專題八短文改錯

探考情悟真題

【考情探究】

考點(diǎn)

卷名體裁題材名詞、

動詞連詞形容詞副詞代詞冠詞介詞

數(shù)詞

2019記敘文學(xué)校生活12211210

2018記敘文家庭生活21122012

課標(biāo)

2017記敘文社會生活22112111

全國I

2016記敘文個(gè)人生活21202111

2015記敘文個(gè)人生活31120121

合計(jì)107767565

2019記敘文個(gè)人生活12132001

2018記敘文家庭生活42100111

課標(biāo)

2017記敘文個(gè)人生活32012210

全國H

2016記敘文個(gè)人生活41100310

2015記敘文社會生活31102111

合計(jì)158446743

2019記敘文個(gè)人生活41010211

2018課標(biāo)記敘文學(xué)校生活41211110

2017全國HI記敘文個(gè)人生活40120310

2016記敘文個(gè)人生活21021211

合計(jì)143362842

分析解讀

高考英語短文改錯涉及詞匯、語法、句型結(jié)構(gòu)等方面的知識和邏輯情理的推斷和綜合辨析，

是一種在較高層次上考查考生對英語知識的掌握和語言綜合運(yùn)用能力的測試題型。五年面芍

課標(biāo)全國卷短文改錯的體裁以記敘文為主,題材以考生所熟悉的個(gè)人生活、學(xué)校生活為主。

錯誤處均為考生平時(shí)寫作中常出現(xiàn)的錯誤。試題大多是加詞1個(gè),刪詞1個(gè)，改正8個(gè)。

1.五年高考課標(biāo)全國卷短文改錯對動詞的考查占相當(dāng)大比例,其中包括:①時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的

錯用;②過去分詞與過去式的混用;③一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)主語為第三人稱單數(shù),謂語動詞需加“-s”

的用法;④情態(tài)動詞后需加動詞原形而非過去式;⑤虛擬語氣的考查主要集中在表示“命令、

建議、請求、要求”的動詞后面賓語從句謂語動詞要用“should+動詞原形”，且should可

以省略;⑥非謂語動詞作賓語、狀語，且在考查非謂語動詞作賓語時(shí)主要考查介詞后需用動名

可作賓塔。

2.對名詞、代詞的考查也是五年高考課標(biāo)全國卷短文改錯的重點(diǎn)之一。其中包括:?冬

詞單、復(fù)數(shù)的混用;②名詞所有格的錯用;③名詞構(gòu)詞法;④不按照上下文邏輯導(dǎo)致人稱代詞、

物主代詞的誤用;⑤不按照語法規(guī)則導(dǎo)致主格、賓格、所有格的誤用;⑥反身代詞的濫用;⑦

易混代詞的誤用,如both與all,another與other等。

3.對形容詞、副詞的考查是五年高考課標(biāo)全國卷短文改錯的重點(diǎn)之一。其中包括:①形

容詞、副詞的混用;②形容詞、副詞比較等級用法的誤用;③易混形容詞、副詞的誤用，如many

與much,ago與before,somewhere與everywhere等;暫形容詞、副詞典詞法。

4.冠詞也是五年高考課標(biāo)全國卷短文改錯的必考內(nèi)容,其中包括:①冠詞的基本用法;②

冠詞的習(xí)慣用法。

5.連詞、介詞是五年高考課標(biāo)全國卷短文改錯的難點(diǎn),其中包括:①for,in,with,by,

on,of等常用介詞的用法;②并列連詞and,but,or,so的用法;③名詞性從句、定語從句

中的引導(dǎo)詞;④引導(dǎo)狀語從句的從屬連詞與并列連詞的混用。

6.未來高考課標(biāo)全國卷短文改錯仍會以實(shí)詞為主、虛詞為輔,句子結(jié)構(gòu)可能會由以簡單

句為主逐漸過渡到以復(fù)合句為主。

【真題探秘】

“Mamie仝由I體裁：記敘文題材：學(xué)校生活詞數(shù)：95

2019便標(biāo)全國?語篇解讀：作并講述了mr一次偶然的機(jī)會Hd喜.歡上了踢足球并成了一名優(yōu)秀球員的故事

直題再現(xiàn)

周讀點(diǎn)境

。作為必奴文，作々傷時(shí)而學(xué)才勺

Ibecame①…坐inplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.Oneafternoon②1rI緯3自乙由于一次倨題機(jī)會妾上

interestedwhen及球，外我對一幺尺球運(yùn)動度的

一A校歷.

wasinprimaryschool.Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenly3lootballfelljustin

a

but...冷hardly.9havcatalentfor正可說我havea

frontofme'4jalmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedit>backtotheplayground.

giftfor.童為：4WJ大樂

Toeveryone's(heballwentintothenet.Allthefootball⑦1on(heplayground

surpriseplayers

cheeredloudly.⑧--彳that1football.Fromon,Istartedtoplay⑩my

footballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.

