1、Writing,1,DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(內(nèi)容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的開頭結(jié)尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (沒有語法錯誤) * With exac

2、tly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (詞語的準(zhǔn)確運用和句式的富于變化),2,Im very pleased to tell you the changes of my life since the reduction of learning load was brought in. Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening，I was of

3、ten forced to do my boring homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since the program of reducing learning load was introduced, my life, however, has become much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure time. After lunch,

4、 I watch TV, read stories and look through newspapers to enrich myself. No longer do I stay up; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 p.m. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.,Structure,Enjoy the following paragraphs:,3,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school.

5、The reasons can be listed as follow. _, most families are too poor to send their children to school. _, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money.,as a result; In addition ; To begin with ; However,To begin with,As a result,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 Use proper linking words,4,_, some parents think there

6、 is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they dont let them go to school. _, some children are not interested in their studies. _, some wouldnt like to go to school.,In my opinion; Finally ; To make matters worse ; In addition,In addition,Finally,To make matters worse,5,As far as

7、Im concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _, the whole society should put great emphasis on childrens education _ theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day.,besides; However ; because ; Therefore,Besides,because,6,Avoid Chinglish! 1) Traffic in Shang

8、hai is too crowded. 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing. 3) Though the transport is good ，but it fades next to our natural resources. 4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will cost us much money to buy one.,Language,heavy.,left,is,take,7,改錯,It built in the 1980s. In our city ,the publi

9、c order is better than other places. Buy a cellphone is too expensive. The public order is very well. At the last ，I hope you can invest here. The government is like investors to come here. Let me introduce this city for you. Thank you for you come. I think you can happy. To my surprised, my father

10、agreed to buy one.,that of,good,likes,to,your coming,be,was,Buying,surprise,Language,8,改錯,A lot of families are much more poor. Im very happy I can write letter to you. Some are not interest in lessons. I think every child is equality. Because of their parents dont have enough money . I can keep tou

11、ch with my family. Some parents think go to school is not good. Every child including girls should have the chance to accept education. There are many families are poor. Some parents in village think that girls are not important as well as boys.,very,interested,equal,going,receive,the,in,a,Language,

12、9,Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用較豐富的句式,When he arrived, he gave me an e-mail immediately. (使用V-ing形式) 2. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (過去分詞),_, he gave me an e-mail immediately.,When arriving,/On his arrival,_,it can never be forgotten.,Once seen,10,3. To his surprise, the li

13、ttle girl knows so many things. (使用名詞性從句) 4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被動語態(tài)),_the little girl knows so many things.,What surprises him is that,_the conference be put off.,It is suggested that,11,5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.

14、(使用強調(diào)句型) 6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虛擬語氣）,_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened.,_the physics exam _your help.,It was not until that,I couldnt have passed but for,without,12,7. I wont believe what he says. (使用狀語 從句) 8. The girl is spoken highly

15、of. Her composition was well written. (用定語從句),_he says, I wont believe.,The girl_ is spoken highly of.,No matter what,whose composition was well written,Whatever,13,9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句),_he come back from Beijing _he was sent abroad.,_make rapid progress.,Study hard, and youll,No sooner had than,Hardly . when.,14,assess,Please learn to Your composition when you finish it from now.,15,書面表達(dá)評價表 項目