主題：學(xué)習(xí)方法導(dǎo)讀本單元的主題是用英語(yǔ)談?wù)撊绾螌W(xué)習(xí)和如何學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí).同學(xué)們可通過(guò)教材所提供的聽(tīng)力對(duì)話和閱讀材料提煉句式,進(jìn)而用于介紹某一學(xué)科的學(xué)習(xí)方法和心得.圍繞學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)的主題,可以介紹學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難及解決辦法,分享英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法及其優(yōu)勢(shì),發(fā)表對(duì)自主學(xué)習(xí)、合作探究等學(xué)習(xí)方式的看法.可適用于本單元的主題有很多,如HowIlearnEnglish,Howtolearnmath,Adviceonhowtoreducelearningpressure等.題目回放在學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的過(guò)程中你一定有很多心得體會(huì).請(qǐng)以HowIlearnEnglish為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,談?wù)勀愕挠⒄Z(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法和建議.寫(xiě)作要求：1.最少提出三種你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法或建議；2.語(yǔ)句通順流暢；3.不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.詞數(shù)90左右.審題指引1審體裁：介紹說(shuō)明個(gè)人的學(xué)習(xí)方法和體會(huì),屬于說(shuō)明文.2審內(nèi)容：從三個(gè)方面介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)方法.3審時(shí)態(tài)：主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).4審人稱：以第一人稱為主.框架設(shè)計(jì)開(kāi)頭：從談?wù)撚⒄Z(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)重要性引出英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法的話題.中間：中間主體內(nèi)容分為三段,每段分別表述不同的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法.結(jié)尾：總結(jié)全文.段落素描1.Firstparagraph:ItisimportanttolearnEnglishinproperways.IwouldliketosharesomeofmyideasonhowtolearnEnglishwell.(Itistruethat...Herearesomesuggestions...)(...)2.Thebody:First...Second...(...)3.Lastparagraph:Allinall,ifyouputyourheartintoEnglishlearning,youwill...(...)范本淬煉AHowIlearnEnglish①ItisimportanttolearnEnglishinproperways.IwouldliketosharesomeofmyideasonhowtolearnEnglishwell.First,itisagoodway②tolearnEnglishbyreadingaloudeveryday.③Themoreyoupractice,thebetteryouwilllearn.Second,youcanlearnEnglishbywatchingEnglishmoviesandlisteningtoEnglishsongs.Thesemethodswill④stimulateyourinterestinEnglishlearning,andhelpyou⑤acquiremoreknowledgeaboutEnglishlanguageandculture.Lastbutnotleast,youcanaskyourEnglishteacherforhelpifyou⑥findanydifficultyinlearningEnglish.Allinall,ifyou⑦putyourheartintoEnglishlearning,youwillcertainlylearnitwell.①It為形式主語(yǔ),指代后面的動(dòng)詞不定式.②tolearn...,此處動(dòng)詞不定式充當(dāng)后置定語(yǔ),修飾agoodway.③Themore...,thebetter...是形容詞比較級(jí)的句式.④stimulate,激發(fā).⑤acquiremoreknowledge,獲取更多知識(shí).⑥findanydifficultyin,發(fā)現(xiàn)在··.···方面有困難.⑦putsb.'sheartinto,全心投入.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)1.這篇作文能緊扣主題展開(kāi),層次分明,邏輯清晰.第一段點(diǎn)明主題,中間一段集中介紹如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ),最后一段歸納總結(jié).整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí),要點(diǎn)齊全.2.銜接詞運(yùn)用適當(dāng),使用了first,second,lastbutnotleast等連接前后句,語(yǔ)句銜接自然.3.文章語(yǔ)言豐富,如使用了inproperways,stimulatesb.'sinterestin,acquireknowledge,languageandculture,finddifficultyin,putsb.'sheartinto等,提升了文章的檔次.BHowIlearnEnglishWecannotlearnEnglishwell①withoutproperways.HerearesomesuggestionsonhowtolearnEnglishwell.②Firstandforemost,IthinkitagoodwaytoreadEnglishaloudeveryday.③Ibelievethatthemoreyoupracticereading,thebetteryouwilllearn.Second,whenyoufinddifficultyinlearningEnglish,donot④hesitatetoseekhelpfromyourEnglishteacher,⑤whowillbegladtoofferhelp.Mostimportantly,tostimulate⑥yourinterestinEnglishlearning,youcantrytofindsomeinterestingmethods,⑦suchaswatchingEnglishmovies,andlisteningtoEnglishsongs.Hopefully,theaboveadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.①withoutproperways,沒(méi)有適當(dāng)?shù)姆椒?②firstandforemost,首先也是最重要的.③Ibelievethat后為賓語(yǔ)從句.④hesitatetodosth.,猶豫做某事.⑤who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句.⑥yourinterestin,你對(duì)······的興趣.⑦suchas,比如.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)1.這篇作文緊扣主題,采用“三段式”框架,清晰表達(dá)了文章主題.首段引出主題,中間主體段落集中說(shuō)明如何學(xué)英語(yǔ)這一主題,尾段總結(jié).2.句子和句子間的銜接自然恰當(dāng),使用了firstandforemost,second,mostimportantly等銜接詞,使得文章銜接緊密,邏輯性強(qiáng).3.文章句式多樣,采用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等,增強(qiáng)了文章的可讀性.4.比起上一篇作文,該作文用語(yǔ)更為豐富,如使用了hesitate,seekhelpfrom,stimulateone'sinterestin等,提升了作文的語(yǔ)言表現(xiàn)力.佳作賞析AAdviceonhowtolearnEnglishAsweknow,English①iswidelyusedintheworld,anditisimportantforustolearnitwell.Nowletme②giveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglish.First,③gooverwhatwehavelearnedbefore,takenotesinclass,andreviewthemafterclass.Second,trytotalkwithyourclassmatesinEnglish④asoftenaspossible,anddonotbeafraidofmakingmistakeswhenyouarespeakingEnglish.Third,read⑤EnglishmaterialsandkeepanEnglishdiaryeveryday.Iamsurethatyouwill⑥makeprogressifyoufollowtheaboveadvice.①iswidelyused是被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu).②givesb.someadviceon,針對(duì)··.··給某人提些建議.③此處連用幾個(gè)祈使句,使文章簡(jiǎn)潔精煉.④asoftenaspossible,盡可能經(jīng)常.⑤Englishmaterials,英語(yǔ)資料.⑥makeprogress,取得進(jìn)步.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)1.文章布局合理,段落清晰,集中敘述了提出英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)建議這一主題.2.用表順序的first,second,third等銜接詞,自然、順暢銜接句子.3.句式較為豐富,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等句式.4.英語(yǔ)短語(yǔ)的使用,也為本文添彩,如goover,beafraidof,makeprogress等.BAdviceonhowtoreducelearningpressureAs①ninth-graders,wespendmuchtimestudyingourlessonsandpreparingfortests.Hereissomeadviceonhowtoreduceourlearningpressure.First,wecanlistentoourfavoritemusic②beforegoingtosleepatnight.Second,wecantakeexerciseinoursparetime③torestourbrainsandeyes.Finally,wecantalkaboutourdifficultiesorworriesinourstudieswithourparentsorfriends.④IhopethattheaboveadvicewillbehelpfultoGrade9students.①ninth-grader,九年級(jí)學(xué)生.②before+動(dòng)名詞充當(dāng)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ),簡(jiǎn)潔明了.③torest...,動(dòng)詞不定式表目的.④Ihope后為賓語(yǔ)從句.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)1.本文圍繞減輕學(xué)習(xí)壓力這個(gè)主題,分段敘述,邏輯清晰.2.文中動(dòng)名詞、動(dòng)詞不定式等運(yùn)用恰當(dāng),語(yǔ)句通順流暢.3.