1、人物介紹寫作方法基礎(chǔ)寫作之一Basic writing1基礎(chǔ)寫作: 眾所周知, 劉翔以世界飛人而出名, 在男子110米欄方面, 他是我們中國, 甚至是亞洲的驕傲.寫作內(nèi)容: 請根據(jù)表格, 向世界介紹劉翔.寫作要求: 用5個句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容.2姓名：劉翔出生年月：年月日性別；男出生地：上海身高：米教練：孫海平偶像：Jordon專項：欄成就：年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄年月日在瑞士洛桑以秒破世 界記錄愛好：聽音樂，打游戲，看書自評：為人誠懇，隨和，自信樂觀 瑞士洛桑: Lausanne, Switzerland3審題列要點依要點, 擬草綱, 組織成句.構(gòu)篇章,擴(kuò)句成文

2、.檢查潤色書寫基礎(chǔ)寫作解題步驟：4人物簡介的一般步驟：Give the right order( )教育/ 專長/事業(yè)：education ( )外貌性格/愛好appearance ,character( )生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )( )評估evaluation( )概況age, sex, birth-place, background概,貌,育,平,估 5一、審題:(四確定)確定類型2. 確定體裁 3. 確定主體時態(tài) 4. 確定主體人稱第三人稱人物介紹記敘文一般現(xiàn)在時6二 列要點概,貌,育,平,估1. 概況age

3、, sex, birth-place, background姓名：劉翔出生年月：年月日性別；男出生地：上海身高：米 偶像：Jordon劉翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.教練：孫海平專項：欄72. 外貌性格/ 愛好appearance ,character, hobby身高：米自評：為人誠懇，隨和，自信樂觀3. 教育/ 專長/ 事業(yè)：education, speciality 3)他的身高1.89米, 為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀.2) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 愛打游戲及看書.專項：欄教練：孫海平愛好：聽音樂，打游戲，看書偶像：Jordon4) 他擅長110米欄, 他的教

4、練是孫海平84. 生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )成就：年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄年月日在瑞士洛桑以秒破世 界記錄4) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,5) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄5. 評估evaluation9三 依要點, 擬草綱, 組織成句.1) 劉翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.2) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 看打游戲及看書.3)他的身高1.89米, 為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀.4) 他擅長110米欄, 他的教練是

5、孫海平5) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,6) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄102) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 看打游戲及看書.3) 擁有身高1.89米的他擅長110米欄, 在他的教練孫海平的幫助下他取得了傲人的成績.4) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,5) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄1) 為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀的男孩劉翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.111) 為人誠懇, 隨和, 自信樂觀的男孩劉翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.Liuxiang, an hon

6、est, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai.2) 他的偶像是Jordon, 愛好是聽音樂, 看打游戲及看書.He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening tomusic, playing games and reading books.3) 擁有身高1.89米的他擅長110米欄, 在他的教練孫海平的幫助下他取得了很多傲人的成績.With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110

7、 Meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has many gained wonderful achievements.124) He broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 2002 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the world record. 5) He broke the record b

8、y 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. 4) 他在年瑞士洛桑以秒破亞洲記錄, 兩年后他又在年雅典以秒奪冠，平了世界記錄,5) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界記錄13四 構(gòu)篇章,擴(kuò)句成文. LiuXiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai. He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games an

9、d reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. He broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 2002 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291

10、in Athen which ties the world record. He broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. He has many gained wonderful achievements.14五 檢查潤色時態(tài)是否正確人稱是否一致是否用5個句子是否漏掉必要信息是否語句連貫15五 檢查潤色 LiuXiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shan

11、ghai. He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. He broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 2002 in Lausa

12、nne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the world record. He broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. He has many gained wonderful achievements.16六 書寫 Liuxiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, w

13、as born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai. He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. For example, he broke the A

14、sian record with the time 1312 in 2002 in Lausanne, Switzerland, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the world record. Most excitingly, he broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. he has many gained wonderful achievements.171.A.

15、 概況 :譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.B.外貌,性格:譯：我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人，她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā)* 語法，句法高分tips盡量用分詞短語、同位語結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡潔，通順 My history teacher is a beautif

16、ul lady with two big eyes and long hair.巧用with做定語18C. 教育經(jīng)歷：1）Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies.2）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a d

17、octors degree.D生平：1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.注意盡量用非謂語動詞, 使文章精煉盡量用復(fù)合句倒裝,非限定定語從句等，潤色文章19E評估：1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respec

18、ted him .2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.3）Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.注意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組201.例文：假如你叫李明，你的美國朋友布魯斯開始學(xué)習(xí)中國文學(xué)，來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。你回信介紹魯迅，內(nèi)容如下（1）魯迅，原名周樹人，浙江紹興人（2）為了國家，棄醫(yī)從文。（3）著名的作家，思想家，而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者。

19、（4）小說被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如阿Q正傳、祝福這兩部影片。（5）一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。參考詞匯：阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q 祝福：The New Years Sacrifice注意：1）介紹必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，但不要逐條譯成英語。寫作要求只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。文章首尾已給出，不算字?jǐn)?shù)。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性，信息內(nèi)容的完整性。實戰(zhàn)演練21Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something

20、 about Luxun ._. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xuns novels will help you to know more about it.Yours, Li Ming22概,貌,育,平,估 審題列要點依要點, 擬草綱, 組織成句.構(gòu)篇章,擴(kuò)句成文.檢查潤色書寫基礎(chǔ)寫作解題步驟：23一、審題:(四確定)確定類型2. 確定體裁 3. 確定主體時態(tài) 4. 確定主體人稱第三人稱人物介紹記敘文一般過去時242. 外貌性格/ 愛好appearance ,character, hobby3.

21、 教育/ 專長/ 事業(yè)：education, speciality （2）為了國家，棄醫(yī)從文。4. 生平big events in his or her life ( in order of time )（4）小說被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如阿Q正傳、祝福這兩部影片。（5）一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大學(xué)課本。5. 評估evaluation（3）著名的作家，思想家，而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者。（1）魯迅，原名周樹人，浙江紹興人1. 概況age, sex, birth-place, background二 列要點阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q 祝福：The New Years Sacrifice25三 依要點, 擬草綱, 組織成句.26Find out the good sentences in the possible version and remember themDear Bruce,I was glad to know you bega