頂上又是一聲驚雷,然后天空中轟鳴的雷聲不斷.

10.SnowPicture雪景

WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Isawthatthegroundwascoveredwithavastblanketof

whiteness.Withthewhitegroundunderfoot,andthechimneyshereandtheresendingout

brownsmokeintotheclearblueskyoverhead,thewholescenemightmatchthemostbeautiful

morningpictureintheworld.當(dāng)我第二天早晨起床時(shí)，我看到大地被厚厚的白色毯子覆蓋著.在腳下白

色的大地上,縷縷炊煙升入頭頂蔚藍(lán)的天空,猶如世界上最美的動(dòng)人畫卷.

11.AutumnDusk秋日黃昏

Themostbeautifulthingduringtheautumnisdusk.Thesettingsunlookslikeaburning

balloffire;itmakestheskylooksocolorful.Aflockofwildgeeseflybackandforthin

thesky,asiftheydon'twanttoleave.Themanyinsectsmakingnoiseinthegrassmake

fieldsseemmoreinteresting.秋日的黃昏最美的.太陽像一個(gè)大火球,把天空染成五顏六色.一群大雁在

天空飛來飛去,似乎不想離開.草中的蟲鳴使田野顯得更有趣.

12.WinterNight冬夜

Itwascoldandbleakinthelatewinter.Thenightwasdark,notastarwastobeseenin

thegloomyanddismalsky.Thenorthwindwashowlingdreadfullyoutsidethehouse,likethe

screamsofsomewoundedwildbeasts.陰冷的寒冬，夜里一片漆黑，在陰沉的天空中甚至連一顆星星都看

不見.屋外北風(fēng)呼嘯，像受傷的野獸的尖叫聲.

13.Snow初雪

Thefirstsnowcame,Howbeautifulitwas,fallingsosilentlyalldaylong,allnightlong,

onthemountains,inthemeadows,ontheroofsofliving.Allwhitesavetheriver,that

markeditscoursebyawindingblacklineacrossthelandscape,Whatsilence,too,camewith

thesnow,andwhatseclusion!Everysoundwasmuffledeverynoisechangedtosomethingsoft

andmusical.Nomoretrumpinghoofs,nomorerattlingwheels!初雪飄零，多么美??！它整日整夜

那么靜靜地飄著,落在山嶺上,落在草地上,落在屋頂上.在一片白茫茫之中，只有河流在美麗的畫面上劃出

一道曲曲彎彎的黑線.初雪飄落時(shí)，是何等的寧靜、何等的幽靜！一切聲響都江堰市趨于沉寂，一切噪音都

化作柔和的音樂.再?zèng)]有嘈雜的步行聲,再?zèng)]有滾滾的車輪聲.

ColorfulWorld五彩世界

1.TheSettingSun日落

Whenthesunbeginstosetbehindthemountains,itslongrayslightupthegreenfieldsof

wheatorrice.Andallthetreesandbusheswithagoldenglow.Thecloudsabovethesky

alsobegintoglowwithagoldenlight,andthemountainsareofalovelypurplecolor.太陽

快要下山了，柔和的光照在綠色的田野里和叢林上，金光閃閃，天空的云彩也開始金光閃閃，山也變成美麗的

紫色.

2.TowardEvening傍晚

Thenasthefieryballofthesunisgonealtogetherbehindthemountain,theredcolorof

thecloudsbeginstofade,andgraduallyfakesawayuntilallthecloudsaregreyandthe

mountainsbecomeadeepblackclearcutagainstthepalesky,wheretheeveningstarstake

theplaceofthesunandshinebrightly.火紅的太陽隱沒到山后，紅彤彤的云彩也漸漸地褪色，天空

成了灰色，山也變成了深褐色，像一幅版畫映襯在蒼白的天空中.夜空中明亮的星星開始閃耀.....

3.ColorfulWorld五彩世界

Thesunwasalreadyinthewestbutitwasstillshining.ItslightwassobrightthatI

couldn'tevenopenmyeyes.WhenIarrivedatthewestHill,thelightbecameabityellow.