試題解析

①考查形容詞。句意：由于一個(gè)小的事故,我對踢足球變得感興趣了。interested感興趣

的，interesting有趣的。

②考查定語從句。此處表示時(shí)間，故用when引導(dǎo)。

③考查冠詞。football是可數(shù)名詞,此處表示泛指，又因?yàn)閒ootball以輔音音素開頭,故在

football前加不定冠詞a。

④考查連詞。句意：突然一個(gè)足球正好落在我的面前,并且差點(diǎn)打中我。fell和hit兩個(gè)動

作是并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以要將but改為ando

⑤考查副詞。此處表達(dá)的意思是“用力地”，即用力地把球踢回到操場上，而非“幾乎不”，

故將副詞hardly改為hard。

⑥考查名詞。句意：讓所有人驚訝的是，球入網(wǎng)了。toone'ssurprise為固定短語,意為：

使某人驚訝的是。故將surprising改為surprise。

⑦考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。操場上所有足球運(yùn)動員都大聲歡呼起來。根據(jù)all可知player要用復(fù)數(shù)

形式。

⑧考查非謂語動詞。此處應(yīng)該是v.-ing形式作伴隨狀語，say與players在邏輯上是主動關(guān)

系，所以要用sayingo

⑨考查介詞短語。句意:從那時(shí)起,放學(xué)后我就開始和我們班的同學(xué)們踢足球了。fromthenon

從那時(shí)起;fromnowon從現(xiàn)在開始。根據(jù)語境要將now改為then。

⑩考查固定短語。playfootball為固定短語，意為:踢足球。

解題原則：1.規(guī)范性原則:按照規(guī)定的符號改錯

2.四不改原則:詞序不改;大小寫不改;標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不改;單詞拼寫不改

3.五改動原則：忠實(shí)原文;一對一原則；改動最少原則;實(shí)詞以改變形式為主;虛詞以添加

或刪除為主

4.六個(gè)一致:語義一致;主謂一致;時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)一致;代詞指代一致;名詞單復(fù)數(shù)一致;平行

結(jié)構(gòu)中的一致

【五年高考】

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I'vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.Though

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Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisit

mygrandparents.Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywere

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wenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalso

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years,heagreed.

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WhenIwaslittle,FridayJsnightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,we

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cartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswould

nottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.

StillIunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn,trealizehowright

myparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.Thegamesmyparentstaughtmewhere

Iwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.

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ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,

waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someof

uswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervous

andanxious.Ihaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeak

infrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfather

oncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfrom

textbooks,andmistakeaswell.”Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.

答案

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Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.

Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtI

hadlearnedtheinstructorsorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.

Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthe

word,“Speedup!”"Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcould

hardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedme

tostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddle

ontheroad.

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Mr.andMrs.Zhangal1workinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,and

ittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,

theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftop

oftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.They

havealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeuseful

informationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudents

pickthefreshvegetables!

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Mr.andMrs.Zhangworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,

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students?Atopickthefreshvegetables!

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WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihad

grownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonth

afterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanew

memberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywerevery

importantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyed

studyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthe

latemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyour

highschooldays.

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MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,

buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersat

mealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekey

tohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhigh

qualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrich

intheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.

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Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtodo

duringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestay

athome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,

wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyour

viewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecan

gotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcost

many,yetwecanstilllearnalot.

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Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabout端t。

doduringtheholiday.Wecan②『“'，betweenstayingathomeand③」:k0■atrip,

choosetaking

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ourknowledge

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shouldthink

itisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostyetwecanstilllearnalot.

much

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Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywere

alsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverything

andcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn,tseemtothinksuch.

Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparents

couldn,tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwas

independentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,I

willbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.

答案

Theteenage-from13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywere

years

alsothebestanG②但上yearsinmylife.At③thefirst,IthoughtIkneweverything

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andcouldmakedecisionsby(4)'()UIS(JI.However,myparentsdidntseemtothink(5)^-^.

myselfso

Theyalwaysmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparents

couldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefromthem.IshowedthemI

free

wasindependentby⑧strangeclothes.NowIamleavinghome?—college,

wearingfor

Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowhenever

⑩八Ineedhelp.

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WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.Now

Iamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanor

themountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,the

environmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarming

hasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtier

anddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyour

environment.Ifwefailtodoso,we'11livetoregretit.

答案

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.I①"武Iwouldbehappy

thought

there.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomein(2)Athecountryside.Therethe

airisclean③=themountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,@thedevelopmentof

industrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshave?been

shownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery1QUblem.Thewe

seriousair

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Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasvery

crowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequickly

walkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfound

wherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcrying

andtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Mom

said,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.Tonypromised

herthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

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WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIremember

wellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we'dgreetherat

thedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymother

wouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisday

andhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthe

topofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!Mysisterand

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