1、Welcome,Enjoy English, Enjoy life!,English Writing,書面表達(dá)中常見的一些錯(cuò)誤,Part One,一. 漢式英語 （誤）Good good study，day day up.,（正） Study hard and youll make progress every day .,1. Students take exercise are not enough . 2. Education is only careful to grades than sports . 3. There is a picture that a boy and a gi

2、rl sitting on the track and tires out .,Studentsdonttakeenoughexercise .,Educationonly focuses ongrades rather than sports .,As is shown in the picture, a boy and a girl are sitting on the track , tired out .,二. 詞性混用 More important , people are beginning to realize how seriously the pollution is . 2

3、. The students physical quality is becoming poor because the lack of exercise . 3. In order to our health , we are supposed to work out regular .,More importantly , people are beginning to realize how serious the pollution is .,The students physical quality is becoming poor because of the lack of /

4、for lack of exercise .,For the sake of our health , we are supposed to work out regularly .,三. 句子不完整 Health to a human being what water to a fish . 2. As can see in the picture , two students both tired out after running . 3. Personally , I strongly against that behavior, the reasons as follows .,He

5、alth is to a human being what water is to a fish .,As can be seen in the picture , two students are both tired out after running .,Personally , I am strongly against that behavior , the reasons are as follows .,四. 無連詞 1、Practise more reading , you will improve your reading ability . 2. The compositi

6、on is well written , there is room for improvement . 3.Take the chance , you will regret it. 4. We were having a meeting someone broke in .,and,but,or,when,其它常見的語法錯(cuò)誤,（一）there be 句式 1Its reported that there has a school decided to cancel the long-distance running project . 2. In short , its no doubt

7、that reading news can benefit us a lot .,Its reported that there is a school deciding to cancel the long-distance running project .,In short , theres no doubt that reading news can benefit us a lot .,（二）代詞 使用代詞時(shí)請注意其單、復(fù)數(shù)，主、賓格以 及形容詞性物主代詞和名詞性物主代詞的用法。 1. Hers being admitted to Beijing University made he

8、r parents excited . 2. Therefore , we should do sports to improve ourselves physical quality .,Her,our,（三）形容詞和副詞 形容詞和副詞容易被誤用，形容詞和副詞的比較級和最高級也是應(yīng)注意的重點(diǎn)。 The students physical quality is more and more worse . 2. We should bring home to people the value of keeping health,1) The students physical quality i

9、s worse and worse . 2) The students physical quality is going from bad to worse.,healthy,（四）動詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài) 1 As we known , the global water shortage becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming . 2 Im only too glad to learn that you have admitted into Qinghua University .,As we know / As is k

10、nown to us all , the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming .,Im only too glad to learn that you have been admitted into Qinghua University.,3There is no denying that accidents are happened when drivers use cell phones while driving . 4. It widely believe

11、that practice makes perfect .,There is no denying that accidents will happen when drivers use cell phones while driving .,Its widely believed that practice makes perfect .,（五）非謂語動詞 1The students have to devote all their time to their lessons , leave no time for sports . 2In addition , lack physical

12、exercise and communication is a main factor as well .,The students have to devote all their time to their lessons , leaving no time for sports .,In addition , lack of / lacking physical exercise and communication is a main factor as well .,（六）名詞性從句 1. People hold the view if they are healthy they wi

13、ll own everything 2Nowadays , it is a common phenomenon more and more high students start their own blogs on the Internet.,People hold the view that if they are healthy , they will own everything,Nowadays , it is a common phenomenon that more and more high students start their own blogs on the Inter

14、net.,（七）定語從句 1The reason students ignore the value of sports is mainly they attach too much significance to studies . 2. Some of them even continue to make more money , it means everything to them,The reason why students ignore the value of sports is mainly that they attach too much significance to

15、studies.,Some of them even continue to make more money ,which means everything to them,（八）倒裝 Only everyone realizes the importance of health can we lead a healthy life . 2. On no account cant we ignore the value of knowledge .,Only if / when everyone realizes the importance of health can we lead a h

16、ealthy life .,On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge .,（九）虛擬語氣 1The situation could have been changed if we took action earlier . 2 It is high time that this situation must be changed .,The situation could have been changed if we had taken action earlier .,It is high time that this situa

17、tion ( should ) be changed .,（十）強(qiáng)調(diào)句 1. It is your attitude towards life which matters. 2. It was in the park where I saw two young men throwing litter everywhere .,It is your attitude towards life that matters.,It was in the park that I saw two young men throwing litter everywhere .,Part two,高級詞匯,1.

18、 多實(shí)少虛 :,A nice person,2. 短語優(yōu)先：,I cannot bear it. We want peace.,generous, warm-hearted, considerate,I cannot put up with it. I am fed up with it . We are looking forward to peace.,.棄舊取新:,There are many trees in the street.,The street is lined with many trees .,我們應(yīng)加強(qiáng)對學(xué)生的交通安全教育。,It is of great importa

19、nce to strengthen the safety education over the students.,As a result the plan failed . Suddenly I thought out a good idea.,The plan turned out to be a failure .,All of a sudden a good idea occurred to / flashed on / dawned on / hit / struck me .,Part three,語法結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用,方法一：使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔,1.面對困難時(shí)，他從不放棄。

20、2.引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。,Faced with / Facing difficulties , he never gives up.,Introduced to the market, the product enjoyed a great success.,方法二. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,他直到昨天下午五點(diǎn)才到達(dá)這里。 1. not - until He did not come here until 5:00 p.m. yesterday . 2. 倒裝句 Not until 5:00 p.m. did he come here yesterday . 3. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 It was n

21、ot until 5:00 p.m. that he came here yesterday .,方法二. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式,他成功地通過了考試，這使我們感到很驚訝。 1. 非限定性定語從句 He succeeded /was successful in passing the exam , which surprised us greatly. 2. 主語從句,Tips,The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial burden to thei

22、r parents. The worlds limited natural resources will be used up.,In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, the worlds limited natural resources, such as water and electri

23、city , will be used up soon.,First of all Firstly, To begin with,In addition, Besides, Moreover, Whats more,Finally, Whats worse,在表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、保持連貫的基礎(chǔ)上, 盡量使用較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和較高 級的詞匯; 恰當(dāng)使用過渡詞或過渡句,使文章 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊;,Tips,In my opinion, we should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students t

24、o form the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save everything.,But how can we reduce waste ? In my opinion, it is everybodys duty to fight against waste. On the one hand, I should start with myself to save everything. On the other hand, Id like to r

25、emind my friends here to take the lead in reducing the waste.,在表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、保持連貫的基礎(chǔ)上, 盡量使用較復(fù)雜的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和較 高級的詞匯; 恰當(dāng)使用過渡詞或過渡句,使文章 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊; 適當(dāng)?shù)刈儞Q句型結(jié)構(gòu)和所用詞匯, 盡量避免重復(fù)和單調(diào)。,Tips,Nowdays, it is a common phenomenon that the students have / leave tap water running after washing and leave the lights on in the daytime, which means a huge waste of water and electricity. Some students get into a bad habit of ordering much delicious food in the canteen but they dont eat all the food, leaving much on the table. So it is high time we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows:,Sampl