1、English writing,哇，好壯觀！,大漠孤煙直，長河落日圓！,7-9年級分別完成三、四、五級目標(biāo),好朦朧，好有意境！,7-9年級分別完成三、四、五級目標(biāo),枯藤老樹昏鴉，小橋流水人家！,The percent of an English composition in the test paper英語作文占比,15/120=12.5%,A good English composition plays an important role in getting good grades !,初中英語新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn),能根據(jù)寫作要求，收集，準(zhǔn)備素材 能獨立起草短文，短信等，并在教師指導(dǎo)下進(jìn)行修改 能使

2、用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系 能簡單描述人物或事件 能根據(jù)所給圖示或表格寫出簡單的段落或操作說明 初中英語作文分為四等。 一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分； 四等文：0-4分。,7-9年級分別完成三、四、五級目標(biāo),說明： 語言表述：單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點符號、大小寫等錯誤， 每兩處扣0.5分，同一錯誤不重復(fù)扣分。其它情況酌情扣分。 詞數(shù)（1分）：全文詞數(shù)不足80個扣1分。 卷面（1分）：卷面不整潔，書寫凌亂，扣1分。 本大題的最后得分如有0.5分，則入為整數(shù)。,話題項目表 1. 個人情況（Personal information）: 姓名、年齡、身高，家庭情況，所在的學(xué)校

3、、班級、工作等 2. 家庭、朋友和周圍的人 （Family, friends and people around）: 3. 周圍的環(huán)境（Personal environments） 4. 日常生活（Daily routines） 5. 學(xué)校生活（School life） 6. 興趣與愛好（Interests and hobbies） 7. 個人情感（Emotions） 8. 人際關(guān)系（Interpersonal relationships）,書面表達(dá),9.計劃與愿望（Plans and intentions) 10.節(jié)假日活動（Festivals, holidays and celebrati

4、on) 11.購物（Shopping） 12.飲食（Food and drink） 13.健康（Health） 14.天氣（Weather） 15.文娛與體育（Entertainment and sports） 16.旅游和交通（Travel and transport）,17.語言學(xué)習(xí)（Language learning） 18.自然（Nature） 19.世界和環(huán)境（The world and the environment） 20.科普知識與現(xiàn)代技術(shù)(Popular science and modern technology) 21.熱點話題（Topical issues） 22.歷史與

5、地理（History and geography） 23.社會（Society） 24.文學(xué)和藝術(shù)（Literature and art）,Lets learn to write an English composition !,basic steps(基本寫作步驟),search（審） list（列） add(加: 開頭和結(jié)尾) connect(連) beautify(美：諺語/例子) Check;要盡量剔除錯誤,Search 審,一審主題（寫什么） 二審體裁（記敘、說明、議論、夾敘夾議） 三審時態(tài)（過去時、現(xiàn)在時、將來時） 四審人稱（第一人稱、第二人稱、第三人 稱） 五審內(nèi)容要點（一定要在

6、試卷中畫出，免得寫的時候忘記，導(dǎo)致跑題）,寫作第一步,Peter 出生于英國，去年來到中國的一所中學(xué)教英語。有一天，在他回家的路上,遇見他的中國朋友李雷，李雷告訴Peter 他住在哪兒，并邀請他去家里吃晚飯。Peter很高興，因為他很喜歡吃中國菜。,主題: Peter 李雷 體裁: 說明 時態(tài):一般過去時 人稱:第三人稱 內(nèi)容要點: 1.Peter 出生于英國。 2. 去年他來到中國，并在一所中學(xué)教英語。 3. 有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter正好遇見他的 中國朋友李雷。 4. 李雷告訴Peter他住在哪兒。 5. 然后他邀請他去家里吃晚飯。 6. Peter很高興，因為他很喜歡吃中國菜,L