Afterashortwhile,itwascompletelygolden,thenred.Thesunnearlyset.Itwaslikea

greatfieryball.Thecloudarounditwasalsopaintedred.Littlebylittlethecloud

coveredmoreandmoreofthesun.Atlastitdisappearedbehindthecloud.Itwasalready

dark.太陽偏西，但還非常明亮,強(qiáng)光刺得我睜不開眼.當(dāng)我到達(dá)西山時(shí),光線泛黃,一會(huì)兒,就變成了金黃色,

然后又變成紅色,太陽快要下山了，就像一個(gè)大火球,把周圍的云也染紅了.太陽慢慢地沉下去，終于躲入云

中，天已經(jīng)黑了.

4.BeachHoliday海灘假日

Ihadalwayslikedthebeach.Itdidn'tmatterifthesundidn'tshinewhileyouwere

hikinginthelakeDistrict一infact,alightrainmadeitallthemoreexhilarating.I

yearnedforthebrightblues,yellowsandredsofabeachholiday.我一向喜歡海灘.當(dāng)來到湖泊

地區(qū)遠(yuǎn)足時(shí)，天空沒有陽光并不要緊.事實(shí)上，一場(chǎng)小雨會(huì)更增添其中的情趣羅強(qiáng)烈地向往著海灘假日中明

亮的湛藍(lán)色、金黃色.

5.NaturalBeauty自然美景

Ononeside,beginningattheverylipofthepool,wasatinymeadow,acool,resilient

surfaceofgreenthatextendedtothevaseofthefrowningwall.Beyondthepoolagentle

slopeofearthranupanduptomeettheopposingwall.Finegrasscoveredtheslope-grass

thatwasspangledwithflowers,withhereandtherepatchesofcolor,orangeandpurpleand

golden.在深潭的一邊,有一片小小的草地,涼爽而富有彈性的綠草地從潭的邊緣延伸到皺折的峭壁下面.

深潭的另、一邊,一個(gè)緩坡延伸著直上到對(duì)面的峭壁.滿坡鮮美的草，五顏六色的花朵，桔黃色的、紫色的、

金黃色的點(diǎn)綴其間.

NaturalWorld山川風(fēng)貌

1.TheMorningDew晨露

Onsunshinysummermornings,thegrassisoftenwetwithdew.Theremaybedropsofdewon

flowersandbushes,andspiderwebs,too.Thedropsofdewsparklelikejewelswhenthesun

shinesonthem.在晴朗的夏天的凌晨，草上常常沾滿露珠，花叢中，甚至蜘蛛網(wǎng)上也有.當(dāng)陽光照耀在露珠

上時(shí)露珠像珠寶一樣閃閃發(fā)光.

2.LijiangRiver漓江

Theriverisrallyverycleanandpure.Werentedaboatandenjoyedthebeautifulscenes

alongtheriver.Themountainsaresospecial.I'veseenmanyotherkindsofmountains,but

IlikeGuilihn'smountainsbest.I'veseenmanyriversbefore,butIlikeLijiangRivers

best.河水清澈透明，我們租了一條小船,沿江欣賞著美景.山很奇特,我見過許多其他類型的山，但我最喜

歡桂林的山，我也見過許多河流,但我最喜歡漓江.

3.NightoftheLake湖之夜

Aroundthelakearesometrees,theirslenderleavesbellowinginthegentlewind.There

mustbesomefrogsinthemiddleofthelake,whoseendlesssingingcanbeheardclearly.

Whatanattractivenight!湖周圍有些樹，嫩嫩的樹葉在微風(fēng)中飄揚(yáng).湖中一定有青蛙，我能清楚地聽見

它們?cè)诓煌５馗璩?多美的夜晚啊！

4.OceanattheSunset日落時(shí)的大海

Agustofwindbroughtforththefaintsmelloffish,andthismademefeeljoyous.Slowly,

theraysofsunlightfaded,anddimnesssurroundedme.Theentireoceanchangedtoadark

violethue.Later,theredsunescapedintothesea.一陣海風(fēng)帶來了淡淡的魚腥味，使我興奮起來.

慢慢地,太陽光消失了，周圍一片朦朧,整個(gè)海洋變成暗紫色,最后紅紅的太陽消失在大海里.

5.SeaBeauty大海美景

Fromasfarasyoucouldseeontheleftandrightwasopenwaterandsand.Thesplashof

piecesofseashellslayscatteredonthebeachandsmallholescoveredthesandwherethe

crabshaddugin.Thewindfeltsoftandwarmandthewaternotverychilling.Farinthe

distancethesunwaschangingthecolorfromayellowtoanorangeandthentoaredball

hangingoverthehorizon.極目遠(yuǎn)眺，你能看見一望無垠的大海和沙灘.海灘上散落著海貝，還有一些小

洞,那是螃蟹挖的.風(fēng)柔而暖,水也并不太涼.遠(yuǎn)處的太陽由黃色變成橘紅色,一個(gè)大紅球,懸掛在天邊.

6.Waterfall瀑布

Fromtheskyfellthewaterfall,shighrising,thickmist.Whenincontactwithsunlight,

theseven一coloredrainbowhunginthesky,whichwasverystunning.瀑布飛流直下，震蕩起濃濃

的水霧,在陽光照耀下形成美麗的七色彩虹,掛在空中,令人稱奇.

7.Canyon峽谷

Itwasthegreenheartofthecanyon,wherethewallsswervedbackfromtherigidplanand

relievedtheirharshnessoflinebymakingalittleshelterednookandfillingittothe

brimwithsweetnessandroundnessandsoftness.Hereallthingsrested.Eventhenarrow

streamceaseditsturbulentdown——rushlongenoughtoformaquietpool….這是峽谷蔥綠的中

心,在這里峭壁改變了它們僵硬的形式和粗糙的線條,形成一個(gè)小小的隱蔽處,并使之充滿甜美、圓潤和安

逸.這兒一切都很寧靜,甚至連咆哮著直沖而下的瀑布也平靜下來,.形成了一個(gè)寧靜的深潭.....

8.TheForest森林

There?sbeautyinthewoods,too,especiallylateinthefall.Sometimesyouwalkamongthe

hugetreeswherethesunlightfiltersthrough.It'squietandbig,withtouchesofwhite

andgreenandgold.Andthesilenceislikethatofchurch.森林也是美麗的，特別是晚秋的森林.

有時(shí)候，你行走在陽光斑駁的高大林木間.森林在這兒那兒涂抹著白色、綠色、和金黃色,深廣而且寂靜，這

寂靜就像教堂里的肅穆一樣.

9.TheSea大海

Theseaisverybig.Somepartsoftheseaareveryshallow.Butsomeplaces,thesealis

quitedeep.Theseaissalty;Riverscarrysaltfromthelandinthesea.Inthesea,there

areplentyofdishesandplants.Somelivenearthetopofthesea.Otherslivedeepdown.

Millionsoftinylivingthingsfloatinthesea.Thesefloatingthingsaresosmallthatit

ishardtseethem.Manyfisheslivebyeatingtheselivingthings.大海彳艮大.有的地方彳艮淺，有

的地方很深.大海是咸的.河流把陸地的鹽帶到了大海里.在大海里,有許多魚和植物.有的生活在淺水層,有

的生活在深水層.成百上千萬的生物漂浮在海里.這些浮游生物太小了，我們大家很難看見它們.很多魚靠吃

這些浮游生物為生.

CityScenes城市風(fēng)光

1.Garden花園

Asweclimbedthestonestepsupthehill,wesawalow一lyinggardenatthebottomofthe

hill.Variousflowersandplantsseemedtocoveruptheentireplace.Thisgardenwas

colorfulasifitwasafairyland,itwasextremelybeautiful.當(dāng)我沿著石階往上爬時(shí)，我們看見

了山下的花園.各種各樣的花草覆蓋了整個(gè)花園,這個(gè)花園是如此多姿多彩,就像仙境一般.

2.GardenalongtheSeineRiver塞納河邊的花園

TakeastrollalongtheSeineRiver.Browsethroughtheartvendors,colorfulpaintings.

Peekthroughdelicateirongatesatthewell一keptgardens.WatchcloselyfortheFrench

attentiontodetail.Youwillseitinthedesignofadoorwayorarchandinthelittle

fountainsandquaintbalconies.Nomatterwhereyoulook,youwillfindeverydayobjects

transformedintoworksbyart.沿著塞納河漫步，瀏覽藝術(shù)家們色彩豐富的繪畫，透過那些精致的鐵門，

向內(nèi)偷竊那些精心照看的花園.仔細(xì)觀察法國人對(duì)于細(xì)節(jié)的留心,你可以在門廊或拱門以及小噴泉和古怪有

趣的走廊的設(shè)計(jì)上隨處可見.不管你往哪里看，你都可以發(fā)現(xiàn)日常物品已經(jīng)變成了藝術(shù)品.

3.Snow一coveredMountains雪山

Thetreesaroundtheschoolyardlookedlikehugemenwithsilverclothesdefendingour

school.Beyond,snow一coveredmountainsinthedistancelookedlikeanelephantmadeofwax.

Whatawonderfulscene!校園周圍的樹就像穿著銀裝的巨人守衛(wèi)著我們大家的校園.校園外，遠(yuǎn)處被除數(shù)

雪覆蓋的碩像蠟做大象.多美的景色啊！

4.ModernCity現(xiàn)代城市

Housearepackedtightlytogether,andwherearenohouses,thereareroads.Ontheseroads,

thetrafficflowisendless.Naturally,thechildrenhavenowheretoplay.Theymustsimply

sitindoorsontheirownandwatchtelevision.Theroomsarecrampedandshortofsunlight.

這里的房子一個(gè)挨著一個(gè),沒有房子的地方工業(yè)便是道路,在這樣的路面上,車輛川流不息.自然孩子們沒有

過玩耍的地方工業(yè),只能自己呆在家里看電視.房間狹窄,而且是缺少陽光.

5.StreetShadedbyTrees綠樹成蔭的街道

SometimesinOrlandothetreesshadingastreetmakeitmoreinvitingthanthehousedo.It

wasthetreearchingover.SabalLanethatcalledtoyoungofficerEvanMahoneyone

afternoon.Thefreckled一facepolicemanbrakedinfrontofthemostunusualgardenhe'd

everseen.在奧蘭多,綠樹成蔭的街道有時(shí)會(huì)比屋里更留得住人.一個(gè)炎熱的下午，被遮天蔽日的大樹覆蓋

著的沙伯爾街吸引著年輪的警官埃文.馬海尼.這名滿臉雀斑的警察在一座他從未見過的、最不尋常的花園

前停下車.

6.SplendidBuildings輝煌的建筑

Fromthefreewayyouwillseethebeautiful一lookingbuildingssethighonthegreen

mountain.Whenyougetin,youwillfindthelobbyisverylarge.Themostimpressiveitem

inthelobbyisthelarge,beautiful,all一marblestaircasethatcomesdownfromthesecond

floorontwosidesofthelobby;ahugebronzewallpaintingseparatesthetwostaircases.

Standinginthelobbyyoufeelasifyouhavewalkedintoaking'spalacebecauseofso

manybeautifulthingsaroundyou.從高速公路上，你可以看到綠色的山頂上那些漂亮的建筑.如果你走

進(jìn)去,就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)大廳很大,而大廳最吸引人的是那寬大的漂亮的大理石樓梯,從大樹兩邊通向二樓,樓梯之間

是一幅巨大的青銅壁畫.站在大廳,感覺就像是走進(jìn)了國王的宮殿,因?yàn)槟阒車囊磺卸际悄敲雌?

