1、,話題寫作（九） 情感表達(dá),第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理,【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題來(lái)源于學(xué)生日常生活中對(duì)某件事情的經(jīng)歷及感受,常見(jiàn)的情感類表達(dá)有愛(ài)、快樂(lè)、微笑、幸福、痛苦和煩惱等。,每個(gè)人生活中都要面對(duì)各種各樣的困難。該怎樣緩解自己的壓力呢?請(qǐng)你以“Less Pressure, Better Life”為題,根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇演講稿。,要求 (1)不要逐字逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; (2)語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)意連貫; (3)詞數(shù):100左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯 under much pressure, deal with, change ones mind, think about, instead

2、 of, cheer up, for help, just need to Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Thank you for your coming today. Im very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. Thats all.Thank you.,【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1.要點(diǎn)提煉:主題是講面對(duì)壓力,如何來(lái)處理。文章主要有三個(gè)要點(diǎn): (1)壓力概述;(2)減壓措施;(3)自己的觀點(diǎn)。 2.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 3.確定人稱:第三人稱,第一人稱

3、。,【寫作架構(gòu)】,【基礎(chǔ)寫作】 .寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補(bǔ)全下列各句。) 1.我們應(yīng)該盡力采取一些措施去處理它。(try to do sth.) We should to deal with it. 2.我們可以改變我們的想法。(change ones mind) We can . 3.想一想你最喜歡的人或事而不是那些麻煩。(instead of) your favourite people or things .,try to take some measures,change our minds,Think about,instead of those troubles,4.我們可以參加更

4、多的活動(dòng),例如音樂(lè)俱樂(lè)部和足球隊(duì)。(such as) We can take part in more activities, and the football team. 5.我們可以盡可能多地發(fā)現(xiàn)機(jī)會(huì)去和別人交流。(asas) We can find as many communicate with others.,such as the music club,opportunities as possible to,.句子升格(按括號(hào)中的要求改寫句子。) 1.Some students study very hard. They are still poor in their studi

5、es.(用though改寫句子) 2.Others think they have much homework to do.And they have no time to play.(用sothat改寫句子),Though some students study very hard, they are still poor in their studies.,Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.,3.We can take part in more activities.Al

6、l these activities can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.(用定語(yǔ)從句改寫句子) 4.We can reduce our stress by taking the above suggestions.(用only by 位于句首改寫句子),We can take part in more activities which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed.,Only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stre

7、ss.,【連句成文】 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Thank you for your coming today. Im very glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. When it comes to pressure, it is a serious problem in todays world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Though some students study

8、very hard, they are still poor in their studies.They often worry about their exams.Others think they have so much homework to do that they have no time to play.,We should try to take some measures to deal with it.First, we can change our minds.Think about our favourite people or things instead of th

9、ose troubles. Second, we can take part in more activities, such as the music club and the football team, which can relieve our anxiety and make us relaxed. Finally, we can find as many opportunities as possible to communicate with others,such as our parents, teachers and friends. As for me, Im alway

10、s under pressure, too.However, it doesnt matter.I think only by taking the above suggestions can we reduce our stress. Thats all. Thank you!,【參考諺語(yǔ)】 1.A smile makes you ten years younger. 笑一笑,十年少。 2.Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbours. 悲喜常相伴。 3.Laughter is the best medicine. 笑是最好的藥。 4.Worry kills

11、 more men than work. 憂慮比勞累更傷人。,【相關(guān)短語(yǔ)】 thanks for因感謝; make new friends 結(jié)交新朋友; look after/take care of 照顧; keep in touch 保持聯(lián)系; be friendly to 對(duì)友好; bring back 帶回,【亮點(diǎn)句型】 導(dǎo)入主題句 1.Among all my friends, Li Hua impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful. 2.My grandmother is the person who I want to t

12、hank most. She has helped me a lot. 3.The family is the greatest. No matter you are happy, painful or lost, it will gently on your way, quietly with your life. 4.There is sadness as well as happiness in our life so cherish what you have.,文章發(fā)展、過(guò)渡句 1.He encouraged me to be brave. He told me, “Youd bet

13、ter speak slowly and clearly, and in this way, you can make yourself understood more easily.” 2.As soon as she found out my problems, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. 3.With her encouragement, I have made great progress. 4.He held my hand tightly. In this way,I was not afraid any

14、more. 5.He never scolds me.But I always listen to him and follow him.,文章結(jié)尾句 1.I really want to say “Thank you for helping me. I love you!” to my grandmother. 2.I will always remember her kindness and be grateful. 3.What he said and what he did will influence me all my life.,A “你養(yǎng)我長(zhǎng)大,我陪你變老。”父母親一直在為我們

15、的成長(zhǎng)默默付出,成長(zhǎng)要學(xué)會(huì)感受愛(ài)、回報(bào)愛(ài)。今天是父親節(jié),是我們向爸爸表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn),寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。 要點(diǎn) (1)給我生命,一直照顧我成長(zhǎng); (2)努力工作,為我提供良好的生活和教育條件; (3)擁有愛(ài)心,教我學(xué)會(huì) (4)今天,我要為您(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))。,注意 (1)詞數(shù):90左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。 You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth

16、.,One possible version: You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time. When I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to le

17、t me live a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day. You are also a man who has a heart full of love. You are ready to help people in need. It is you who teach me to be a,kind person. In the past, I never said “I love you” to you. Today is F

18、athers Day. I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.,B2019東營(yíng) Sunday Mail青少年專欄開展“對(duì)身邊的人說(shuō)一句話”主題征文活動(dòng),這句話或許是對(duì)父母的一句“我愛(ài)你”,或許是對(duì)老師、同學(xué)的一句“謝謝你”,或許是對(duì)身邊人的一句“對(duì)不起”等。請(qǐng)將“I want to say ”補(bǔ)充完整,并以此為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,如:I want to say thank you 等。談?wù)勀阆胝f(shuō)那句話的原因以及發(fā)生在那句話背后的故事,并說(shuō)說(shuō)你的感受。 要求 (1)認(rèn)真審題,把握要點(diǎn); (2)行文連貫,條理清晰,不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校、姓名等信息; (3)詞數(shù):100左右。,One possible version: I want to say tha