2026屆讀后續(xù)寫訓練（三）高考真題篇022025I卷第①句第②句第③句第④句第⑤句The“321”Principle（十句五定法）

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原文解碼(whattoread)讀原文MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.when

(time)初夏舉辦小型聚會前what（conflict沖突）籌備聚會，妻子準備零食，“我”整理后院where(setting場景)emotionalchange期待who(character)我、妻子theme讀原文Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn‘tcountedon（依靠；期望；料想到）:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50poundballoffire（比喻精力旺盛，充滿激情，有時候甚至難以控制的人，尤指小孩兒）.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockover（撞到）myniece'ssmallboysandmysixmontholdgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.when

(time)聚會進行時，哥哥到達后what（conflict沖突）哥哥帶狗Toby赴約，“我”因擔心狗撞到孩子心狗撞到孩子，要求哥哥看住狗并讓其待在后院where(setting場景)emotionalchange擔憂、謹慎who(character)我、哥哥、Tobytheme讀原文Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.when

(time)聚會期間，晚飯后what（conflict沖突）起初一切順利，Toby在后院消耗精力，后天下雨，大家進屋where(setting場景)emotionalchange平靜轉突發(fā)who(character)我、哥哥、眾人、Tobytheme讀原文Itwasanawkwardmoment.I

didn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn'thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.when

(time)眾人進屋后，因Toby去留問題產生分歧時what（conflict沖突）就Toby是否進屋陷入尷尬，哥哥最終決定離開where(setting場景)emotionalchange尷尬、不悅who(character)我、哥哥themeAfewdayspassed,andIhadn‘theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted（離開）.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetover（克服，恢復，原諒）

it,Ireasoned.（推斷）when

(time)聚會結束幾天后what（conflict沖突）“我”聯(lián)系哥哥希望他再來，遭拒后認為他會消氣where(setting場景)emotionalchange意外、不以為意who(character)我、哥哥themeTwomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother'sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirtyfiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.when

(time)聚會結束兩個月后what（conflict沖突）妻子建議“我”聯(lián)系哥哥，“我”起初抗拒，后良心不安，換位思考理解哥哥處境及Toby對他的意義where(setting場景)emotionalchange愧疚、醒悟who(character)我、妻子、哥哥themePara.whowhatwhenemotion1

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我、妻子我、哥哥、Toby我、哥哥、眾人、Toby我、哥哥我、哥哥我、妻子、哥哥籌備聚會，妻子準備零食，“我”整理后院哥哥帶狗Toby赴約，“我”因擔心狗撞到孩子，要求哥哥看住狗并讓其待在后院起初一切順利，Toby在后院消耗精力，后天下雨，大家進屋就Toby是否進屋陷入尷尬，哥哥最終決定離開“我”聯(lián)系哥哥希望他再來，遭拒后認為他會消氣妻子建議“我”聯(lián)系哥哥，“我”起初抗拒，后良心不安，換位思考理解哥哥處境及Toby對他的意義初夏舉辦小型聚會前聚會進行時，哥哥到達后聚會期間，晚飯后眾人進屋后，因Toby去留問題產生分歧時聚會結束幾天后聚會結束兩個月后期待擔憂、謹慎平靜轉突發(fā)尷尬、不悅意外、不以為意愧疚、醒悟注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault._______________________本段要詳細描寫“我”是如何認識到自己錯誤的，最終內心的愧疚感必須轉化為“必須去道歉”的具體行動決心。①whatwasmyfault?②howdidIdo?③whatdidIdecidetodoandwhatdidweprepare?Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.______本段描寫和解場面：抵達時的緊張、真誠的道歉、哥哥漸進的反應，并可以利用Toby的動作作為“催化劑”來打破僵局，最終以一個象征和解的開放式動作（如開門邀請）結尾。①whoansweredthedoor?Whatweretheirreaction?②whatdidIsayanddo?Whatwasmybrother’sresponse?③whatdidwedotogether?④whatwasthetheme?忽略哥哥“妻子去世、健康不佳”的背景，續(xù)寫時僅簡單道歉，未體現(xiàn)對哥哥情感需求的理解，導致情節(jié)單薄。例如：只寫“我向哥哥說對不起”，未提及Toby對哥哥的特殊意義，偏離人物動機。?常見誤讀案例貳

構思邏輯(whattowrite)情節(jié)構思三原則?邏輯連貫：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________細節(jié)支撐：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________呼應主旨：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“我”意識到錯誤后主動道歉，符合前文“良心不安”的鋪墊；帶妻子做的餅干（呼應前文妻子的角色）和對Toby的關懷，體現(xiàn)誠意。?通過Toby的反應（搖尾巴、嗅餅干）緩和氣氛，用哥哥“眼神軟化”“聲音沙啞”等細節(jié)展現(xiàn)情緒變化。?結尾以擁抱和解，強調親情的修復，呼應“換位思考與包容”的主題。續(xù)寫線索：反思過錯——電話留言道歉——約定見面——帶餅干登門——擁抱沉默——談心和解——領悟親情叁

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Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault._______________________Iletthemleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.

