1、TEM4Composition,自由發(fā)揮型,專四大作文指導（3）自由發(fā)揮型,PartI真題分析PartII作文模板PartIII好的句型PartIV范文和例題寫作,PartI真題作文分析,自由發(fā)揮型,2005年真題作文,題目要求：TheStudentsUnionofyouruniversityisplanningtoholdanartsfestivalnextsemester,andtheyareinvitingstudentstocontributetheirideasandsuggestionsastohowitshouldbeorganizedorwhatshouldbeincluded

2、.MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestival,快速審題：2005年考題采用了新的英語專業(yè)四級考試大綱（修訂本），在寫作時間不變的前提（35分鐘）下，把大作文的字數(shù)由150詞增加到200詞左右。題目要求自由發(fā)揮型題目不管該觀點是否能被大多數(shù)人接受，只要自己說的有理有據(jù)就可以了。,注意兩點：1.學生會在征詢學生的意見，考生完全可以結合自身實際身份來進行探討；2.考生一定要明確什么是大學生藝術節(jié)。因為藝術的門類很廣泛，所以它能包括的內容也很多，如：電影節(jié)，美術展，才藝大賽，文學講座，話劇表演，設計競賽等等都可以涉及。這樣考生就有話可說了。,MyIdeaofaUniversityA

3、rtsFestival,Gladtohavetheopportunitytopresentmyideaoftheuniversityartsfestivaltobeheldinthenextsemester.AsanEnglishmajor,IwishwecouldhaveanEnglishsongcontestduringtheartsfestival.,開頭段：開門見山，從自己作為一個英語專業(yè)學生的角度，用Iwish句式提出建議：可以在大學生藝術節(jié)里考慮加入一個英語歌曲大賽。,Thereasonsarequiteclear.Aboveall,thereisastrongdemandforE

4、nglish-relatedactivitiesoncampus.IhaveorganizedseveralEnglish-relatedactivities,suchasEnglishdramaperformances,Englishreadingcontest.Alloftheseactivitieshavebeenwarmlyreceivedandproducedsatisfactoryresults.Accordingtothe,中間段：提出兩個理由：首先，結合自身實際說明學生希望多出現(xiàn)一些與英語相關的活動，采用了例證的方式。2.然后，推而廣之，論述此項建議對營造校園英語學習氛圍有積極

5、意義。,feedbacks,studentsofouruniversityareveryinterestedinsuchactivities,andtheyhopetohavemorechancestotakepartinthiskindofactivities.SoIthinkanEnglishsongcontestcanservethispurpose.Afurtherreasonformysuggestionisthatsuchanactivitycansurelypromotetheatmosphere,ofEnglishlearning.IfCET-4/6orTEM-4/8exami

6、nationsaretheonlydrivingforceforustostudyEnglish,ourworkisdullandboring.AnEnglishsongcontestprovidesanotherkindofstimulation.Duringthecourseofpreparingforthecontest,theplayerswillimprovetheirlisteningandspeakingcapabilities.Whatsmore,the,audiencewillalsofindtheirpassionforEnglishrenewed.Tosumup,anEn

7、glishsongcontestofferssomanybenefitsthatitisreallyasensibledecisiontoincludeitintheuniversityartsfestival.,結尾段：通過一個sothat句式總結了全文，呼應主題，全篇用詞、句式熟練地道，顯示出較強的語言功底。,2002年真題作文,題目要求：Nowadayspeoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareoftheimportanceofhealth.Andtheyhavedifferentwaystostayhealthy.Forexample,someexercise

8、everyday;otherstrytokeepabalanceddiet.WhatdoyouthinkisthebestwayTheBestWaytoStayHealthy,快速審題：自由發(fā)揮型題目題目中已經(jīng)給出了幾種選擇，考生既可以選擇兩者之一，也可以重新提出其他論點。最重要的是提出自己的觀點以后，要有充分的理由支持論點，說明為什么這是“我”認為的最好的辦法。,TheBestWaytoStayHealthy,Nowadays,thedesireforgoodhealthisuniversal.Youcannotexaggeratetheimportanceofgoodhealthtoomu

9、ch.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwaytokeephealthy?AsfarasIamconcerned,thebestwaytokeephealthyistodevelopagoodqualityofmind.,First,manypatients,infact,arementallytroubledratherthanphysicallysick.Thesepeopleareverysensitiveandfragile,thusoftenputthemselvesinanxieties.Oncetheyareunderpressure,theycannoteasily

10、getoutoftheshadowofdepressionandsadness.Theyshouldlearnhowtorelaxandreleasetheirtensednerves.,Besides,ifyouhavedevelopedagoodqualityofmind,youarelikelytogetalongwellwithothers,willingtoplayyourpartinthesociety.Enrollingforsomekeep-fitclubsorjoiningsometravelagency,whichbythemselvesarevariousversions

11、ofphysicalexercise,willbenefityoualot.,Asapoemsays,youthisnotaperiodoftime;itisastateofmind.Inordertohaveayoungheartandenjoypassionforlife,letstrytokeepagoodqualityofpsychology.,PartII模板范文,自由發(fā)揮型,自由發(fā)揮型題目，在提出一個話題之后，要求考生對此論題展開聯(lián)想，發(fā)揮創(chuàng)造力，提出自己的觀點，題目對此不加以任何限制。根據(jù)對歷年考題的分析，自由發(fā)揮型主要分為兩類。TheWay型要求考生就某一問題提出一個解決方案。

12、不管題目要求是OneWay還是TheBestWay，考生所提出的都應該是你所認為的最佳方案。MyIdea型問法可能是MyIdea也可能是MyView，甚至有可能是MyOpinion，MyAttitude等，實際要求考生寫的都是個人的觀點。,模板1（TheBestWay型）,Nowadays,itisaheatedlydiscussedtopicthat引出話題（轉述問題）.Peoplehaveputforwardvariousways,suchas例1，例2，例3,etc.Asforme,thebestwayto主題詞is論點.Thebenefitsformyideascanbegeneral

13、izedtotwomajorones.Firstofall,支持論點的理由1.Supposeif提出假想例子證明理由1.Anotherbenefitsisthat支持論點的理由2.引用名言或諺語證明理由2.Inconclusion,總結.So，提出建議.,范文,TheBestWaytoStayHealthyNowadays,itisheatedlydiscussedtopicthatwhatisthebestwaytostayhealthy.Peoplehaveputforwardvariousways,suchasdoingexercises,keepingabalanceddiet,tak

14、ingvitamintableseveryday,etc.Asforme,thebestwaytostayhealthyistokeepapositivemindtowardlife.Thebenefitformyideascanbegeneralizedtotwomajorones.Firstofall,apositivemindhelpstoreleaseyoufromthepressureorfrustrationofyourworkorlife.Supposeifyoualwayskeepabulldogmoodtowardeverything,youcannotbehealthyev

15、enifyouhaveaverygooddietandexerciseveryoften.,Anotherbenefitisthatthepositiveattitudehelpsyoutogainfriendship.Thereisnomanthatimparthisjoystohisfriends,butthathejoythemore.,asBaconsaid.Noonewouldliketomakefriendwithonewhoalwayscomplains.Inconclusion,mentalhealthisasimportantasphysicalhealth,butmored

16、ifficulttogain.Soonceyouareunderpressure,youshouldlearnhowtorelaxandreleaseyourtensednerves.Anddontforgettoshareitwithyourfriends!,Proverb,Thereisnomanthatimparthisjoystohisfriends,butthathejoythemore;andnomanthatimparthisgriefstohisfriends,buthegrievetheless.-Bacon與朋友分享歡樂者，無不歡樂倍增；與朋友分享悲傷者，無不悲傷減半。-培

17、根,模板2（MyIdea型）,MyViewonCollegeStudentsPayingtheTuitionFee,Thisproblemisamuchdebatedoneinthatitaffectsalmosteverybodyinthedailylives.Asacollegestudent,IthinkthatitisreasonableforChinesecollegestudentstopayseveralthousandYuanayearastheirtuitionfees.,Tobeginwith,thetuitionfeegoadsthestudentstobemoreind

18、ustrious.Inthepast,whentheydidnothavetopaythetuitionfee,somestudentsdidnottreasuretheopportunitymuch.So,mostofthemspenttimeinalazyandrelaxingway.However,thankstothefinancialpressure,manystudents,now,tendtoworkhardertocompeteforthescholarship.AfurtherreasonwhyIsupportthisisthatthetuitionfeeenablescol

19、legestoimprovetheirteachingqualities.Thereisgoodevidencetoshowthatthehardwareofcollegeshasbeenmuchefficientlyimprovedduringthelasttenyears,whenstudentscometoshoulderthecostwithgovernment.,Allinall,bothstudentsandcollegesgetbenefitswhenthestudentspayarationalamountofmoneyasthetuitionfee,onlyifthegove

20、rnmentanduniversitiesshouldtakemoreeffectivemeasurestoensurepoorstudentstofinishtheircollegestudies.,模板3（MyIdea型）,Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthat反方論點.Buttobefrank,Icannotagreewiththem.Frommypointofview,論點.Firstofall,支持論點的理由1.證明理由1.Besides,支持論點的理由2.證明理由2.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,aconclusioncanbed

21、rawnthat總結觀點.Iwish提出希望.,MyIdeaofaUniversityArtsFestival（2005）,Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthattheuniversityartsfestivalisjustaseriesofsingingordancingperformanceofstudents.Buttobefrank,Icannotagreewiththem.Frommypointofview,agooduniversityartsfestivalshouldbeafeastofarts.,Firstofall,agooduniversityart

22、sfestivalshouldbeachanceforstudentstogetintouchwithrealarts.Purearts,mostofthetime,seemtobefarawayfromstudentsreach.Ourschoolshouldmakeafulluseofthischancetocultivatestudentstastetowardpureart,suchasclassicalmusic,masterpaintings,goodbooks,etc.Besides,theuniversityartsfestivalshouldalsoserveasaneffe

23、ctivecompensationforextracurricularactivities.Weshouldensurethatthisisanactivitythatallstudentshavechancetoparticipatein.Inthisway,thecampuslifecanbegreatlyenrichedandthefestivalcanbereallyenjoyedbyeverybody.,Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,aconclusioncanbedrawnthatagooduniversityartsfestivalshouldbea

24、bigcourseofartseducationandanactivityofeverystudent.Iwishtheartsfestivalnextsemesterbecarefullydesignedandarrangedsothatitwillcaterfordifferentinterests.,PartIII好的句型,一、地道英語亮點強調句型,1.倒裝句型稍微改變英語基本句型中某一成分的位置，可以起到強調，突出被倒裝部分的作用。英語中的倒裝句型可分為：（1）全部倒裝here,there,now,then,thus等副詞或方位詞位于句首時，謂語動詞常用come,go,be,run等。

25、但是如果主語為代詞，則不用倒裝。,Hereisyourletter.Outrushedtheboy.Higherandhigherflewthewhiteballoontillitvanishedintheclouds.(2)部分倒裝,2.雙重否定句型,二、細節(jié)說明好用句型,1.對象法常用句型,例證：Thefollowingfactsmaycontributetothephenomenaofcollegestudentsdifficultyinfindingjobs.Tobeginwith,theenlargedcollegeenrollmentsuppliesmorethanenoughgr

26、aduateswithacertainspecialty.Therehasbeenanoverabundanceofexecutivesecretaries,lawyers,andcomputerprogrammers,etc.Inaddition,job-findingdifficultyalsoarisesfromthecurriculadesignofmanycolleges.Thesecollegeshavenotadjustedtheirmajorsandsubjectstomeetthedemandofmodernsociety.Finally,thedifficultyderiv

27、esfromgraduatesthemselves.Alargenumberofgraduateswouldratherstayjoblessinbigcitiesthantakepositionsinsmallorunderdevelopedcities.,2.對比法常用句型,例證:Thereisageneraldebateoverthephenomenonofcollegestudentsdo-ingapart-timejob.Peoplewhoareagainstitclaimthatstudentsshouldnotspendtheirlimitedcampustimeearningp

28、ocketmoney.Butpeoplewhoadvocateit,ontheotherhand,claimthat,bytakingamajor-relatedpart-timejoborsummerjob,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,butalsogainmuchexperience,whichtheywillneverbeabletogetfromtheirtext-books.,3.數(shù)據(jù)法常用句型,AccordingtotheUNESCOstatistics,intheyear1999alone,about4,000chi

29、ldrendiedofdifferentdiseasesorfamine,1,000ofwhomwereundertheageof6.UNESCO：聯(lián)合國教科文組織(UnitedNationsEducational,Scientific,andCulturalOrganization),4.引語法常用句型,例證：Astheproverbgoes:twoheadsarebetterthanone,whenseekingfuturecareer,weshouldalwaysremembertotalkwithparents,teachersoranyoneyoutrust,allofwhompos

30、sessrichandinvaluableexperienceandknowledgefromwhichwearesuretobenefitintheprocessofseekingourfuturecareer.,三、地道英語亮點句型,1.長短句交替出現(xiàn)、松散句掉尾句交替出現(xiàn)（1）長短句交替出現(xiàn),例1：Energyismuchneedednow.Nuclearplantsarecleanandeconomical.Theycanproducevastamountsofenergy.Butpeople,especiallylocalresidentsareveryconcernedabouts

31、afety.Theyholdastrongnegativeattitudetowardthem.對照組:Nuclearplantsareacleanandeconomicalwayofproducingvastamountstomuch-neededenergy,thoughpeople,especiallylocalresidents,whoareVeryconcernedaboutsafety,holdastrongnegativeattitudetowardthem.,PartIV臨摹練習,自由發(fā)揮型,預測題,Itisnotuncommononpresentcampusesthatman

32、ycollegestudentsarecrazilygoingaftertheiridolsatanycost.Inyouropinion,whatisthebestwaytoadmireidols?HOWTOADMIREIDOLSWISELY?Youaretowriteinthreeparts.Inthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyourviewis.Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithafewreasons.Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.,簡明陳述現(xiàn)狀，明確個人建議。根據(jù)寫作要求，分析提出此建議的具體原因。重申主題，并簡要總結,HOWTOADMIREIDOLSWISELY?,(1)Nowadays,manysuperstarsareenjoyingastrikingpopularityoncampus.