Festival節(jié)日風(fēng)情

1.ChristmasCustoms圣誕習(xí)俗

TherearesomanywonderfultraditionsassociatedwiththeChristmasseasons:Housesbe

deckedwithcolorfullightsandbowedhollywreaths;carolingwiththechurchchoir;

stockingsfullofyummytreatsandpresentsbeneaththeChristmastree;eggnogandthe

Christmasdayfeast.Allthesecustomscreatesuchwarmmemoriesinpeople'sheartsand

minds.有許多與圣誕節(jié)有關(guān)的美好傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗,如用彩色的燈和圣誕花環(huán)裝飾屋子,教堂合唱圣誕頌歌,塞滿

甜食的長襪子,及圣誕樹下的禮物,蛋酒及圣誕在餐.這些傳統(tǒng)的習(xí)俗為人們創(chuàng)造了許多美好及歡樂的回憶.

2.TheSpringFestival春節(jié)

PeopleoftenenjoylargedinnersandwatchspecialprogramsonTVwithfamilyontheLunar

NewYear'sEve.Childrenareveryhappy,too.Theyareinnewclothes,andusuallygetsome

money.Whichisputinaredpaperenvelopefromelderpeople.Youcanalsoseealotof

traditionalprograms,too,suchasliondancing.TheywishpeopleahappyNewYearanda

brightfuture.除夕，人們通常和家人一起享受豐盛的晚餐,看特別的電視節(jié)目,孩子們也非常高興，因?yàn)?/p>

他們可以穿上新衣服,還可以從長輩那兒得到紅包.你還可以看到很多傳統(tǒng)節(jié)目，比如舞獅子,意思是祝愿人

們新年快樂和前景美好.

3.Mid一autumnDay中秋節(jié)

OntheeveningofAugust15ofthelunarcalendar,whenthemoonwasbrightest,wealways

sattogetheroutsideinouryardtoeatmooncakesandenjoythebeautifulmoonlight.Mother

wouldthentellherstoryofthemoonfairyChange,wholivedinpalaceonthemoon,witha

jaderabbitforcompanion.在陰歷8月15日的晚上，也就是月亮最明亮的時(shí)候，我們一家人總是一起坐

在院子里吃月餅,欣賞那美麗的月光.媽媽總是會(huì)給我們講常娥奔月的故事,常娥住在月宮里,還有一只玉兔

陪伴著她.

4.ThanksgivingDay感恩節(jié)

IntheUnitedStates,thanksgivingdinnerispracticallythesamealloverthecountry.The

tableisalwaysloadedwithdeliciousfoodofmanydifferentkinds.Naturally,themain

courseisturkey,withanarrayofvegetablesanddesserts.Pumpkinpieisoftenservedin

remembranceofthefistsettlers.感恩節(jié)會(huì)餐在全美國差不多都一樣.桌子上擺滿了各種美味佳肴.自

然,火雞是主菜,同時(shí)擺放著各種蔬菜和甜食.人們常常吃南瓜餅，目的是為了紀(jì)念首批移民.

話題拓展

續(xù)寫表達(dá)句式升級(jí)必背

1.springisalotofrain,summerishot,autumnisthebestseasoninayear,itiscooland

busy,winteriscoldandsometimessnowy.春天是多雨的，夏天是炎熱的，秋天是一年中最好的季節(jié)，它

很涼爽而且忙碌,冬天是寒冷的,有時(shí)會(huì)下雪.

2.Thatisanoilpaintingofalandscapeinspring.那是一幅描繪春天景色的油畫.

3.Thetravelerswerebeguiledbythebeautyofthelandscapes.游客們被景色的美麗所陶醉.

4.Strongtechnicalskillsenhanceabeautifulscenethatcomparestraditionaland

contemporizedarchitecturalstyles.很強(qiáng)的技巧加強(qiáng)了景色的美感，在傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代化了的建筑風(fēng)格之間

的對(duì)比.

