Howcanwedescribeactionsvividly?ActionchainsinContinuationWriting動(dòng)作描寫：頭抬頭raiseone’shead低頭lowerone’shead撓頭(迷茫)scratchone’shead臉臉龐一亮(喜悅)facelitup/asmilebloomedonone’sface臉紅(羞愧)faceflushed/burned臉色鐵青(生氣)sbwasblueintheface臉色慘白(悲傷)one’sfaceturnedpale手伸出手reachoutone’shand手心冒汗hispamsweresweaty把...遞給某人handsthtosb鼓掌clappedone’shands擁抱某人gatheredsbintoone’sarms/roundedsbintoarms投入父母懷抱threwoneselfintoparents’armsShespreadtheturkey’slegs,counteddownandpulledhard.Suject+actionA,

actionBand

actionCachainofactions歌手掃了一眼觀眾，深吸一口氣，就開始唱起來。Thesinger__________theaudience,_____adeepbreathand________sing.glancedatbegantotookbeforeaperformance

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sbdid,didanddid(同一個(gè)主語，三連動(dòng)）achainofactionssbdid,didanddid三連動(dòng)1.他抬起頭，咬緊嘴唇，堅(jiān)定地點(diǎn)頭。He______hishead,____hislipsand_______firmly.raisedbitregainconfidencenoddedachainofactionssbdid,didanddid三連動(dòng)2.她沖了過去，蹲下來，把兒子緊緊摟在懷里She_______forward,_____downand________herson____________tightly.kneltdashedhugginggatheredintoherarmsachainofactionssbdid,didanddid三連動(dòng)3.他抓起幾片面包，瞄準(zhǔn)那只狼，奮力扔了出去He________severalpiecesofbread,_____atthewolfand______themwithallhismight.aimedgrabbedemergencythrew

察覺到危險(xiǎn)臨近，湯姆愣了一秒，隨即沖向門口。_______

thedangerapproaching,Tom

_____

forasecondand

then________

towardsthedoor.achainofactionsSensingfrozerushed②Doingsth,sbdidanddid同一個(gè)主語，同時(shí)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，且主動(dòng)achainofactions4.聽到這個(gè)壞消息，她不可置信地大喊，幾乎暈倒了_______thebadnews,she_______acryofdisbeliefandalmost________.faintedletoutHearingachainofactionsDoingsth,sbdidanddid5.從藏匿處拿出包裝好的盒子，她踮腳走到他身后，捂住他的眼睛，輕聲說：“猜我為你準(zhǔn)備了什么！”______thewrappedboxfromitshidingplace,

she________behindhim,______hiseyes

and________,

"GuesswhatIhaveforyou!"tiptoedcoveredwhisperedasurprisegiftTaking說完那些傷人的話，他立刻后悔了，伸手想阻止她離開。___________thoseharshwords,heimmediately________itand___________tostopherfromleaving.achainofactionsHavingsaidregrettedreachedout吵架③Havingdonesth,sbdidanddid同一主語，動(dòng)作存在先后順序6.讀完信的最后一句話，信紙從她指間滑落，她失聲痛哭____________thefinallineoftheletter,sheletit____fromherfingersand______intotears.achainofactionsHavingdonesth,sbdidanddidamovingletterHavingreadslipburst7.了解完情況后，父親蹲了下來，拍了拍他的肩膀，安慰道，“我們一起來吧”。______________theirplan,thefather______down,_______themontheshoulderand_________,“Let’sdoittogether!”.achainofactionsHavingdonesth,sbdidanddidHavinglearnedpattedkneltcomforted孩子為生病的媽媽做飯失敗Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.Heraisedhishead,bithislipsandnoddedfirmly.Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarmstightly.Hegrabbedseveralpiecesofbread,aimedatthewolfandthrewthemwithallhismight.Takingthewrappedboxfromitshidingplace,

shetiptoedbehindhim,coveredhiseyes

andwhispered,

"GuesswhatIhaveforyou!"Havingreadthefinallineoftheletter,sheletitslipfromherfingersandburstintotears.Havinglearnedtheirplan,thefatherkneltdown,pattedthemontheshoulderandcomforted,“Let’sdoittogether!”.微場(chǎng)景通用句式generalsentencepatterns情緒描寫情緒侵襲某人(無靈主語)

情緒n.+seized/overwhelmed/swallowed+sb.例：一陣怒火淹沒了他，讓他不假思索地摔門而去。_____________________________,makinghimslamthedoorwithoutthinking.情緒外露：從ta的聲音/表情判斷，很明顯ta.....Judgingfromhisvoice/expression,itwasevidentthathe.....例.從他猶豫的表情判斷，很明顯他隱瞞了一些重要事情。____________________________________________________________________情緒變化

：某人情緒1逐漸消失，被情緒2所取代sb’s+情緒+fadedawayandwasreplacedby+情緒2例.他的興奮耗盡了，取而代之的是絕望和悲傷___________________________________________________Histhrillfadedawayandwasreplacedbyhopelessnessandsadness.Judgingfromhishesitantexpression,itwasevidentthathe

washidingsthimportant.Awaveofrageoverwhelmedhim靈光一閃突然，某人看到....,他突然想到他可以.....Suddenly,sbcaughtthesightof...Itoccurredtosbthatshe/hecould...場(chǎng)景(野外迷路)：突然,Jane看見遠(yuǎn)處有一個(gè)湖。她突然想到,湖邊也許是發(fā)出求救信號(hào)的最佳地點(diǎn)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Suddenly,Janecaughtthesightofalakeatadistance.Itoccurredtoherthatthelakemightbeaperfectspottosendoutsignalsforhelp.矛盾解決后正向結(jié)果某人絕沒料到...會(huì)如此...Bynomeanshadsbexpectedsthtobesoadj.場(chǎng)景：他從沒料到這些加工的玩偶會(huì)如此受孩子歡迎。____________________________________________________________________________________________________Bynomeanshadheexpectedtheseprocesseddollstobesopopularamongchildren.Pleaseuseactionchainandactionscenetomakeastory.Whatwouldamotherdowhenshesawherlostchildbeingbroughttoherbyapoliceofficer?write

Whenthepolicemangentlyhandedthelostchildbacktothemother,herreactionwasamixtureofoverwhelmingjoyandprofoundrelief.60字左右___________________________________________________________________________________動(dòng)作鏈：沖過去，蹲下，擁抱心理描寫：激動(dòng)、感激語言描寫：對(duì)孩子、對(duì)警察人物不遺漏：與警察的互動(dòng)Whenthepolicem