1、英語書面表達(dá)漫畫寫作指導(dǎo),Tasks:,1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing,2010年江蘇省高考說明：writing,漫畫類,Difficulties,1. 讀圖 2. 解意 3. 謀篇,讀圖,1. 漫畫的題目 眼睛 2. 漫畫的畫面 細(xì)節(jié) 3. 漫畫的文字 觀點 4. 漫畫的夸張 寓意,讀圖,題目 畫面 文字 夸張

2、,讀圖,The underwear ( shorts for men and panties for ladies) is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet!,夸張,解意,1. 辨

3、明褒貶，找準(zhǔn)角度,夸獎褒揚(yáng) or 批評諷喻？,解意,. 聯(lián)系生活，明晰主旨,Imagination!,解意,注意: 文字說明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切記要認(rèn)真閱讀！,謀篇,3 parts: 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon,Part 1 Describe the picture,The picture is talking about/shows The picture shows a common phenomenon. The

4、picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are/is (are) doing The picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.,Part 2 Interpret the picture,It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows thatIt is the exact

5、reflection of The picture indicate that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that This is a satirical (諷刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,Part 3 Give your opinions,I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,should It is bett

6、er/advisable to I consider it necessary,Only in this way can.,must have to Do/Dont,注意點：,保證三要素體裁、時態(tài)、人稱正確,體裁：議論文 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時 人稱：第三人稱,Practice:,Practice:,Polish up your article!,1. To use linking words if necessary 2. To use complicated structures if possible,One possible version: For most of the parents,

7、 its no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Lets look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Inte

8、rnet safer for her children-hardware, software and underwear.,It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someones underwear, but it describes vividly parents distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their childrens security, some of them just

9、 cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line “the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!,From my

10、 point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guid

11、e instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.,注意點：,1. 保證三要素體裁、時態(tài)、人稱正確,體裁：議論文 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時 人稱：第三人稱,你不是父母！,人稱混亂！,注意點：,1. 保證三要素體裁、時態(tài)、人稱正確,體裁：議論文 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時 人稱：第三人稱,. 避免漫畫類作文的一些常見失

12、誤,1)誤解圖意,2) 企圖幽默,3)不明寓意,4)中心不明,注意點：,1. 保證三要素體裁、人稱、時態(tài)正確,體裁：議論文 人稱：第三人稱 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時,. 避免漫畫類作文的一些常見錯誤,. 控制字?jǐn)?shù)，結(jié)尾精煉,Too short!,Too long!,一篇好的英語漫畫作文,仔細(xì)審題 準(zhǔn)確立義 規(guī)范行文 整潔書寫,Not good!,Worse!,Neat!,Thank you!,Practice:,As can be seen from the cartoon, two ladies living in the opposite flat say “hello” when they ha

13、ppen to meet each other. The two women dont know each other even if they have been neighbors for years. It is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in the modern world. As we all know, most people live in apartments. They dont like to go out after work, and they will stay at home watch

14、ing TV or playing computer games. They dont have any connections even with their closest neighbors, who seem no different from people they meet every day in the street.,In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone