1、,. Writing,（批駁分析類(lèi)）,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),寫(xiě)作模式（批駁分析類(lèi)）,1) With the arrival / birth of , sth. is becoming more and more in our life. 2) Hit / Affected with this trend, some / many people come to believe / contend that .(錯(cuò)誤觀念) 3) But their viewpoint / belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立場(chǎng)) 4) I

2、t is true that sth. is a key ingredient in ones (讓步法分析) 5) On any scale of , in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than sth. 6) If we see sth. in its true colors, however, it is,Back,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),nothing but (批駁分析I) 7) . (進(jìn)一步闡述) 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one t

3、o , as can be easily seen in the cases of (批駁分析II) 9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth. 10) On the one hand, (正確看法I) 11) On the other, . (正確看法II) 12) In sum, sth. means but not to our life. (結(jié)論句),Back,Back,What Attitude Should We Take to Money,社會(huì)上對(duì)金錢(qián)的錯(cuò)誤觀念。 分析批駁其錯(cuò)誤所在。

4、 給出如何正確看待金錢(qián)的建議。,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),1) With the arrival of market-based economy, money is becoming more and more important in our life. 2) Hit with this trend, many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life. 3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind. 4) It is true t

5、hat money is a key ingredient in ones struggle towards happiness, without,Reference model: What Attitude Should We Take to Money,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Back,which, for example, there would be no way to go to college or form a family. 5) On any scale of ones daily worry, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier tha

6、n money. 6) If we see it in its true colors, however, money is nothing but a means to an end. 7) Money can buy us food, but not appetite; medicine, but not health; diplomas, but not knowledge; and days of joy, but not the whole life of happiness. 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on money may

7、 lead one to stop at nothing in making it, as,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),Back,can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials. 9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money. 10) On the one hand, money is vital to our daily life, in which case, it is wise of you to spend not where you

8、 may save. 11) On the other, money is something to be plowed into something more important, so it is better to spare not where you must spend. 12) In sum, money means something but not everything to our life.,上一頁(yè),THE END,. Writing,（分析建議類(lèi)）,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),寫(xiě)作模式（分析建議類(lèi)）,1) As is known to all, sth. does br

9、ing a lot of benefits to sb. / sth. else. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen , thereby changing for the better.(正面分析I) 3) Besides, it can make /render sb. / sth. else better able to (正面分析II) 4) And best of all, it can help sb.(正面分析III) 5）But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a b

10、lind eye to the negative effects sth. brings about. 6） If, as a succession,Back,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),of scientific studies reveals / implies / suggests, there are more chances that (負(fù)面分析I) 7) In addition, the more ., the worse. (負(fù)面分析II) 8) And worst of all, (負(fù)面分析III) 9) Therefore, a scientific approach

11、 must be adopted to the problem of sth. 10) On the one hand, (建議I) 11) On the other, . (建議II) 12) In sum, sth. can do sb. / sth. else good or harm, all depending on (結(jié)論句),Back,1. 分析體育鍛煉給我們帶來(lái)的益處。 2. 分析體育鍛煉給我們帶來(lái)的壞處。 3. 給出如何參加體育鍛煉的建議。,The Effects of Exercise on Our Health,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Back,1) As is known to

12、 all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can hel

13、p us breed optimism about our tough life.,Reference model: The Effects of Exercise on Our Health,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Back,5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about. 6) If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a

14、 program of undue exercise, as a succession of scientific studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured. 7) In addition, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get. 8) And,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),Back,worst

15、 of all, continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death. 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise. 10) On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity. 11) On the other, we must go in for physical e

16、xercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own. 12) In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it.,上一頁(yè),THE END,. Writing,（分析建議類(lèi)）,How to Do Something,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),寫(xiě)作模式（分析建議類(lèi)）,1) Much to our distress / delight / surprise, these years have seen

17、 the popularity / worsening / much improvement / a widespread neglect of sth. (議論的主題) in society. 2) According to a recent / official report / survey / opinion poll, .(佐證陳述) 3) If this current is allowed to run its course, things are bound to turn for the better / worse. (Para. 1),Back,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè)

