1、本系列資料簡介,專題一 2012屆高考英語書面表達（圖畫式作文）專題指導與練習講評 專題二 2012屆高考英語書面表達（文字提綱式作文）專題指導與練習講評 專題三 2012屆高考英語書面表達（圖表式作文）專題指導與練習講評 專題四 2012屆高考英語書面表達（開放式作文）專題指導與練習講評,專題一2012屆高考英語書面表達（圖畫式作文）專題指導與練習講評目錄,一、2012屆高考英語書面表達（圖畫式作文）專題指導（含課件和文字稿） 二、2012屆高考英語書面表達（圖畫式作文）練習講評 2012屆高考英語書面表達練習講評一（含課件和文字稿） 2012屆高考英語書面表達練習講評二（含課件和文字稿）

2、2012屆高考英語書面表達練習講評三（含課件和文字稿） 2012屆高考英語書面表達練習講評四（含課件和文字稿）,2012江蘇高考說明高考英語書面表達示例2-看圖作文（亦為2011高考題）： 看圖作文的 “圖”不局限于某一類型的圖，如漫畫、廣告，也包括其他圖片、照片等情景材料?？忌鷤兛筛鶕?jù)圖示的寓意、內(nèi)容或情節(jié)線索，自己組織文字，進行描述、敘述、比較或表達思想觀。作文應覆蓋提示的要點，但應避免僅根據(jù)提示文字作簡單翻譯。因此，圖畫式作文要求考生不僅具有一定的觀察分析能力，還要有較強的語言表達能力、想象力和邏輯思維能力。,圖畫式作文就是通過圖畫提供的圖像信息寫一篇短文，包括敘述一個故事，或通過幾幅相

3、關(guān)的圖畫說明某個問題或得出結(jié)論。圖畫式作文就內(nèi)容而言，可以寫觀察到的內(nèi)容，也可以根據(jù)合理想象適當進行發(fā)揮來補充一些內(nèi)容；就表達方式而言，可以單純地理解、說明，也可以在說明中加以描寫、敘述。,寫好圖畫式作文的要求是：認真審圖，確立主題，提煉要點，展開聯(lián)想或發(fā)表感想，變點為句，連句成篇。要達到這些要求，我們就必須認真審圖，善于利用圖中人物間的關(guān)系、人物的對話、人物的活動及所處場所，以及圖（表）中的文字說明和標識來提煉要點；要圍繞主題展開合理的想象，切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想或感想。 如何寫好這種類型的書面表達，本課件結(jié)合兩個實例做些具體的指導。,實例一（2011年江蘇卷） 下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了

4、女兒為回家媽媽拿包的情 景。請根據(jù)你對這幅照片的理解用英語寫一 篇短文。你的短文應包含以下內(nèi)容： 描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、 動作等等； 結(jié)合自身實際，談談你的感想； 舉例說明你能為家長減負做些什么。 注意： 可參照圖中文字及下面文章開頭所 給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象； 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計 入總詞數(shù)； 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially

5、 from their own children.,總體分析 這是一篇漫畫類作文,是江蘇考試說明中一直出現(xiàn),但是首次露面的題型。也是江蘇自主命題以來，開放程度最大的試題。參照圖中文字及下面文章開 頭所給提示我們發(fā)現(xiàn)所談的話題其實非常傳統(tǒng)，體現(xiàn)的是考生所熟悉的“感恩”的內(nèi)容 。但是圖中的提示，與其他省市以往的中文提示不同，這次使用了英文提示，但是英文提示并不難。這幅圖形象清晰明了，考生只要注意觀察，描述圖的內(nèi)容難度應該不是很大的。難點在于試題要求的第二和第三點即是拿高分的關(guān)鍵點所在。,在寫圖畫式作文時，最重要的是理解圖畫所描述的基本事實，掌握它所表達的主題和梗概，只要能充分運用想象并適當發(fā)揮就可

6、以有條理地表達，寫出圖畫中心意思；還要結(jié)合圖畫內(nèi)容發(fā)表自己的看法或感想。甚至還要舉例說明（就像我們今天所講的2011江蘇卷）。表達時尤其要注意句與句、段與段之間的意思連貫，力求做到層次分明、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，準確地傳遞信息。,一、確立主題,The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. 根據(jù)照片和文字說明（包括開頭句和照片中的文字），我們可以確立表達的主題是“感

7、恩父母，為媽媽減負”。體裁是議論文。,認真看圖，結(jié)合文字和圖畫，確立所要表達的主題 是什么。,二、提煉要點,本題提煉要點的關(guān)鍵是結(jié)合文字（中英文）看懂照片所反映的內(nèi)容。 人物： 小女孩和她的媽媽 情景和動作： 女兒為回家的媽媽拿包 媽媽蹲著；兩個人都面帶笑容,圍繞確立的主題，仔細看圖，初步列出圖中的要點。,寫好本篇書面表達的關(guān)鍵是處理好題目中的第二點和第三點的要求。因此考生要根據(jù)這兩點要求首先是結(jié)合自身實際的談感想，其次是舉例說明。 全文要求字數(shù)150個左右，因此在談感想時要更合理，更具邏輯性的表述自己的觀點是十分重要的。舉例的過程中，應當注意例子的簡潔明了，易于說明問題及應和自己的觀點。,三