5.Thisextraordinarynaturalpreservesheltersaprimevalforest,thecontinent,slargest

populationofbrownbears,sizeablepacksofwolves,andahostofothercreatureswhich

haveallbutdisappearedelsewhere專門捕捉大自然美麗景色的導(dǎo)演高史林百格將會(huì)透過節(jié)目帶大家融

入這處仙境,享受大自然的真善美.

6.條條小河宛如藍(lán)色的緞帶纏繞著一望無際的綠色田野,遠(yuǎn)處一座座造型古樸、色彩和諧的小屋,一派美麗

動(dòng)人的田園風(fēng)光！

Acreektwinesthevastgreenfieldjustlikethebluecolorsatinribbon,adistantplace

modellingisbeingplain,colorharmonioushut,aschoolofbeautifulmovingruralscenery!

7.一座座古老的風(fēng)車,風(fēng)車的風(fēng)葉像張開的翅膀,迎風(fēng)轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng),與綠草、野花構(gòu)成了獨(dú)特的景致更為這童話般

世界增添神奇色彩！

Anancientwindmill,windmill，swindleafopenslikelythewing,rotatesagainstthewind,

withthegreengrass,thewildflowerconstitutedtheuniqueviewthisfairytaleworld

additionmysteriouscolor!

8.一對(duì)對(duì)色彩鮮艷、精致絢麗，象征著甜蜜愛情的木鞋！還有那華麗的郁金香傾倒無數(shù)情人……

郁金香飄香的季節(jié),嬌艷嫵媚的女孩的笑容如花傳芬芳……

幽幽湖邊,風(fēng)車,綠草，小房,多愜意

紅紅火火郁金香花田，陣陣芳香,風(fēng)車悠悠轉(zhuǎn)！這是夢(mèng)嗎？

Arightcolorbright,finegorgeous,isdraftingthehappylovesabotlikely!Alsohasthat

magnificenttuliptofalltheseasonwhichinnumerablesweetheart.....thetulipsmellsas

sweet,thetenderandbeautifulcharminggirl'ssmilingfacelikeflowerpasseson

fragrantly.....

Spookybund,windmill,greengrass,den,satisfiedprosperouscurcumafragrantflowersfield,

intermittentfragrant,windmilllongextension!Thisisthedream?

9.高高的建筑也是一種藝術(shù)品，古典、優(yōu)雅，像一幅濃郁的油漆彩畫！到處彌漫著綠色,連空氣也飄著青草

味,四周一片綠油油,綠色的驚艷,風(fēng)車也停下來，陶醉在美景中……

Thehighconstructionisalsoonekindofartware,isclassical,isgraceful,lookslikea

richpaintcolorpainting!everywhereisfillingthegreen,isalsoflutteringincludingthe

airgreengrasstasteallaroundgreenandglossy,thegreenstartledcolorful,thewindmill

alsostopsdown,isinfatuatedwithinthebeautifulscene.....

10.春天使大地復(fù)蘇.

Springrenewstheearth.

11.春天的時(shí)候,鄉(xiāng)村一片青蔥碧綠.

Thecountryisverygreeninspring

12.Theflowerlookslikeanangel,unfoldedinthewind,underthesun

13.我被眼前的景色深深吸引了

Iamdeeplyimpressed/attractedbythescenebeforeme.

1實(shí)踐強(qiáng)化

1.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文.

Kathy'sfamilyvacationtothebeachwasusuallythehighlightofhersummer.Thisyear,

however,herparentsannouncedanewrule:nophonesfortheentireweek.

“Butmyfriendswillbeexpectingupdatesaboutthetrip,“Kathycomplained.Kathy's

momgaveheraseriouslook.Unwillingly,Kathyhandedherphoneoverandhermomlockedit

away.

Thedrivetothebeachhousetookmostoftheday.Astheyturnedoffthehighwayonto

countrybackroads,thecloudsdarkened.Rainstartedtopour."Evenmorebeautifulinthe

rain,“hermothersaid.uWhatdoyouthink,Kathy?”Kathyglaredathermom.

