1、外研版 高一年級(jí) (必修2) Module 3如何寫人物介紹性的短文【案例呈現(xiàn)】請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格里收集到的有關(guān)資料，寫一篇關(guān)于知名音樂(lè)家劉芳的短文。姓名劉芳出生日期1974年出生地昆明畢業(yè)學(xué)校上海音樂(lè)學(xué)院（Shanghai Conservatory of Music）成長(zhǎng)歷程5歲時(shí)母親開始教劉芳月琴；6歲起開始學(xué)彈琵琶；11歲開始舉辦演奏會(huì)；15歲去上海音樂(lè)學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)琵琶和古箏；畢業(yè)后在昆明歌舞團(tuán)（Kunming Music and Dance Troupe）擔(dān)任琵琶獨(dú)奏演員；22歲隨丈夫移居加拿大至今。專長(zhǎng)演奏中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)樂(lè)器奮斗目標(biāo)吸取其他音樂(lè)傳統(tǒng)之長(zhǎng)創(chuàng)作自己的音樂(lè)，并將中國(guó)古典琵琶和古箏音樂(lè)傳

2、遍全世界。贊譽(yù)英國(guó)國(guó)家廣播電臺(tái)將劉芳的演奏譽(yù)為是“大師般的、優(yōu)美的和不可抗拒的(masterful, graceful and riveting)”。注意：1. 文章須包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯；2. 詞數(shù)：100左右；3. 參考詞匯：獨(dú)奏演員soloist?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】審題定調(diào):本文屬于人物介紹性記敘文寫作范疇。寫作時(shí)要圍繞音樂(lè)家劉芳的生平簡(jiǎn)介, 精心組織表格中提供的材料。布局謀篇： 全文可分三段來(lái)寫：第一段：總體介紹（如劉芳的身份、以什么而聞名及贊譽(yù)）。第二段：主要經(jīng)歷（分三階段：1. 幼年簡(jiǎn)歷；2.學(xué)習(xí)簡(jiǎn)歷；3. 工作簡(jiǎn)歷）第三段：奮斗目標(biāo)。注意事項(xiàng)：1. 描寫人物的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括出生

3、年月、成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷、主要事跡、主要成就和總體評(píng)價(jià)。2. 多用第三人稱進(jìn)行描述。記敘某人的過(guò)去，以過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主；描寫現(xiàn)在的事情，以現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。3. 注意句式的變化，尤其是記敘簡(jiǎn)歷的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)或從句的表達(dá)。常用表達(dá):描寫簡(jiǎn)歷：be born in / on .; be born into a . family; His / Her father / mother was a(n) .; He / She showed great interest in music at the early age; When ., he / she began to learn how to play .; with

4、 the help of ., . made great progress in music; At the age of ., he / she went to . university to study .; He graduated from .; After graduation, he / she worked as . in .; He / She won the prize in .; He / She gave many concerts at home and abroad .總體評(píng)價(jià)：be famous / known for / as / to .; His / Her

5、works / performances . are welcomed by / popular with . all over the world; Besides his / her great contributions to music, he / she devoted all his / her life to .; He / She will be remembered as . forever; He / She is accepted as the most successful pianist; His / Her music inspires the young peop

6、le to struggle in life . 【范文欣賞】As an international musician, Liu Fang is famous for her work with traditional Chinese instruments. Her performance is highly praised as masterful, graceful and riveting.Born in 1974, Liu Fang learned to play the yueqin from her mother at 5. She has played the pipa sin

7、ce 6 and given concerts since she was 11. At 15, she entered Shanghai Conservatory of Music to study the pipa and the guzheng. After graduation, she worked as a pipa soloist of Kunming Music and Dance Troupe. In 1996, she moved to Canada with her husband and has been living there ever since. As an artist, Liu Fang wishes to compose her own m