8、、發(fā)表感想及舉例,描述圖片：一般來說“描述圖片”應該包括人物和事情以及當事人和看到照片的人的感受。 1.遣詞 人物： a little girl and her working mom 事情： The little girl : come to greet her working mom help to remove the bag from moms shoulder . Mom： kneel down 感受： The little girl: be happy Mom: be thankful and delighted We（看照片的人）: be all touched .,四、遣詞造句

9、,2.造句 A little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. The little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. The mom kneels down. The mom is thankful and delighted. Seeing this ,we are all touched.,“聯(lián)系實際談感想”可以結(jié)合自身實際，說一下，自己有沒有做到給父母減負。 遣詞 什么人： my mom and I 我的做法（一般是貶義的）: seldom pay attention

10、to what mother needs and feels , always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return 造句 I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels I always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.,“個人見解”則是根據(jù)“我的做法”給出相應的解決方式。這邊還可以說一下自己將來準備怎么給父母“減負” 遣詞 Do my bit to help with

11、 the everyday washing ,bedroom cleaning. try my best to prepare breakfast myself share mothers daily burden . 造句 I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, I try my best to prepare breakfast myself,. I should share mothers daily burden.,連句成篇要過渡自然，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞或詞語以使

12、表達連貫，再加上文章開頭和結(jié)尾的話照顧到文章的首尾呼應。 本篇書面表達是典型的“三段式”。 第一段題目已經(jīng)給出，因此我們所要處理的就是第二段和第三段。第二段描述照片內(nèi)容（如情景、人物、動作）等等。 第三段結(jié)合自身實際，談談你的感想，并舉例說明你能為家長減負做些什么。,五、連句成篇,連句成篇1 The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work

13、,the little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder . In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels .,連句成篇2 All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could do to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay att

14、ention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.,連句成篇3 Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mothers daily burden.,結(jié)尾處來一個升華句： Being a good daugh

15、ter outweighs being a good student.,范文評析1（五檔）,The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mum. Realizing her mum

16、must be very tired after a days work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mum kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could do to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study

17、, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mothers daily burden. The picture convi

18、nces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student.,第一內(nèi)容要點齊全 對照片的描述恰當?shù)轿?。在“結(jié)合自身實際，談感想，舉例說明”中都點到為止，恰到好 處。 第二高級詞匯較多 a touching moment，removefrom，In response，remindsof sth，totally engaged，do my bit，share，convinces me等等。,第三句型結(jié)構(gòu)高級： 范文共用了7個句子（不包括已經(jīng)給出的開頭句），全部是復合句。最長的句子為“But, total

19、ly engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.”計31個字，占了整個書面表達字數(shù)的三分之一強。 非謂語動詞用得比較多： touching ，to greet ，Realizing，to remove，to show，to let，have the best，engaged，to help，washing，cleaning，prepare，

20、so as to share，to be a good daughter等。囊括了非謂語動詞所有形式：動詞不定式，動詞的-ing形式和過去分詞。 復合句中三大從句“名詞性從句、定語從句、狀語從句”都有。 由此可見：非謂語動詞和復合句的運用受到命題專家的青睞。,第四行文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊： 關(guān)聯(lián)詞（In response，But，or）和過渡句（All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could do to let me have the best.）的使用使得文章行文結(jié)構(gòu)更加緊湊，上下文連貫，信息的準確傳遞水到渠成

21、。 特別是最后一句更是傳神之作。,范文評析2（四檔）（范文引用于2012江蘇卷考試說明）,The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. As it is illustrated in this picture,the tired mom just went home from work. The little gorl helped remove he

22、r mothers heavy bag from her mothers shoulders at the door. The mother was looking at her good girl with a smile on her face. The little girl also wore a smile as she felt delightful and pround that she could do something for her mother. It is just a moving picture. Having seen what the little did i

23、n the picture,I realize that I always thought of myself but ignored how heavy my parents loads were. They must feel much more pressure from both work and family supporting. As their child,I should concentrate more on their conditions. They need us to help them relieve from so much burden. We ought t

24、o take actions right now. We dont have to try to make big changes in their daily lives. Just like help giving them a hand when they are doing housework or when they are occupied with their work,not disturb them. Maybe we can also tell them some funny jokes to make them feel relaxed when they seem to

25、 be tired. Spend more time talking to them,so that they will not feel lonely. Just little action will make them feel better. Dont be selfish,they are the only people who will love us until the ends of the life. And all sons and daughters should love them in return.,第一內(nèi)容要點方面 作者較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，涵蓋了所要表達的主