“Beautiful,“shemuttered.

Thatnightafterdinner,Kathywanderedintothekitchen,whereherfatherwaswashing

dishes.Shegaveherfatheralovinglookandsaidinhersweetestvoice,“Couldn'tIhave

myphoneback,justforonesecond?JustsoIcantelleveryonewhatanamazingtimeI'm

having?"

“Can't,"hesaid."It'snothere.Remember?Kathywasveryannoyed.Having

nothingbettertodo,sheexaminedthedustybookcaseinthelivingroom.Thebookslooked

asdullastheweather.Onthetopshelf,however,shespottedapuzzle.Shetookit,

emptiedthepiecesonthetable,andbegantosortthem.

Afterwhatseemedlikeafewminutes,shelookedup.Itwaspastteno'clock.Shehad

beenworkingforalmosttwohours!Sheyawned.Thepuzzlewaslessthanhalfdone,butshe

wasexhausted.So,shewenttobed.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好.

Paragraph1:

Afteraquickbreakfast,Kathyheadedtothebeach.

Paragraph2:

Appreciatingthefinishedpuzzle,sherealizedshehadn'tthoughtofhercellphonefor

hours.

【參考范文】

Afteraquickbreakfast,Kathyheadedtothebeach.UndernocircumstanceshadKathy

expectedthescenerytobesospectacular!Withtheseawindblowingagainstherface,Kathy

totallylostherselfinthestunningviews.Afterhalfanhour'sleisurewalkalongthe

beach,Kathyreturnedtothehouse."HowdoIspendtherestoftheday?”Kathymurmured

toherself.Suddenly,theunfinishedpuzzlecaughtherattention.Shefeltalittleexcited

andburiedherselfinitonceagain.Everytimetheshapesmet,Kathywasoverwhelmedwith

happiness.Soon,allthatwereleftwereafewgaps.Shequicklyputtheremainingpieces

intoplace.Thepuzzlewascompleted!

Appreciatingthefinishedpuzzle,sherealizedshehadn'tthoughtofhercellphonefor

hours.Tryingtopreservetheimageinhermind,shequietlystartedtakingitapartrather

thantakingpicturestoupdateaboutthetrip.That,shethought,wasjustforme.Without

thedistractionsfromhercellphone,shefoundherselfengagedinstorysharingsessionwith

momanddaddywillingly.Theyspentahigh-qualityfamilytimetogether.Onarrivinghome,

momgavehercellphoneback.Thistime,however,shehadnointentiontosharebuttokeep

allthegreatmemoriesinhermind.

【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文以人物為線索展開，講述Kathy一家去旅行，媽媽要求旅行中不用手機(jī)，開始Kathy十分

不習(xí)慣但又不得不遵守規(guī)則.Kathy完成了拼圖,并且欣賞到了平時(shí)看不到的美景,還盡情享受了和父母在一

起的時(shí)間和溫暖.

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“Kathy快速吃完早飯后就跑去海邊.”可知,第一段可描寫Kathy在海邊看到了美景,

然后，回家完成昨晚沒有完成的拼圖.

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“欣賞著自己完成的拼圖，她意識(shí)到自己已經(jīng)好幾個(gè)小時(shí)沒有想起手機(jī)這回事了.”可

知,第二段可描寫沒有手機(jī)的打擾,一家人在這里度過的溫馨生活,是在平時(shí)感受不到的，回到家后媽媽把手

機(jī)還給Kathy后,她似乎已經(jīng)不需要了.

2.續(xù)寫線索：

去海邊欣賞到美景一一回家完成拼圖一一在腦海保存拼圖一一和父母度過高質(zhì)量的假期一一漸漸地已經(jīng)不

需要手機(jī)

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①回家：returnedtothehouse/gobacktothehouse

②吸弓I注意力：catchherattention/drawherattention

③保存:preserve/keep

情緒類

①激動(dòng)的：excited/thrilied

②十分高興：beoverwhelmedwithhappiness/bebathedinhappiness

【典型句式】

[句型1].Withtheseawindblowingagainstherface,Kathytotallylostherselfinthe

stunningviews.（運(yùn)用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）

[句型2].Everytimetheshapesmet,Kathywasoverwhelmedwithhappiness.（由everytime弓|導(dǎo)

的時(shí)間狀語從句）

2.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文.

Winterbreakwasapproaching,andallScottwantedtodowasgosnowboarding.

Unfortunately,Scott，sparentshaddifferentplans.Theyhadbookedaweeklongtropical

cruise（熱帶船游）.Scotthatedwarmweatherandaskedifhecouldjuststayathisbest

friend5shousesohecouldsnowboardeverydayatthelocalmountain.Hisparentsdidn't

wanttohearanythingofit.Hekeptdebatingthemaboutthetopic,buttheywouldnot

changetheirminds.Familytimewasimportanttothem,anditwastraditionthattheyspend

winterbreaktogether.

Theweekofthecruisearrived,andScottcontinuedtomumble（咕噥）hiscomplaintsas

heandhisfamilylefttheirhousetoheadsouth.Scott'sdadtoldhimthathewouldonly

makethevacationworseforhimselfifhedidn，tchangehisattitudeandopenhismindtoa

newexperience.Scottstillcouldn，tstopthinkingaboutallofthesnowhewasleaving

behind.

Whentheyarrivedattheporttoboardtheship,Scotthadahardtimeadmittingthathe

wasactuallyimpressedwiththesizeoftheship.Hehadseenthebrochuresbutseeingthe

shipinpersonwasawholedifferentanimal.Thenherememberedthatthebrochuresaid

somethingaboutasurfingpool.Maybesurfingwouldbesomewhatlikesnowboarding.Afterall,

itinvolvedridingaboard.

Scottclimbedaboardtheshipwithhisparents,andthentheywalkedaroundtocheck

everythingout.Hecouldn，tbelievehowfancytheaccommodationswere.Thediningroom

lookedlikearoyalhall;thegameroomhadallofhisfavoritegames;theship5sdeck（甲板）

hadseveraldifferentswimmingpoolsfordifferentpurposes.ThenScottsawthesurfingpool.

Itwasincredible.Itwasn'tabigpool,butithadbigwaves,andtheyoungmanwhowas

demonstratinghowtoridethewavesmadeitlooklikeatonoffun.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.

Scottaskedhisparentsifhecouldtrysurfing.

Gradually,Scottbegantolovethecruise.

【參考范文】

Scottaskedhisparentsifhecouldtrysurfing.Theysaid,〃0fcourse.Andmuchto

Scott,ssurprise,theywantedtotrysurfingtoo.WhenScottandhisparentshadtheirswim

suitson,Scott'sdadwentfirstandonlylastedaboutfivesecondsbeforehewipedout.Then

itwashismom，sturn.Sheactuallymadeitlongerthanhisdaddid.WhenitwasScott，sturn,

hewasexcitedbutalittlebitnervous.Hehoppedontheboardandtookastancesimilarto

hissnowboardingstance.Thenthewavesstarted.Itfeltsimilartosnowboardingbut

differentatthesametime.Onhisfirstride,Scottrodeforalmost30secondsbefore

wipingout.Hewascrazyaboutitthough.

Gradually,Scottbegantolovethecruise.Hegottoknowthepeoplewhooftensurfed

therequitewell.Bythetimetheweeklongcruisewasover,Scotthadnewfriendsheplanned

tokeepintouch.Scottisthebraveandluckyonesinceonlyeightpercentofthe

experiencerorsoreallyfellinlovewithitamongalotofthepassengerswhotried

surfingthefirstdayofthecruise.Withanewhobby,andgreatmemories,heapologizedto

hisparentsforearliestmoaningandgroaningandtoldthemitwashisbestvacationever.

【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文以時(shí)間為線索展開,講述了作者斯科特和父母像往常一樣在寒假