1、英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo) 短話長(zhǎng)說(shuō)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)指導(dǎo) 短話長(zhǎng)說(shuō)高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（21-25） ： 完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的，覆蓋所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用了豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)法與高級(jí)詞匯有少些錯(cuò)誤，全篇流暢，連詞使用較好。第四檔（16-20） ： 完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的，寫(xiě)漏了一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)法和詞匯基本正確，有少些錯(cuò)誤，主要是想使用高級(jí)詞匯與復(fù)雜句子所致。高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（21-25） ： 完全完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)第二檔 （6-10） ： 未適當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，有要點(diǎn)，但表達(dá)不清晰，只有一些句子可讀。第一檔 （1-5） ：未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只是一些字詞的堆

2、積，不成句，讓讀者根本不明白寫(xiě)什么。0分：空白，或者抄寫(xiě)一些無(wú)關(guān)的東西。第三檔（11-15） ： 大錯(cuò)（時(shí)態(tài)、句子結(jié)構(gòu)等）超過(guò)五六處，不能及格，寫(xiě)漏了一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋了主要要點(diǎn)，基本上讓人能夠看懂，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期目的。第二檔 （6-10） ： 未適當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，有要點(diǎn)，高考作文評(píng)分原則形式上勝人一籌，也就是文章結(jié)構(gòu)，譴詞造句內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)拓展高考作文評(píng)分原則一、利用文章總體模板1. 文章開(kāi)頭的總體交待 引出主題A. Recently, we had a discussion about B. we carried out a survey of C. When it come

3、s to the topic whether 2. 呈現(xiàn)不同的觀點(diǎn) 陳述觀點(diǎn) A. Some of them are in favor of the idea that However, others hold a completely opposite opinion. B. Some people firmly believe that. Others argue that 呈現(xiàn)論據(jù)時(shí)常用的連接詞inthefirstplace,_(原因一). inthesecondplace, furthermore, _(原因二). Soitgoeswithoutsaying that_(觀點(diǎn)一).So

4、me people holdtheideathat_ (觀點(diǎn)二).Intheirpointofview, ontheonehand，_(原因一).Ontheotherhand, _ (原因二).Therefore, there isno doubt that_(觀點(diǎn)二). 3. 結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)和總結(jié)的用語(yǔ) 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)As far as Im concerned,/ From my point of view, / To sum up, 如何從形式上勝人一籌？一、利用文章總體模板1. 文章開(kāi)頭的總體交待 引出主二，句式多樣，文章增“靚”二，句式多樣，文章增“靚”Rewrite the sen

5、tences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法1. 使用從句或非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子高檔When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happ

6、y atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed.Given another chance, I will succeed. In order to improve his English, he studies hard.Rewrite the sentences 1. They 方法2. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until2.We can save the earth by changing t

7、he way we live. Only 3.He is clever but he does not work hard. as/though4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the streetComplete the sentences he returned home did he realize his foolishness.by changing the way we live can we save the earth.Clever he is, he

8、does not work hard.stands the clock tower.方法2. 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力1. He didn方法3. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式 In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast.All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful._ which_With the development of _ _so _ that_In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fas

9、t, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.方法3. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式 In recent years句式多樣文章增“靚”1. 使用從句或非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子高檔2. 巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子

10、表現(xiàn)力3. 嘗試多樣化表達(dá)方式句式多樣1. 使用從句或非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使句子高檔2.三. 善用高級(jí)詞匯Which is better? 1 周末我們會(huì)有很多作業(yè)要做.A .We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B. We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 2 在我所有的老師里,毛老師給我留下了很深的印象.A. Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr Moore.B. Of all my teachers, Mr Moore gave me the

11、deepest impression.三. 善用高級(jí)詞匯Which is better? 1 周末3 高級(jí)培訓(xùn)班結(jié)束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力盡。A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired.B. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. 4. 他沒(méi)聽(tīng)我課上講的東西。AHe turned a deaf ear to what I said in the c

12、lass. B He didnt listen to what I said in the class. 3 高級(jí)培訓(xùn)班結(jié)束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力盡。4. 他沒(méi)如何從形式上勝人一籌？一、利用文章總體模板二，句式多樣，文章增“靚”三. 善用高級(jí)詞匯如何從形式上勝人一籌？一、利用文章總體模板如何在內(nèi)容上言之有物？如何在內(nèi)容上言之有物？方法添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容、附加成分作解釋說(shuō)明例一：這樣更方便照顧父母。拓展：因?yàn)楦改冈絹?lái)越年邁。 原因 as they are getting older and older. 例二：因廣告過(guò)多， 影片放映晚點(diǎn) 。拓展：這導(dǎo)致觀眾不耐煩

