1、一、感謝信/祝賀信1假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友John獲得了在華高中留學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 祝賀獲獎(jiǎng)；2. 肯定付出；3. 期待見(jiàn)面交流。注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)80左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dear John,_Yours,Li Hua二、開(kāi)放性作文2前不久我市教育機(jī)構(gòu)開(kāi)通了微信公眾號(hào)，正在舉辦主題征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以 Penny and penny laid up will be many 為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿。要求：1. 你對(duì)這句話的理解；2. 你將如何踐行這句話。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 80 左右；2. 文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）

2、。Penny and penny laid up will be many._三、其他應(yīng)用文3你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以“My dream job”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽. 內(nèi)容包括：1. 你的理想工作；2. 你選擇的理由。注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。My dream jobGood morning, everyone. _4假定你是李華，你將負(fù)責(zé)接待來(lái)自美國(guó)友好學(xué)校的師生。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇?dú)g迎詞，內(nèi)容包括：1表示歡迎；2介紹活動(dòng)安排；3表達(dá)相互交流的愿望。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_參考答案：1Dear Jo

3、hn,I would like to express my congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.It is really good news that you became champion of this competition. I know you were not very good at Chinese at first. However, you practised speaking Chinese almost every day. As

4、the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.” And your efforts paid off at last! I believe you can achieve more in the future.Im looking forward to seeing you soon and catching up on all the updates.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給你的英國(guó)朋友John寫一封電子郵件，祝賀他在華高中留學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累

5、想要：would like to want to比賽：competition match冠軍：champion winner期望：look forward to expect2.句式拓展句式轉(zhuǎn)換原句：I would like to express my congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.拓展句：Knowing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition, I w

6、ould like to express my congratulations to you.【點(diǎn)睛】高分句型1It is really good news that you became champion of this competition.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句）高分句型2I believe you can achieve more in the future.（運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句）2Penny and penny laid up will be many.One of my favorite English proverbs is that penny and p

7、enny laid up will be many. The meaning of this proverb is that things add up little by little. The best expression of this proverb is in the donationeveryone donates a little money, and finally there will be a considerable amount of charity money, which will make a big difference to those in need. S

8、imilarly, this proverb also applies to learning. As long as we keep on learning a little every day, finally we can learn enough knowledge to get good grades in the college entrance examination.【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放性作文，要求考生寫一篇短文談?wù)剬?duì)英文諺語(yǔ)Penny and penny laid up will be many（積少成多）的理解以及自己將如何踐行這句話。【詳解】詞匯積累累積：

9、accumulateadd up數(shù)目可觀的：a considerable amount ofa great deal of取得好成績(jī)：get good gradesachieve good results 對(duì)有很大影響：make a big difference to = have a great effect on2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：One of my favorite English proverbs is that penny and penny laid up will be many. The meaning of this proverb is that things ad

10、d up little by little.拓展句：One of my favorite English proverbs is that penny and penny laid up will be many, whose meaning is that things add up little by little.【點(diǎn)睛】高分句型1 The best expression of this proverb is in the donationeveryone donates a little money, and finally there will be a considerable a

11、mount of charity money, which will make a big difference to those in need. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)高分句型2 As long as we keep on learning a little every day, finally we can learn enough knowledge to get good grades in the college entrance examination. (運(yùn)用了as long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)3參考范文My dream jobGood morning

12、, everyone. I feel it an honor to address a speech titled My dream job.Of the wide range of jobs around us, I will choose to be a teacher. My mother accounts for my choice first. Her commitment to teaching and happiness of being a teacher motivate me. Additionally, it is the inquisitive faces from m

13、y future students that reinforce my idea. At last, I am eager to make a difference to those for whom education is their only ticket to success.Not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher. Thank you!【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生

14、給學(xué)校即將舉行的演講比賽寫一篇題目為“My dream”的發(fā)言稿參賽。【詳解】1.詞匯積累發(fā)表演講：address a speech deliver a speech另外：additionally besides不留余力做某事： spare no effort to do sth. do ones level best to do sth.激勵(lì)：motivate inspire2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句： I feel it an honor to address a speech titled My dream job.拓展句： I feel it an honor to address

