1、The Beauty of Writing,Why is writing so tough?,Input,Output,高考作文高分卷的特點,外在美：第一印象很重要！書寫清楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當，卷面整潔。 結構美：有合理的段落層次，多為3段式，條理清晰；每段有每段的主題。,詞匯美：詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。likebe fond of,be addicted to/ helpdo sb a favor 句式美：運用得當?shù)母呒壘涫浇Y構可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。 銜接美：使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞，對寫一篇有“英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下

2、銜接自然、條理清晰。,你校英語社團部要組織一次英語賽， 就“是否應該縮短中學生在校時間為8小時”這一論題進行辯論，請你作為正方代表，寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點如下：1.保證充足睡眠 2. 提高學習效率 3. 增加自主學習時間 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫 3. 辯論稿的開頭已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that,語法篇,這第一句寫的,I strongly recommend that This is right we as a senior high student.,I

3、strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.,你再看這開頭,I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows.,這動詞錯的,Short students time in school can have a good effect

4、on study, it can important for students study xiaolu, and increase students own time.,原來改書面表達就是改錯,In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are important. Because of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce s

5、tudy time also can improve the quality of our school life.,這詞匯,你再看這詞匯,欣賞一下這篇文章的句式結構,If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time, study efficiently is expected to be enhanced. Moreover, extra-curricular time will make up more of the students schedule. That is to say, c

6、hances are we can make a better use of our time.,卷面篇,養(yǎng)眼的,當批到下午兩點看到了它們,太擠了,太亂了,太空了,太潦草了,太花了,太沒譜了,太沒臉了,老師最恨的作文,大鍋，標點呢？段呢？,姐，你長發(fā)及腰的字體難掩你每句都錯的事實啊！,神，你別抄閱讀理解行不？俺們也會看試卷的！,老師最喜歡的作文,Great minds think alike!,一點提示,好練的字,筆,筆,過長,答題不可越界,作文五檔：（ 從教師閱卷印象角度劃分）,漂漂亮亮 （2125分） 有模有樣 （1620分） 馬馬虎虎 （1115分） 稀里糊涂 （610分） 一塌糊涂 （

7、05分）,Three Rules:,1.You learn to write by writing. 2. There is no good writing; only good rewriting. 3. When in dout, refer to Rule No. 1 and 2.,Five Steps:,Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.,高考英語寫作中怎樣使用復雜結構,1.適當?shù)恼Z態(tài) 2.使用不定式 3.使用過去分詞 4.使用V.+ing形式 5.使用名詞性從句 6.使用定語從句 7.使用虛擬語氣 8

8、.使用倒裝句,感嘆句,怎樣運用復雜結構：,怎樣運用復雜結構：,1.主動轉(zhuǎn)被動,People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般),that the conference be put off. (高級),The advisor is expected to work 4 hours a week .,We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week .,It is suggested,2. 使用不定式,3. 使用過去分詞,In order to earn money by myself and broa

9、den my horizons,She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般), she walked out of the room . (高級),，I intend to look for a part-time job as a salesman. （為了獨立賺錢和拓寬視野）,Followed by many students,4. 使用v-ing形式,2） , Ill visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.（

10、天氣允許的話）,1）Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般),Now our School has three teachers，,Weather permitting,teaching 48 pupils.,伴隨狀語,What is the most important is that,5. 使用名詞性從句,2. I can help children improve their English.(最為重要的是),1.I am sorry. I didnt reply without delay.,I am s

11、orry that I didnt reply without delay.,6. 使用定語從句,1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般),The girl was highly spoken of. (高級),2)maybe I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant_.(這將豐富我的生活),which is able to enrich my life.,which will make my life col

12、orful.,whose composition was well written,enriching my life,7. 使用虛擬語氣,我相信如果你是我，你也會做出同樣的選擇。,I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.,8. 使用倒裝句、感嘆句,earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不僅能獨立賺錢),1. I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it.

13、 (我多么希望),2. not only but also引起的倒裝,How I wish,Not only can I,高考英語寫作中要學會使用恰當?shù)年P聯(lián)詞,III.常用的連接詞 1.表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內(nèi)容 另外，還有：whats more; besides; also; moreover; in addition 2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,3. 表示因果關系 因為，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; t

14、hus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else,5. 表示時間關系 當 的時候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 直到才: notuntil 一就 : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從 :since 從那時起: from then on,6. 表示特定的順序關系 首

15、先:firstly 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end 7. 換一種方法表述 換句話說: in other words; that is to say;,8. 進行舉例說明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason 9. 用于陳述事實 實際

16、上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實話 : to tell you the truth,10. 對一個話題進行總結 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word, finally, in conclusion, generally speaking, as you know, in the end , 其它常用到的副詞 therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; per