13、甚至惱火 。后果 which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.It will be much more convenient to look after your parentsThere were so many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film, 方法添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容、附、附加成分作解釋

14、說(shuō)明條件 例三：安全出口（exit）標(biāo)志不明， 存在安全隱患(potential hazard）。 拓展：萬(wàn)一遇到危險(xiǎn)， 觀眾難以逃脫。 In case of danger, it is difficult for the audience to escape. The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard.、附加成分作解釋說(shuō)明條件 例三：安全出口（exit）標(biāo)志不、附加成分作解釋說(shuō)明(1)表達(dá)不同原因的概括語(yǔ)There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follo

15、ws.The reason foris thatThe reason why is that(2)表示無(wú)需說(shuō)明的事實(shí)的概括語(yǔ)：It goes without saying thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say, Its obvious that、附加成分作解釋說(shuō)明(1)表達(dá)不同原因的概括語(yǔ)加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb)我們應(yīng)該集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)We should focus our mind on our studies.As the saying goes, “ .” We should focus our mind on our studies.怎

16、么添加諺語(yǔ)？方法添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容No pains,no gains加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb)我們應(yīng)該集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)We s.加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb)鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處 It is good for us students to take exercise.As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.2. 添加諺語(yǔ).加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb)鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處 It is g常用諺語(yǔ)(Proverb

17、)Strike the iron while it is hot.趁熱打鐵。Think twice before you do.三思而后行。Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.一鳥(niǎo)在手勝過(guò)雙鳥(niǎo)在林。When in Roman,do as the Romans do.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。 Do it now.機(jī)不可失，時(shí)不再來(lái)。Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。 It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水難收。 An

18、apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一個(gè)蘋(píng)果， 醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。 常用諺語(yǔ)(Proverb)Strike the iron w青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use p

19、roducts, plant more trees and save water and energy. 舉例說(shuō)明青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球We teenagers 人口密集地區(qū)遭受許多自然災(zāi)害（舉例說(shuō)明）Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters such as 人口密集地區(qū)遭受許多自然災(zāi)害（舉例說(shuō)明）Many popul珍惜每一滴水Therefore, we should no longer be indifferent about this. To protect our valuable water resou

20、rces, we should call on people to cherish every drop of water. Otherwise, maybe the last drops of water will be our tears. As middle school students, we also have a part to play. Do remember: we are not saving water , we are saving our own life. With everyone doing his bit, we can make a difference.

21、 結(jié)尾提出倡議或號(hào)召珍惜每一滴水Therefore, we should no As students, we should start from ourselves . Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we can change the present situation. 參加俱樂(lè)部或活動(dòng)Dont hesitate. It will be great fun!Dont wait. Join us now!

22、Since it has so many benefits, what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!保護(hù)環(huán)境As students, we should start f“短話長(zhǎng)說(shuō)”方法：如何在內(nèi)容上言之有物？. 附加成分作解釋說(shuō)明 . 加諺語(yǔ)(Proverb). 舉例說(shuō)明 . 結(jié)尾提出倡議或號(hào)召 “短話長(zhǎng)說(shuō)”方法：如何在內(nèi)容上言之有物？. 附加成分作解釋寫(xiě)作任務(wù) 現(xiàn)在，青少年肥胖越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重， 很讓父母擔(dān)心。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇文章 參考詞匯：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food要求：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)150左右 2. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)要適

23、當(dāng)發(fā)揮， 不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。 3. 開(kāi)頭已給出， 不計(jì)入總數(shù)Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._ 原因缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理建議多參加體育鍛煉多吃健康食品， 遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品寫(xiě)作任務(wù)原因缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)建議多參加體育鍛煉 要點(diǎn)分析利用模板1，引出主題When it comes to the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and

24、 fatter?2，原因Reasons: 3，建議Suggestions: inthe firstplace, besides, last but not least, 利用模板1，引出主題When it comes to tBecause of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before.1. 缺少運(yùn)動(dòng) Because of the popularity of TV and com

25、puters, and students are burdened with so much homework,Because of the popularity of TBecause peoples quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.2. 飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理 Because p

26、eoples quality of liIn order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.建議1. 多參加體育鍛煉 In order to lose weight and stAs the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced

27、diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food and junk food.2. 多吃健康食品， 遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品As the saying goes, “An apple Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.3.制定合理的計(jì)劃， 時(shí)間表Last but not least, they shoul合成文章 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter? In my opinion, there are two remarkable reasons for this probl