15、 a speech whose title is My dream job.【點(diǎn)睛】高分句型1Additionally, it is the inquisitive faces from my future students that reinforce my idea. （運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的限定性定語(yǔ)從句）高分句型2At last, I am eager to make a difference to those for whom education is their only ticket to success.（運(yùn)用了介詞for +which引導(dǎo)的限定性定語(yǔ)從句）4Dear Ameri

16、can guests,Its my great honor to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school. We are excited to have you here during this time.As scheduled, well show you around our campus, which will allow you to get a general impression of our school. Then youre supposed to visit our teaching building

17、s, the school stadium and the dormitories as well. After that, we will have lunch together in the school canteen: In the afternoon, a free talk will be arranged so that we can talk about the school life and different cultures of the two countries. In the evening, there will be a welcome party for yo

18、u. The party will begin at eight oclock in the school hall. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in it. I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence.We hope youll have a pleasant time during your stay here. Thanks for your attention!【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一篇?dú)g迎詞?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一篇?dú)g迎詞；假如你是李華

19、，你將負(fù)責(zé)接待來(lái)自美國(guó)友好學(xué)校的師生，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇?dú)g迎詞，內(nèi)容包括：表示歡迎、介紹活動(dòng)安排、表達(dá)相互交流的愿望。人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：warm welcome（熱烈歡迎），on behalf of our school（代表我們學(xué)校），show sb. around（帶某人轉(zhuǎn)一轉(zhuǎn)），schedule（安排）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。結(jié)構(gòu)上：采用三段成文，第一段歡迎美國(guó)朋友的

20、到來(lái)；第二段介紹英語(yǔ)周的活動(dòng)；第三段表達(dá)愿望，希望獲準(zhǔn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled，consist of benefit from等等；還運(yùn)用了不定式to have作狀語(yǔ)，to develop作表語(yǔ)等，動(dòng)名詞listening等作賓語(yǔ)，hope后賓語(yǔ)從句等等。Its my great honor to express our warm welcome to you on behalf of our school（高分句型一）我很榮幸代表我們學(xué)校向您表示熱烈的歡迎。句中on

21、 behalf of為固定搭配，意為“代表”I hope we will benefit a lot from your presence. (高分句型二)意為“從中獲益”我希望我們能從您的光臨中獲益良多。句中benefit from為固定搭配。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。5Dear Jack,With the winter vacation drawing near, we know you are going back to America for the holiday. Well miss you

22、 very much during your absence.To express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your love for our class, weve decided to have a farewell party for you. The party will start at 6:30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall and will probably last about an hour. At the party, our mon

23、itor will give a speech on behalf of the whole class. Then you can join us singing English songs and I believe we will have a good time together. At the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, which are mostly made by ourselves.We wish you a pleasant journey back home! We ar

24、e also expecting you to come back to us again soon.Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封郵件。第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；作為英語(yǔ)課代表，寫郵件告知美國(guó)外教參加班里為他準(zhǔn)備的晚會(huì)和相關(guān)事宜。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），目的，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文內(nèi)容完整

25、，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如 賓語(yǔ)從句：Then you can join us singing English songs and I believe we will have a good time together. 定語(yǔ)從句：At the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, which are mostly made by ourselves.等。全文沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章

26、增色添彩。6Dear Jenny,Im glad that you are so fascinated with Chinese. As a language used by a large population in the world, Chinese has become more and more popular with foreigners. To study Chinese, you are advised to learn from elementary Chinese, like Chinese pinyin and characters. Believe it or not

27、, its grammar is quite similar to that of English, so there is no need to worry about it.However, just like any other languages, Chinese has its special characteristics, such as its tones and each Chinese character with its unique structure, making it harder for foreigners to learn. So they may fall

28、 into a difficult situation, feeling discouraged, not knowing what it conveys. As your penfriend, I feel it a duty to offer my help whenever you meet with difficult language points while studying Chinese.Best regards.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國(guó)筆友 Jenny寫封信，介紹學(xué)習(xí)中文需要注意的事項(xiàng)，并表示你愿意提供幫助?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累著迷：crazyfascinated 受歡迎的：welcomedpopular 擔(dān)憂：be concerned aboutworry about難的：difficulthard2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：As a language used by a large population in the world, Chinese has become more an