1、基礎(chǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練,-學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語動(dòng)詞, Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1

2、968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,句子表達(dá)有何亮點(diǎn)？,寫作中復(fù)合句常見的錯(cuò)誤,1.只有從句，沒有主句,The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so h

3、e could keep calm in the storm., The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.,2.以逗號(hào)代替句號(hào),把兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句當(dāng)成一個(gè)句子, The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face., The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.,3.刻意使用從句，表達(dá)不自然,Th

4、ere are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday., Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday., The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass., The old man thought of his son,

5、with tears coming down from his face.,4.過多地使用并列句組合信息, We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded., It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing., It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowin

6、g., As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.,My English Learning It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in Engli

7、sh. But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,請(qǐng)看范例,從上述例子同學(xué)們可以明白什么樣的句子叫“規(guī)范的英 語句子”。其實(shí)， “規(guī)范的英語句子” 就是我們經(jīng)常講的三種 句子：,A) Simple sentence: Hearing the news, he was happy.,B) Compound sen

8、tence A: He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.,C) Compound sentence B: What he is doing has nothing to do with me.,=When he heard the news, he was happy.,Here are 3 ways to make sentences:,I.巧妙運(yùn)用短語，寫出規(guī)范的簡(jiǎn)單句：,1)借助名詞短語做同位語,如：李立，男，19歲，1986年生；籍貫：廣東。,Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangd

9、ong in 1986.,2)借助介詞短語做定語,如：李飛，男，10歲，棕色短發(fā)，身穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.,如：有了Tom的幫助，我們很快就找到了他們的村子。,With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.,4)借助非謂語動(dòng)詞短語做定語或狀語,如：他們站在大樹下，等待著總統(tǒng)的到來。,They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.,

10、3)借助介詞短語做狀語,II. 巧用連接詞，寫出規(guī)范的并列句：,如：他給我錢，我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.,如：我剛到拐角處，就見到你啦。,He gave me a lot money but I refused.,III. 用好從句和引導(dǎo)詞，寫出規(guī)范的復(fù)合句：,1) 名詞性從句,如：老師生氣。原因：王力遲到。,That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.,2) 定語從句,如：中國(guó)，地處亞洲東部；特點(diǎn)：地大物博、人口眾多。

11、,China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.,3) 狀語從句,如：雷鋒還活在我們心中，我深受感動(dòng)。,I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.,學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語動(dòng)詞, Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern

12、 province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect.,Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.,用一句話表達(dá),不是人人都能學(xué)好英語，小學(xué)生同時(shí)學(xué)漢語和英語反而會(huì)影響漢語學(xué)習(xí)。,學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用復(fù)合句和非謂語動(dòng)詞,第一步：拆分成幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句,不是人人都能學(xué)好英語。 小學(xué)生同時(shí)學(xué)漢語和英語。 這會(huì)影響漢語學(xué)習(xí)。,第二步：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句, Not every

13、one is good at learning English., Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chinese study., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time., This will affect their Chin

14、ese study.,第三步：合并句子,That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study,because not everyone is good at learning English., Not everyone is good at learning English., Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at t

15、he same time., This will affect their Chinese study.,第三步：合并句子,If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study,方法2：,because not everyone is good at learning English.,情景說明 通知： 新光中學(xué)高三年級(jí)學(xué)生將于9月9日去體檢。 體檢地點(diǎn)：第一人民醫(yī)院 體檢時(shí)間：9月9日，星期六 注意： 1

16、、7:45在醫(yī)院門口集合，可以騎車或步行前往； 2、體檢前空腹； 3、在醫(yī)院要保持安靜，聽從醫(yī)生和護(hù)士的安排。,實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí),Notice The students in Senior Three of Xinguang Middle School will go to have a physical examination in the First Peoples Hospital on Saturday, 9th Sept. Well meet at the hospital gate at 7:45. You may either walk there or go there by bike

17、. We are not allowed to eat or drink anything before the examination. Please keep quiet and listen to the doctors and nurses when you are there.,學(xué)會(huì)使用復(fù)合句和非謂語動(dòng)詞,你來試試,參考詞匯： 錯(cuò)別字: wrongly-written characters 網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言：web language,要求：1. 用兩句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容 2. 兩句話要有連貫性,第一句（兩個(gè)信息點(diǎn)）： 1. 學(xué)生作文中出現(xiàn)很多錯(cuò)別字 2.（他們）上網(wǎng)聊天時(shí)經(jīng)常使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。, T

18、here are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions.,The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.,合并句子：, They often use web languages when chatting on line.,1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters,第二句: 1. 每天有很多作業(yè)做 2. 沒有記住生字。, They have much homework to do every day.,2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.,3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the