7、ist 列,寫作第二步,列出要點，進(jìn)行翻譯。,譯關(guān)鍵詞,連詞成句,連句成段,Peter 出生于英國，去年來到中國的一所中學(xué)教英語。有一天，在他回家的路上,遇見他的中國朋友李雷，李雷告訴Peter 他住在哪兒，并邀請他去家里吃晚飯。Peter很高興，因為他很喜歡吃中國菜。,Peter was born in the UK He went to China last year,and taught in a junior high school. One day, on his way home,he happened to meet his Chinese friend Li Lei. Li L

8、ei told Peter where he lived Li Lei invited Peter to his home to have dinner Peter is so happy as he likes Chinese food a lot.,Peter 出生于英國。 2. 去年他來到中國，并在一所中學(xué)教英語。 3. 有一天,在他回家的路上,Peter正好遇見他的中國朋友李雷。 4. 李雷告訴Peter他住在哪兒。 5. 然后他邀請他去家里吃晚飯。 6. Peter很高興，因為他很喜歡吃中國菜。,Steps towards writing a good paragraph,Step

9、2 How to change it into a well- organized 組織paragraph,The structure of a composition,Topic sentence,Supporting details,Reason 1,Reason 2,Reason 3,Conclusion,Add (加: 開頭和結(jié)尾),加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)， 開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。,How to add？ 主題是 我的朋友Nancy，她很友好. 第一段直接說 Nancy is extremely kind. 觀點明確，這一句足矣。 第二段：分2

10、-3點說為什么他友好。 1. when I am tired,she. 2. when I need help ,she . 3.when I am puzzled,she. 第三段：經(jīng)過第二段的論證，可以得出結(jié)論。但請注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升華。也可以提出希望和建議等。如，How kind she is!,開頭方法:開門見山,解釋和描述主 題,提供背景知識,小故事 引路,提出問題,倒敘,懸念, 名言,描寫,等等. 結(jié)尾方法:總結(jié)主要觀點,重復(fù)開頭或 題目,提出結(jié)論,提出問題, 暗示答案,引言,故事, 等等.,Write the beginning and the ending for

11、 the report,I listen to music while driving to work. I listen to music when Im thinking. I listen to music when Im happy. Even when Im sad, I listen to music, too. I cant live without music,Music plays an important part in my life.,connect 連,恰當(dāng)運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部分銜接自然。,并列：and, as well as, or 轉(zhuǎn)折：but,

12、 yet, however 時間關(guān)系：first(Firstly), second(Secondly), third(Thirdly) before, after 空間關(guān)系：behind, above, below, to the right 遞進(jìn)：also，and，too， then 因果：because，thus，so，otherwise 列舉：for example，such as,Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.

13、 We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,在對的基礎(chǔ)上，沖刺滿分作文。,beautify 美,諺語,高級詞匯,加諺語(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,鍛煉對學(xué)生有好處,It is good for us students

14、 to take exercise,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.,集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí),We should concentrate on our studies.,As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加諺語(Proverb/saying) 可用于開頭和結(jié)尾，多是結(jié)尾。,加諺語(Prove

15、rb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,Which is better?,我希望你能幫助我。,A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .,我認(rèn)為學(xué)英語很有趣。,我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect th

16、e environment.,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to

17、visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our repo

18、rt. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,時態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、人稱性別、短語及單詞的拼寫包括大小寫等錯誤 字?jǐn)?shù)、內(nèi)容要點、主謂一致、 習(xí)

19、慣用法、單詞拼寫、大小寫 及標(biāo)點符號 格式是否錯誤,Check 查,要盡量剔除錯誤,書面表達(dá)寫作技巧,審,列,加,連,美,查,寫作的基本原則,1.句子要正確：1).Do you know where is the Peoples Park ?,2). There are many visitors enjoy the dish.,Many visitors enjoy the dish. There are many visitors who enjoy the dish.,Do you know where the Peoples Park is?,3.句子要連貫 Go into the p

20、ark. Go forward. Cross the street. Turn right. After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right.,2. 善用復(fù)合句； a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble. We need to help the people who are in trouble. b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.,4.句子要有邏輯性 Im very interested in computer and won first prize last year. I was very interested in computer and won first prize last year. 5.句子要避免過多重復(fù). You will conti