18、,上一頁(yè),4) The importance / harmfulness / significance of sth. to sb. / sth. else, (however), can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first place, (分析I)6) In the second, . (分析II) 7) And above all, (分析III) 8) To sum up, . (歸納總結(jié)) (Para. 2),Back,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),9) So the most pressing fo

19、r us / basic problem now is how to 10) In my opinion, the first step should be focused upon (建議I) 11) Then, greater efforts must be made to . (建議II) 12) In one word, where there is , there is (結(jié)論句) (Para. 3),Back,How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today 1. 我國(guó)愛(ài)國(guó)主義教育的現(xiàn)狀。 2. 分析愛(ài)國(guó)主義教育

20、的重要意義。 3. 如何在青少年中開(kāi)展愛(ài)國(guó)主義教育？,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Back,1) Much to our distress, these years have seen a widespread neglect of patriotic education in our society. 2) According to some official reports, many patriotic education centers have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purpos

21、es while many of our national heroes have given way to todays pop stars in youths minds. 3) If this current is allowed to run its course, I am afraid, things are bound to turn for the worse, with less and less sense of patriotism left in the youth.,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Back,4) The significance of patriotic educa

22、tion to our society, however, can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first place, the patriotic education can make youth more aware of the glorious history and culture of our nation, thus building up their sense of pride as Chinese. 6) In the second, the patriotic education helps yo

23、uth value todays hard-earned life so as to hold,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),Back,dearer their golden chances of enriching themselves with knowledge in peace. 7) And above all, the patriotic education can push youth to draw upon more of their capabilities in order to make tomorrows life better than todays and leave behi

24、nd themselves more highlights for the nations culture. 8) To sum up, patriotic education is a key ingredient in the all-round development of youth.,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),Back,9) So the most pressing for us now is how to effectively inculcate patriotism in the youth of today. 10) In my opinion, the first step shou

25、ld be focused upon giving fuller play to the potentials of patriotic education centers instead of running them for the purpose of making money. 11) Then, greater efforts must be made to integrate the patriotic education into the curriculums throughout youths education. 12) In one word, where there i

26、s an effective patriotic education of youth, there is a greater enhancement of national cohesiveness.,上一頁(yè),THE END,Back,My Way of Seeing Something,1. 人們從不同的角度看待某一事物 2. 我的看法是(說(shuō)明理由),(理由陳述類(lèi)),. Writing,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),寫(xiě)作模式（理由陳述類(lèi)）,1) Something may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as while o

27、thers may view it as (人們的看法舉例) 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as (我的看法) (Para. I),Back,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),4) My insight into sth.(My outlook on sth. / My understanding of sth.) is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, sth. is so that (理由I) 6) (進(jìn)一步闡述) 7) Se

28、condly, sth. is also (理由II) 8) . (進(jìn)一步闡述) 9) And most of all, (理由III) 10) (進(jìn)一步闡述) (Para. II),Back,（劃線部分可替換）,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),11) I have (not) much freedom / option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing sth. more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone untu

29、rned during the course of in order to pave the way for . (Para. III),Back,My Way of Seeing Life 1. 人們從不同的角度看待人生 2. 我所推崇的看法是(說(shuō)明理由),下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Back,My Way of Seeing Life,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),1) Life may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others m

30、ay view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers. 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first, then to serve the society with all my heart, and finally to leave the world without any regrets.,Back,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè)

31、,4) My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, life is so wondrous that I am eager to explore it. 6) Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new; attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success, all of which, however, depends on h

32、ow much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first. 7) Secondly, life is also short to any,Back,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),individual like me. 8) The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have come to cherish more is already on the wane. 9) And most of al

33、l, both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance. 10) Once I idle away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people, there will be no more hope of making up for it.,Back,上一頁(yè),THE END,11) I have much option in this matter, but I

34、 have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life.,. Writing,（原因分析類(lèi)）,What Causes Something New,1. 近幾年在社會(huì)上出現(xiàn)了,2. 導(dǎo)致該現(xiàn)象的原

35、因,3. 分析該現(xiàn)象的社會(huì)影響,寫(xiě)作模式（原因分析類(lèi)）,Para.1: 1) Believe it or not/Like it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in/a popularity (resurgence/worsening/crisis/ decline/growth/revival/spread ) ofin our society/on the Chinese campus. 2) According to, people, especially college students, are showing more and

