Show,don’ttell2026屆新高考英語沖刺復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫之動作和情緒描寫

快速完成優(yōu)質(zhì)續(xù)寫文的策略探索續(xù)寫規(guī)律:01原文一致原則內(nèi)容要前后銜接，上下連貫語言表達(dá)風(fēng)格一致。03曲折性原則故事情節(jié)應(yīng)跌宕起伏，其中人物會遇到困難或問題，但最終能解決。02正能量原則故事內(nèi)容一定要正能量，弘揚社會主義核心價值觀。如迷路了但最終一定回到了家；失敗了或遇到困難了，但最終一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言歸于好,和睦相處；犯錯了，最后一定會改過自新，重新做人；賊逃了，最后一定是繩之以法等等。三原則四個步驟2.細(xì)讀首句，構(gòu)思框架仔細(xì)閱讀所給兩段的首句，結(jié)合正能量結(jié)尾，思考大致框架。1.讀懂大意，理清脈絡(luò)讀所給的不完整故事，弄清大意和主題，理清故事的主要人物和事件。4.修改潤色，整潔謄寫思考再三，把修正潤色后的續(xù)寫整潔地寫入答卷。3.增加細(xì)節(jié)，開始寫作依據(jù)情節(jié)發(fā)展和常識，在確定的框架內(nèi)，可按“所見/遇所想，所為所感”等構(gòu)思具體細(xì)節(jié)。Characters:Who,Events:What(when,where,how,why)環(huán)境描寫,語言描寫,動作描寫,情緒描寫,心理描寫,檢查錯誤升級句式讀后續(xù)寫情緒類詞句匯總喜樂傷心憤怒恐懼羞愧緊張擔(dān)憂震驚傲慢激動感動ContinuationwritingstrategyShow,Don'tTellHowdidshefeel?Shefelt___________happyexciteddelightedjoyfulgladthrilled...PictureTalkHowcanyoutell?Shejumpedhighwithjoy.Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.Thesummerfreshairisfilledwithlaughter.Wecanshowone'semotionthroughactions.Wecanshowone'semotionthroughfacialexpression.Wecanshowone'semotionthroughtheenvironment.ThinkandSayThegirljumpedhighwithjoy.Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.Thesummerfreshairisfilledwithlaughter.ThinkandSayShefelthappy.Totell:Toshow:TotellToshowVSToshow:towritewithmoreactions,facialexpressionsandenvironmentdescriptions,allowingreaderstoexperiencethesamethingsasthecharactersdo.Sheshouted.Step1:寫話語：“Whatareyoudoing?”,

sheshouted.Step2:加表情：“Whatareyoudoing?”,sheshoutedwithanexpressionofangerStep3:加眼睛：“Whatareyoudoing?”,

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andhereyeswidenedStep4:加拳頭：“Whatareyoudoing?”,

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andhereyeswidened,poundingonthetablewithherfistStep5:加眼神：“Whatareyoudoing?”,

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andglaringatmefuriously.緊張Mystomach____________________andmyhandswere_______.我心里很慌，手心都是汗。Hecould__________________;andthepainfulbeatsmadehimfeelfaint.

他能感到他地心臟怦、怦、怦地跳，這令人痛苦地心跳讓他覺得暈眩。Hisheartalmost________________________________.他的心幾乎要跳出來了。wasfullofbutterfliessweaty

feelhisheartthump,thump,thumpleapedintohismouth震驚1.She___________________________________________atseeingherchildhoodfriend.看到兒時的朋友，她驚訝得呆住了。2.______________________,shesimplycouldn’ttakehereyesoff...她的嘴張得大大的，目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地看著....wasrootedtothegroundduetotheamazementWithhermouthwideopening激動Bettyfelt_______________________________________________.

貝蒂感到她的心激動得怦怦直跳。Hisface________________________________.

他因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。Whenhewasannouncedtobethewinner,__________________________________

當(dāng)他被宣布獲勝時，她興奮得不能自已。

herheartwasthumpingwithexcitementawildexcitementtookholdofher.wasshiningwithexcitement1.她滿心歡喜。

Shewasoverwhelmedwithhappiness.2.她的微笑照亮了整個房間。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.3.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.4.看到眼前的一幕，她流下了幸福的淚水。Inthefaceofthescene,hertearsofhappinessfloweddown.5.他高興得兩眼閃閃發(fā)光。Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.6.笑聲在房間里回蕩。Laughterslingeredintheroom.喜樂感動1.感動得熱淚盈眶

bemovedtotears2.感動得說不出話來

bemovedbeyondwords3.Bothofthemwereintears,huggingeachothertightly.兩人淚流滿面，緊緊地?fù)肀г谝黄稹?.Ahugewaveofwarmthfloodedallovermybody.一股暖流涌過我的全身。5.Timeseemedtoceasetowitnessthetouchingmoment.時間似乎停止下來，見證這個偉大/動人的時刻了。（適合用于happyending的感人故事）傷心1.我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。IfeltlikeIwas_______________________________________.2.

他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著臉頰流下來。Hestoodsilently,_________________________________.3.

聽到這個消息，她陷入極度的悲傷之中。Hearingthenews,she________________________________________.4.因為一場事故，Tony的世界陷入一片黑暗和絕望之中。Asaresultofanaccident,Tonywassuddenly_____________________________________________.floatinginanoceanofsadness.tearsrollingdownhischeeks.wastotallyoverwhelmedbygriefthrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.憤怒1.他怒火中燒。Hewas________withanger.2.她因為發(fā)怒臉漲得通紅。Herfacewas_____________.3.Sam一動不動地站在那里，眼睛里閃爍著怒火。Samstood_____________,hiseyes________________.4.她能感覺到憤怒在她心中醞釀。Shecouldfeeltheanger___________________insideher.boilingredwithangerrootedtothespotblazingwithangergrowing,bubblingup恐懼1.他轉(zhuǎn)向我，眼里充滿了恐懼。Heturnedtome,with_____________________.2.她嚇得睜大了眼睛。Hereyeswere________horror.3.他渾身發(fā)抖，感到坐立不安。Sheshookallover,feelinglike___________________________.4.當(dāng)看到那只兇惡的狼時，我被深深地恐懼感所控制，手心出汗。Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Iwas__________________________andmypalms

___________________.hiseyesfullofhorrorwidewithsittingonpinsandneedlesseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorweresweating羞愧他感到非常羞愧，都能覺得臉上滾燙。1.Hefeltsoashamedthat________________________________.他感到非常羞愧，覺得血液涌上臉頰。2.Soashamedwashethathecouldfeel__________