1、寫作技法點(diǎn)撥系列 五、完美銜接過渡, 巧妙起承轉(zhuǎn)合,【核心點(diǎn)撥】 高考書面表達(dá)最高檔次的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)要求“有效地使用了語句間的連接成分, 使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”。要想在高考有限的時(shí)間里寫出能獲得較高分?jǐn)?shù)的書面表達(dá), 就必須應(yīng)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯舆^渡詞匯來使句子、段落之間的銜接通順自然, 達(dá)到內(nèi)容連貫, 文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的目的。,一、語句間常用的銜接過渡詞匯,二、段落間常用的銜接過渡詞匯 文章段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系主要由過渡詞來完成, 在修辭中稱為起、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合?！捌稹本褪情_頭, “承”是承接, “轉(zhuǎn)”是轉(zhuǎn)折, “合”是綜合或總結(jié)。,【即時(shí)應(yīng)用】 下面是一篇題為“Haste makes waste(欲速則不達(dá))”的文章,

2、 請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示填寫出恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞以確保語篇連貫。,Haste makes waste There is an old saying, “Haste makes waste. ”Its the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct and of great importance in many cases even today.,_(表順序)it teaches us that we shouldnt be overanxious about quick results. _(表轉(zhuǎn) 折)we will fail. _(表遞進(jìn))i

3、f we emphasize too much upon speed, we will suffer sooner or later. _(表舉例)if we are too hasty in tests, it is very possible that we may make some mistakes or even fail. _(表遞進(jìn))we may,Firstly,Otherwise,In addition,For example/For instance,Whats more,leave a bad impression on both the teachers and clas

4、smates that we are careless. _ _(再次舉例)if a sportsman is hasty in an important game, he may lose a very precious opportunity to win the championship. _ (表結(jié)果)he will lose the confidence to pick the pieces up.,For another,example,As a result,Haste has many side effects. On the one hand, haste may result in wrong decision or more mistakes. _ _(表列舉)haste means a failure or an accident in some important occasion.,On,the other hand,_(表總結(jié))whatever we do, do pay atte