Iheadedtomybrother’shome.Ifeltguilty(內疚的）.詞匯：guilty；ashamed；embarrassed；awkward.Howtoshowguiltindifferentways?情緒描寫表情描寫（五官）動作描寫（肢體語言）語言描寫詞塊和句的積累scene1:Discoveringthetruth,theoldmanrealizedhismisjudgment,hewasdeeplyashamedofhisbehaviorAwaveof______washedoverhim,makingithardforhimtobreathe.tip1：具體描寫使文章內容更生動，更

有表現(xiàn)力。shameThenextfewdays_________hisconsciencebeingtortureddeeply,feelinglikesittinginpinsandneedles.(如坐針氈）witnessedscene2:Theoldmanfailedtokeephispromiseanddidn’tknowwhattodonext.hewasashamed.He_______hisfacewithhishandsinshameforwhathehaddone.coveredscene3:Theoldmanmisunderstoodhisson.tip2：動作描寫使表達多樣化。第一段情節(jié)細化（圍繞“Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.”）

1.愧疚感加劇，回憶沖突細節(jié)短語：sinkin（逐漸意識到）、replaythesceneinmymind（在腦海中回放場景）hurthisfeelingsdeeply（深深傷害他的感情）actwithoutthinking（不假思索地行動）athoughtstruckme（我突然想到）1.這只狗對他來說不僅僅是寵物，這是他的家人。Thedogwasn’tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.

2.我的不體諒迫使他和托比冒雨離開，無人理解。MyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.

第一段情節(jié)細化（圍繞“Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.”）

一.愧疚感加劇，回憶沖突細節(jié)3.他離開時失望的表情一直縈繞在我腦海。Thememoryofhisdisappointedfacewhenheleftkepthauntingme.

4.一想到這，我就感到內疚和羞愧，呼吸困難。Atthethoughtofthis,afeelingofguiltandshamewashedoverme,makingithardformetobreathe.

5.一個內心的聲音一直在我的腦海中回蕩，我不能再拖延這個道歉了。AninnervoicekeptechoinginmymindthatIcouldn’tdelaythisapologyanylonger.

二.理解哥哥的處境，自責情緒加深6.當我告訴妻子我的計劃時，她表示支持并建議烤一些哥哥最喜歡吃的餅干。WhenItoldmywifemyplan,shewassupportiveand

suggestedbakingsomeofmybrother’sfavoritebiscuits7.我抓起鑰匙，跳進車里，毫不猶豫地往哥哥家去。Igrabbedmykeys,jumpedintothecarandheadedto

mybrother’shomewithoutasecondthought.三.下定決心道歉，計劃行動8.我不能讓這個誤會毀掉我們的關系。Icouldn’tletthismisunderstandingruinourrelationship.Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.______Mybrotheropenedthedoor.

Iapologizetomybrother.Tobywaggedhistail.Wesattogetherinthelivingroom.tips:everycreaturehasasoul/spirit(萬物有靈）第二段情節(jié)細化（圍繞“Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.”）

1.到達門前的緊張與猶豫短語：heartracing（心跳加速）、hesitateforasecond（猶豫片刻）、gathermycourage（鼓起勇氣）、knockonthedoor（敲門）、prayforforgiveness（祈求原諒）1.我的心因緊張砰砰直跳。我深吸一口氣，敲了門。Myheartpoundedwithnervousness.Takingadeepbreath,Iknockedatthedoor.1.我抬手敲門時，手在顫抖。MyhandstrembledasIliftedthemtoknock.2.見面時的互動（哥哥開門，Toby的反應）短語：openthedoorslowly（慢慢開門）、alookofsurprise（驚訝的表情）、Tobybarksoftly（Toby輕輕吠叫）、waghistail（搖尾巴）、stareatmesilently（靜靜地盯著我）3.我看到了一個驚訝的表情，夾雜著哥哥的冷漠和惱怒。Isawalook/expressionofsurprise,mixedwithindifferenceandannoyancefrommybrother.2.托比沖了出來，瘋狂地搖尾巴。Tobyrushedout,wagginghistailwildly.

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Toby立刻認出了我，用鼻子蹭我的手，仿佛在勸他原諒。Tobyrecognizedmeatonceandnuzzledmyhand,asifurginghimtoforgive.真誠道歉，解釋自己的疏忽短語：saysorryfromthebottomofmyheart（發(fā)自內心道歉）、admitmymistake（承認錯誤）、explainmycarelessness（解釋我的疏忽）、askforforgiveness（請求原諒）、expressregret（表達后悔）5.他接過餅干，示意我進去。Hetookthebiscuitsandsignaledmetoenter.6.當我們坐在舒適的客廳時，尷尬慢慢消失了，取而代之的是故事，笑聲和淚水。Aswesatinthelivingroom,theawkwardnessslowlyfaded,replacedbystories,laughterandtears.

4.我來真誠地道歉，非常抱歉給你造成的痛苦。Icametoapologizesincerely.I’msosorryforthePainIcausedyou.

4.抱歉讓你陷入那樣的境地，我本該想到你有多不容易。I’msorryIputyouinthatposition.Ishould’vethoughtabouthowhardthingshavebeenforyou.

4.哥哥的回應與和解短語：softenhistone（語氣緩和）、letoutasigh（嘆了口氣）、admithisownstubbornness（承認自己的固執(zhí)）、invitemein（邀請我進屋）、patchthingsup（修復關系）

5.關系緩和的溫馨細節(jié)短語：shareacupoftea（一起喝茶）、chatlikeoldtimes（像以前一樣聊天）、Tobycurlupnearby（Toby在旁邊蜷著）、asenseofrelief（如釋重負）、restoreourbond（修復我們的關系）8.通過坦誠的對話，我們逐漸治愈了傷口，打破了我們之間的僵局。Throughopen-heartedconversations,wegraduallyhealedthewoundandbroketheicywallbetweenus.7.他拍了拍我的肩膀說：“或許我們都被自尊困住了?！盚epattedmyshoulderandsaid,“Iguesswebothletourpridegetintheway.”8.我們聊天時，我知道我們之間的隔閡終于在消除。Aswetalked,Iknewtheriftbetweenuswasfinallyhealing.親情友情主題升華Asthesayinggoes,“Honestyisthebestpolicy./Nopains,nogains./Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”

俗話說：“誠實是上策。/不勞無獲。/患難見真情?！?.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadafullunderstandingofthesignificanceoffamily.

就是在那一刻，我完全明白了家庭的重要性。3.Theirfriendshipgrewstrongerastheyembracedeachother'simperfectionsandstoodbyeachother'sside.

隨著彼此接納對方的不完美并始終相互支持，他們的友誼變得更加牢固。4.Thereisnoshameinadmittingourmistakesorforgivingeachotherbecauseweareafamily.

承認錯誤或原諒彼此并不可恥，因為我們是一家人。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Thedogwasn‘tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.MyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.Atthethoughtofthis,afeelingofguiltandshamewashedoverme,makingithardformetobreathe.AninnervoicekeptechoinginmymindthatIcouldn’tdelaythisapologyanylonger.whenItoldmywifemyplan,shewassupportiveandsuggestedbakingsomeofmybrother'sfavoritebiscuits.Igrabbedmykeys,jumpedintothecarandheadedtomybrother'shomewithoutasecondthought.

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Myheartpoundedwithnervousness.Takingadeepbreath,Iknockedatthedoor.ThedoorcreakedopenandoutrushedToby,withhistailwaggingwildly.ThenIsawalookofsurprise,mixedwithindifferenceandannoyancefrommybrother.Itookadeepbreathandbegan,"Brother,Icametoapologizesincerely.I’msosorryforthepainIcausedyou.

Tobyisasmuchapartofyourfamilyasanyhumanmember,andIshouldhaveshowngreaterempathy."Almostinstantly,hiseyeswetwithtearsashetookthebiscuitsandsignaledmetoenter.Aswesatinthecozylivingroom,theawkwardnessslowlyfaded,replacedbystories,laughterandtears.Throughopen-heartedconversations,wegraduallyhealedthewoundandbroketheicywallbetweenus,(provingthatempathy,forgivenessandcommunicationarethetruebridgestomendbrokenbonds.)肆

實踐演練寫作示例?Irealized