26、要內(nèi)容。但是文章長度大大超出了規(guī)定的字數(shù)（多達239個），按評分標準要扣分，所以只能判為四檔（16-20分）。對照片的描述到位，但是過于啰嗦。在“結(jié)合自身實際，談感想，舉例說明”中都有好的表現(xiàn)，但是發(fā)揮得太多，反而適得其反。,第二詞匯運用方面 運用了不少高級詞匯。比如：removefrom, ignored, concentrate on, take actions, be occupied with, relaxed等等。 但要注意有些高級詞匯的運用要規(guī)范。如： They need us to help them relieve from so much burden. 要改為：We sho

27、uld relieve them of too much burden. 詞匯運用基本準確（但是要避免像gorl,pround這樣的拼寫方面的低級錯誤）。,第三句型結(jié)構(gòu)方面 作者所運用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)基本準確能夠滿足任務的要求。 全文共17句，用了7個復合句。復合句中三大從句“名詞性從句、定語從句、狀語從句”都有。簡單句、并列句和復合句的交替使用使文章的可讀性增強。 注意運用非謂語動詞:help remove, tired, moving, having seen, make them feel relaxed等等。 由此可見：非謂語動詞和復合句的運用是該文的亮點。 但某些句子明顯就是中文式的句子。

28、如： Just like help giving them a hand when they are doing housework. 要改為：For example, we should give them a hand when they are doing housework,第四行文結(jié)構(gòu)方面 作者應用了一些詞語間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。本文達到了預期的寫作目的。,四檔范文的修改,The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little atte

29、ntion, especially from their own children. As it is illustrated in this picture, the tired mom just went home from work. The little girl helps remove her mothers heavy bag from her shoulder. The mother is looking at her good girl with a smile while the little girl is also wearing a smile. She feels

30、delightful and proud that she can do something for her mother. It is just a moving picture. Seeing the touching picture, I realize that I always think much of myself but less of my parents. As their child, I seldom concentrate on what they need and feel. Now I think we should relieve them of too muc

31、h burden. For example, we should give them a hand when they are doing housework. Whats more, we can also tell them some funny jokes to make them feel relaxed when they are tired or worried. In a word, it is our duty to share parents daily burden.(153words),實例二 請根據(jù)下面四幅圖畫內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文，記述昨天發(fā)生在你叔叔身上的事。 注意：1.

32、詞數(shù)150左右。2.參考詞匯：吊銷駕照 revoke a driving license,1.認真看圖，確立主題 結(jié)合文字和圖畫，確立所要表達的主題是什么。 四幅圖記述了昨天發(fā)生在叔叔身上的事，我們可以確立本篇書面表達的主題是：昨天叔叔酒后開車，出事故而受傷，被吊銷駕照。,2.圍繞主題，提煉要點 圍繞確立的主題，仔細看圖，初步列出每幅圖的要點。,第一幅圖：與朋友聚會，喝酒,第二幅圖：酒后駕車,第三幅圖：出事故受傷,第四幅圖：住院 。警察到場處罰。,3.合理想象，補出要點 將四幅圖連起來并結(jié)合考慮每幅圖中的各個細節(jié)進行想 象，將隱藏的要點補出來,使故事連貫。 第一幅圖：喝酒的地點（可能在朋友家，

33、也可能在小酒館），根據(jù)喝酒的地點確定是誰邀請誰?？赡芤驗楦吲d叔叔酒喝多了喝醉了（為下文鋪墊） 第二幅圖：根據(jù)他說的話：No problem可以推斷：朋友勸他，他沒聽，堅持駕車回家。 第三幅圖：酒后駕車，可以想象開車的情況：蜿蜒向前，撞樹出事故。根據(jù)第四幅圖可推斷他沒有死而是受了傷。警察到現(xiàn)場，將他送往醫(yī)院。 第四幅圖：因傷勢嚴重要住院幾天；警察對他處罰吊銷駕照。,4.確定時態(tài)，譯出要點 確定表達時所用的正確時態(tài)，將圍繞主題初選出的要點和經(jīng)過合理想象補出的要點翻譯出來。 本篇書面表達是記述的昨天發(fā)生在叔叔身上的事，故用過去時態(tài)來表達。,第一幅圖： Yesterday evening my unc

34、le was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk.,第二幅圖： After the meal,his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home,but he didnt to listen to them,saying“No problem” and insisted on doing so.,第三幅圖： He got into the car and drove away.

35、A few minutes later,he was widing his way in the street.And suddenly his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital.,第四幅圖： He had to stay in hospital for several days because of being seriously injured. He was fined by t

36、he police and his driving license was revoked.,5.連句成篇，過渡自然 對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞或詞語以使表達連貫，再加上文章開頭和結(jié)尾的話照顧到文章的首尾呼應。 My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday. How he regretted what he had done!,My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday. Yesterday evening my uncle was i

37、nvited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didnt listen to them, saying “No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the str