36、more interest in 3) To get a better sense of it, it is necessary for us to find out its causes.,(劃線部分可被替換),Back,下一頁(yè),Para. 2: 4) A closer analysis/study/ observation of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern/should call for more of our concern. 5) In the first plac

37、e, it is the product of, for which(原因I) 6) In the second, it is seen, among, as an ideal way of, since (原因II) 7) And above all, it is an inevitable result of(原因III) 8) While, in fact,(劃線部分可被替換),. Writing,Back,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change on our social/college life are positive/ neg

38、ative/a mixed one. 10) On the one hand,.(分析I) 11) On the other,.(分析II) 12) With more and moreadded / attached to the trend, I am fully convinced / I am deeply worried, it will certainly / is bound toin the time to come.,(劃線部分可被替換),. Writing,Back,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),. Writing,Back,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),What Causes a Boom in C

39、elebrating Foreign Festivals,1. 近幾年大學(xué)校園出現(xiàn)了 一股過(guò)洋節(jié)熱。,2. 闡明導(dǎo)致該現(xiàn)象的原因。,3. 分析該現(xiàn)象的社會(huì)影響。,Para. 1: 1) Believe it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus. 2) According to an official report/survey, young people, especially college students, are showing

40、more and more interest in such festivals as Valentines Day, April Fools Day, Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day. 3) To get a better sense of the boom, it is necessary for us to find out its causes.,. Writing,Back,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Para. 2: 4) A closer analysis of the phenomenon can find that three main factor

41、s are well worth our concern. 5) In the first place, it is the product of students seeking after individuality and novelty, for which the college campus offers an ideal climate. (原因I) 6) In the second, it is seen, among the students, as an ideal way of freeing themselves from stress for the time bei

42、ng, since most college students, single child of each family, are,. Writing,Back,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),subjected to the unprecedented pressures from all sides although they enjoy the abundance of material wealth. (原因II) 7) And above all, it is an inevitable result of more and more exchanges between Western and Ea

43、stern cultures. (原因III) 8) While the Chinese watch their children thirst for the joy derived from foreign festivals, in fact, the Americans are discussing whether or not to list the Chinese Spring Festival among their official holidays.,. Writing,Back,下一頁(yè),上一頁(yè),Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change o

44、n our college life are positive. 10) On the one hand, it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures. (分析I) 11) On the other, it has enriched the college life, thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on. (分析II) 12) With more and more health and col

45、or added to the trend, I firmly believe, it will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come.,. Writing,上一頁(yè),THE END,. Writing,（各抒己見(jiàn)類(lèi)）,Views on Something,有人認(rèn)為該事物 理由是,2. 也有人認(rèn)為該事物,3. 我的看法,（劃線部分可替換）,寫(xiě)作模式（各抒己見(jiàn)類(lèi)）,1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth / appearance / arrival

46、 / development of sth. 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to(議論的主題) (Para. I),Back,下一頁(yè),（劃線部分可替換）,3) Many / Some people contend / believe / argue that (一方觀點(diǎn)) 4) They base their contention / belief / argument on the grounds that (理由I) 5）Besides, as they often point out, . (理由II)

47、6）Yet others react to the issue / matter the other way around and hold / assert that the opposite is just reasonable / more acceptable. (另一方觀點(diǎn)) 7) From their angle of view, (理由I) 8) And even worse, as they claim, (理由II) (Para. II),Back,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),（劃線部分可替換）,9) I am of / adhere to / stick to the opinion

48、/ view / truth that anything new, including, can bring human society fortunes / merits / advantages or misfortunes / demerits / disadvantages, all depending on . (我的看法) 10) On the one hand, (理由I) 11) But on the other, . (理由II) 12) In short, the key / solution to the problem is always controlled in (結(jié)論句),Back,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),Views on Cloning 1. 有人認(rèn)為克隆技術(shù)的應(yīng)用利大于弊， 理由是 2. 也有人認(rèn)為弊大于利， 3. 我的看法。,Back,上一頁(yè),下一頁(yè),1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly, as the first clone of an adult animal, has opened a new way of seeing the