銜接詞first,second,finally等使用恰當(dāng),語(yǔ)句過(guò)渡自然.CWhydowestudy?Asstudents,wegotoschooleveryday,but①haveyoueverthoughtaboutwhywestudy?Inmyopinion,westudyforthefollowingreasons.First,wecanbecomeknowledgeablethroughourstudiesatschool,②whichwillenableustomakewiserdecisionsandactmoreeffectively.Second,bymeansofstudyingwecan③broadenourhorizonsandknowmoreabouttheworld.Third,westudy④tokeeppacewiththerapidlychangingworld;otherwise,wewill⑤lagbehindinthedevelopmentoftheworld.Inshort,studyingisanimportantwayforustoimproveourselves.①現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確.②which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；enable,使能夠.③broadenourhorizons,開(kāi)闊我們的視野.④tokeeppacewiththerapidlychangingworld,跟上快速變化的世界.⑤lagbehind,落后.亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)1.主題鮮明,段落清晰,主次分明.主體段落詳細(xì)說(shuō)明了學(xué)習(xí)的益處.2.定語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)詞不定式、動(dòng)名詞等的運(yùn)用,使這篇作文句式豐富多樣.3.銜接詞first,second,third等運(yùn)用得當(dāng),段落銜接自然.素材寶庫(kù)1.好詞妙語(yǔ)firstandforemost首先也是最重要的acquiremoreknowledge獲取更多知識(shí)givesb.someadviceon針對(duì)······給某人提些建議alifelongjourney終生的旅行Itiswellknownthat...眾所周知·.....dependonlearninghabits取決于學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣makeuseof使用haveabetterunderstandingof...更好地理解·.broadenourhorizons開(kāi)闊我們的視野2.提分佳句Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧.Nothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.世上無(wú)難事,只怕有心人.Themoreyouspeak,thefewermistakesyouwillmake.你說(shuō)得越多,犯的錯(cuò)誤就越少.Learningisalifelongjourney.學(xué)習(xí)是終生的旅行.Itiswellknownthatsuccesscannotbeachievedovernight.眾所周知,成功不能一蹴而就.Onlybyreadingbookscanweunderstanditssecrets.只有通過(guò)讀書(shū)我們才能理解它的奧秘.Whetheryoucanlearnitwelldependsonyourlearninghabits.你是否能夠?qū)W好它取決于你的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣.ThebestwaytolearnEnglishwellistouseitallthetime.學(xué)好英語(yǔ)最好的方法就是一直使用它.AgroupdiscussionhelpsmehaveabetterunderstandingofwhatIhavelearned.小組討論有助于我更好地理解我所學(xué)的東西.寫(xiě)作預(yù)熱句式變換1)Inclass,IfeltsleepyandIcouldnotlistentotheteachercarefully.(用when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和so...that...句式改寫(xiě)句子)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2)Icannotmanagemytimeproperly.(用havetroublein改寫(xiě)句子)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3)Goodlearnersmusthavesomegoodlearninghabits.Theyhelpthemlearnbetter.(改為含定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4)Ifwearenotafraidofmakingmistakes,wecanlearnEnglishwell.(改寫(xiě)成含onlyif的倒裝句)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案:1)WhenIwasinclass,IfeltsosleepythatIcouldnotlistentotheteachercarefully.2)Ihavetroubleinmanagingmytimeproperly.3)Goodlearnersmusthavesomegoodlearninghabitswhichhelpthemlearnbetter.4)OnlyifwearenotafraidofmakingmistakescanwelearnEnglishwell.實(shí)戰(zhàn)練筆假如你是李華,你的美國(guó)好友Lucy對(duì)中文感興趣,發(fā)郵件向你請(qǐng)教學(xué)習(xí)中文的方法.請(qǐng)你自擬標(biāo)題,回復(fù)信息,就如何學(xué)好中文發(fā)表你的看法.寫(xiě)作要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和校名；2.詞數(shù)90左右.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________