1、How to write a letter for help?,1,Lead-in,What did Harry Potter say when he asked for help?,2,Before writing: 假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫(xiě)封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開(kāi)會(huì)，詢問(wèn)他是否可以接機(jī)。信中需涉及如下內(nèi)容：1.航班號(hào)：CA9852.到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30 3.李明的外貌特征 4.李華托李明帶了一副Peter想要的中國(guó)畫(huà)給他注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoi

2、ng? _Lookingforwardtoyourreply. Yours LiHua,3,1.我是李華。 2.我寫(xiě)信告訴你 3.我叔叔李明將去你的城市開(kāi)會(huì)。 4. 你能否去接機(jī)? 5.航班號(hào)是CA985(flight number) 6.他8月6日上午11：30到。 7.李明的外貌特征 8.我已經(jīng)讓叔叔帶了你想要的中國(guó)畫(huà)給你 。(Chinese painting),attend a meeting,pick sb up at the airport,4,I am Li Hua. Im writing to tell you that My uncle Li Ming is going to/

3、will go to your city to attend a conference. Can you go to meet my uncle at the airport? He will arrive at 11:30am August 6. The flight number is CA985. 8.I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want.,請(qǐng)注意時(shí)態(tài)及人稱和數(shù)的統(tǒng)一,5,While writing, Para 1：Purpose: asking for help Par

4、a 2：Body: situation Para 3：Conclusion: express your hope and appreciation,1.Paragraph：,2. Linking words or sentences:,3. Politeness:,并列:besides, in addition, whats more 轉(zhuǎn)折:However, On the contrary, but 順序:First of all, First/Second/Finally,6,Politeness:,1. Send me the book. 2. Could you please send

5、me the book? 3. I hope you can send me the book as soon as possible. 4. I would appreciate it if you could send me the book. 5. You should send me the book . 7. I wonder if you could send me the book. 8.Would you do me a favor to send me the book?,7,(I am Li Hua.) Im writing to tell you that my uncl

6、e Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport? He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that

7、/which) you want. I would appreciate it if you could help me.,8,polish the passage,plex sentences(attributive clause, adverbial clause, nonfinite verb and so on) e.g. I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want. 2.advanced vocabulary e.g.: want be fond of,9,3.invent

8、 some realistic and reasonable information: ask yourself some questions according to the passage e.g. How to make Peter find my uncle easily?,I will send you the picture of my uncle. My uncle will wear a red hat that day.,Attention: Its unnecessary to write too much. If you cant make it reasonable a

9、nd realistic, dont write it down.,10,Check your passage: 檢查單詞拼寫(xiě)、時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等。 檢查要點(diǎn)是否遺漏。 檢查句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確。 估計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。,Post-writing,11,How to write a good letter for help?,Summary,12,四個(gè)步驟,Step 1 Identify overall requirements and list the key points（審題列要點(diǎn)）,Step 2 Form a passage,Step3. Polish the passage

10、（成文潤(rùn)色）,Conclusion:,Step4. Check the passage,13,三段法模式 第一段：Purpose: Asking for help 第二段：Body: Situation 第三段：Conclusion: Express your appreciation and hope,14,常用句型： 1.寫(xiě)作目的： Im writing to tell you that 2. 求助的句型： I wonder if you could If it is convenient to you, would you please? Would you do me a favor

11、to ? 3.表達(dá)期待或謝意。 Looking forward to (receiving) your early reply. I would appreciate it if you could help me.,15,(I am Li Hua.) Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport? He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese