1、Section ,Writing,原句1,Farmers noticed that the well walls had deep cracks in them.,農(nóng)民們注意到井壁上有深深的裂縫。 點評,這個長句是由兩個簡單句合并而成： Farmers noticed something.,The well walls had deep cracks in them.,合并：句是句中 something 的具體內(nèi)容，故可用 that,引導句作 notice 的賓語來代替 something。,仿寫,昨天他說他再也不會去那里了。,_,我們相信明天會更好。,_,Yesterday he said

2、that he wouldnt go there any more.,We believe that tomorrow will be better.,原句2,Mice ran out of the fields looking for places to hide.老鼠從田,地里跑出來找地方躲避。 點評,這個長句是由兩個簡單句合并而成： Mice ran out of the fields.,Mice looked for places to hide.,合并：句和句主語相同，且句是句的目的，故可 將句的主語去掉，把謂語動詞改為現(xiàn)在分詞，作句的目的 狀語。,仿寫,他們坐在那里等待著懷特先生。

3、,_,請拿出筆來準備書寫。,_,They sit there waiting for Mr.White.,Please take the pen out preparing to write.,原句3,Slowly, the city began to breathe again.漸漸地，城市又恢復,了生機。 點評,此處 slowly 用于修飾整個句子。副詞修飾整個句子時一般 放在句首，并常用逗號隔開，這時的副詞常可以代替一些復雜 短語或句子結構。,仿寫,令人吃驚的是，他并沒有按時回來。,_,諷刺的是，建議的提出者卻根本不愿改變。 (提示：諷刺 ironically; 提出者 proposer

4、),_,Surprisingly, he didnt return on time.,Ironically, the proposer doesnt want to change at all.,地震 本單元出現(xiàn)的相關詞匯：,earthquake/quake (n.地震), burst (vi.爆裂；爆發(fā),n突然破,裂；爆發(fā)), event (n.事件；大事), steam (n.蒸汽；水汽), dirt (n.,污垢；泥土), ruin (n.廢墟；毀滅,vt.毀滅；使破產(chǎn)), suffering (n.,苦難；痛苦), injure (vt.損害；傷害), destroy (vt.破壞；毀

5、壞；消,滅), shock (vt.& vi.使震驚；震動,n休克；打擊；震驚), rescue,(n.& vt.援救；營救), trap (vt.使陷入困境,n陷阱；困境), disaster,(n.災難；災禍), bury (vt.埋葬；掩埋；隱藏), shelter (n.掩蔽；掩 蔽處；避身處), damage (n.& vt.損失；損害), frighten (vt.使驚嚇； 嚇唬), frightened (adj.受驚的；受恐嚇的), frightening (adj.令人恐 懼的), at an end (終結；結束), in ruins (嚴重受損；破敗不堪), dig ou

6、t (掘出；發(fā)現(xiàn)), fall down (倒塌), the rescue workers/doctors (營 救人員/醫(yī)生),本單元出現(xiàn)的相關句式：,1At.everything began to shake.在時，所有東西都開,始震動。,2It seems as if the world was at an end！仿佛到了世界末日！ 3 The number of people who were killed or injured reached,more than.傷亡的人數(shù)多達,4All of the.were gone.所有的都被摧毀了。 5All hope was not lo

7、st.并不是所有的希望都破滅了。 6Soon after the quake, .sent.to help.震后不久，派,出來幫助,有關自然災害的話題是歷年來高考英語寫作中的熱點，且 多以地震和海嘯為主，該類話題常以基礎寫作的形式出現(xiàn)，具 有較強的實事性和客觀性。,At 14：28 on May 12, 2008, a deadly earthquake hit southwest Chinas Sichuan Province, killing tens of thousands of people, injuring nearly 500,000, leaving over five mi

8、llion homeless and,causing,immeasurable,financial,loss,in,seconds.The,8.0-magnitude quake centered in Wenchuan County shook half of Asia and startled (使震驚) the whole world. The big quake was felt by half of China after several minutes.Some office workers in big cities as far as Shanghai, Beijing and

9、 Guangzhou got out from theirs high-rise office to avoid dizziness caused by the shake.,More than 100,000 PLA and armed police officers and soldiers marched day and night to head for the spot.Vast numbers of medical personnel and volunteers from all parts of China, as well as reporters from both cen

10、tral and local media swarmed into Sichuan, joining hands with the quake-affected people and braving continuous strong aftershocks.The ongoing quake relief and reconstruction work in China have kept writing,a,new,chapter,showing,the,great,human,love.The,earthquake-hit areas slowly recover with the he

11、lp and love.,結構 分析：,第一段開門見山地點出了地震發(fā)生的時間、地點、傷亡人,數(shù)以及財產(chǎn)損失情況，并且交待了震級和影響。,第二段描述了其他城市所受的影響，進一步說明此次地震,的嚴重程度。,第三段描述了震后的救援情況，并對其做出了評論，最后,敘述了此次地震的結果，使得文章有始有終。,亮點點評：,1使用了大量的現(xiàn)在分詞，如句用了四個并列的現(xiàn)在分 詞短語作結果狀語，在同一句中連續(xù)點出了地震后造成的幾種 后果，使得句子結構簡練，信息豐富；句中的現(xiàn)在分詞作目 的狀語，闡述了災后救援情況；句中的現(xiàn)在分詞則作后置定 語，點明了災后救援的意義。,2使用了被動語態(tài)，使文章有變化和層次感，如句。 3

12、使用了過去分詞作后置定語，如句。,描述地震等自然災害時，要首先給出讀者最關心、最重要 的信息，即地震等自然災害發(fā)生的時間、地點、造成的傷亡情 況、波及范圍等等，宜用凝練的語言首先進行概括。然后對所 知的災害發(fā)生時的具體情況進行描述，還需要向讀者告知救援 情況，最后是災害的最終結果。一般可以分為三段，即：開頭 概括具體過程救援與結果。因為是描述已發(fā)生的事件，時 態(tài)多用一般過去時。,必背詞匯,magnitude (n. 震級), victim (n. 罹難者), aftershock (n. 余震), collapse (v.倒塌；崩潰), medical (adj.醫(yī)療的), a large n

13、umber of (大量), quake relief (抗震救災), loss (n.損失), the trapped people ( 被困人員), homeless (adj. 無家可歸的), missing (adj. 失蹤的), earthquake-hit (adj. 遭 受 地 震 的 ), damage area ( 受 災 面 積 ), reconstruction (n.重建), return to normal (恢復正常),常用句式,1A deadly earthquake hit., killing.with.missing.一場嚴重,的地震襲擊了，造成死亡，失蹤。,2It killed.injuring.leaving.這次地震造成死亡，,受傷，使得,3.were sent to the earthquake-hit ar