1、,話題寫作（九） 節(jié)日與傳統(tǒng),第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理,【話題點(diǎn)睛】針對(duì)的話題主要關(guān)于各國(guó)各地的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣、傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、風(fēng)土人情。主要涉及描述節(jié)假日的活動(dòng)安排、各國(guó)的飲食習(xí)慣、節(jié)日習(xí)俗、禮節(jié)禮儀等方面。,某國(guó)外雜志向你約稿,請(qǐng)你以“When in China, do as the Chinese do!”為題,向西方讀者介紹中國(guó)的飲食文化。以下是雜志社的稿件要求,請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀,完成寫作。,要求 （1）文章應(yīng)至少包括框中的四條信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名; （3）詞數(shù): 80100。,【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1.要點(diǎn)提煉:主題是介紹中國(guó)的飲食文化,文章主要是從稿件要求中回答至少四個(gè)問(wèn)題。 2

2、.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 3.確定人稱:第三人稱或第一人稱。,【寫作架構(gòu)】,【基礎(chǔ)寫作】 根據(jù)所給提示寫句子。 1.基礎(chǔ)句這是一些關(guān)于在中國(guó)一起用餐的事情。（eat together） . 升格句這是一些你可能希望知道的關(guān)于在中國(guó)一起用餐的事情。（that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句） . 2.基礎(chǔ)句中國(guó)餐桌上主要的不同點(diǎn)是筷子。（the main difference） . 升格句當(dāng)然,中國(guó)餐桌上主要的不同點(diǎn)是筷子而不是刀和叉。（instead of） .,Here are some things about eating together in China.,Here are some things t

3、hat you may wish/hope to know about eating together in China.,The main difference on the Chinese dinner table is chopsticks.,Of course, the main difference on the Chinese dinner table is chopsticks instead of knives and forks.,3.基礎(chǔ)句進(jìn)行一些練習(xí)。（practice） . 升格句進(jìn)行一些練習(xí)是個(gè)好主意。（Its a good idea to） .,Get some p

4、ractice.,Its a good idea to get some practice.,【連句成文】 When in China, do as the Chinese do! There are many differences between Chinese and Western eating habits and customs. Here are some things that you may wish to know about eating together in China. When in China, people usually eat lunch or dinne

5、r much earlier than people in the West. There will be a lot of different dishes, not just three courses. Chinese people like to eat rice, noodles, vegetables and meat while Western people prefer bread, milk and steak. Of course, the main difference on the Chinese dinner table is chopsticks instead,o

6、f knives and forks. Its a little difficult to use chopsticks if you havent tried before. Its a good idea to get some practice. The preparation takes a long time and everything will look beautiful. The plates will be placed in the middle of the table, for everyone to share. Chinese people like to tal

7、k about food, so its a good topic of conversation. At the end of the meal, you will usually be served with fruit. The golden rule is:When in China, do as the Chinese do!,【相關(guān)短語(yǔ)】 get ready for 為做準(zhǔn)備; put things away整理東西; sweep the floor掃地; cook the meal做飯; a traditional dinner一頓傳統(tǒng)的晚餐; lucky money紅包; sh

8、ake hands握手; nod heads點(diǎn)頭; hug each other相互擁抱; afternoon tea下午茶; at the start of a meal在一頓飯開始時(shí); have one day off休息一天; lay the table擺餐具,【參考諺語(yǔ)】 1.When in Rome, do as the Romans do. 入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。 2.East or west, home is best. 金窩、銀窩,不如自己的草窩。 3.You cant make something out of nothing. 巧婦難為無(wú)米之炊。,【亮點(diǎn)句型】 節(jié)日表達(dá) 1.Sprin

9、g Festival is the most important festival in China. 2.It usually comes in February, but sometimes it comes in January. 3.We celebrate the Spring Festival with a traditional family dinner on the evening before the Spring Festival. 餐桌禮儀表達(dá) 1.In some Western countries, lunch is usually eaten at about 1

10、pm. 2.In Spain it is usual to have lunch at 3 pm and dinner at 10 pm! 3.Soup is eaten with a spoon.,風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣表達(dá) 1.Chinese often shake hands and smile when they meet visitors. 2.People do different things in different countries. 3.In India people put their hands together and nod their heads. 4.Chinese gir

11、ls often walk arm in arm with their friends.,A 假定你是蘇華,你的加拿大筆友Ryan是一個(gè)中國(guó)迷,他想在中秋節(jié)期間來(lái)中國(guó)看看,請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀他的郵件,并回復(fù)。,注意 （1）詞數(shù):90左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); （2）回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順; （3）文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 Dear Ryan, Im glad youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. I hope my reply

12、is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China. Su Hua,One possible version: Dear Ryan, Im glad youre coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. The Mid-Autumn Festival is in the middle of autumn. It is a time for the family to get together and celebrat

13、e harvest. At night, the whole family get together and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes. The old often tell the story of Change while watching the big bright moon.,Suzhou is a beautiful city with many Chinese gardens. Its well worth visiting. You can take the high-speed railway to Shanghai or ma

14、ny other cities. You can buy different kinds of mooncakes as gifts because the mooncakes are round like the moon. They carry peoples wishes to the families they love. I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China. Su Hua,B2019深圳 假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友Tony對(duì) “中國(guó)紅” 一詞很感興趣,想了解“中國(guó)

15、紅”在中國(guó)人日常生活中的體現(xiàn),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格信息寫一封回信幫助他了解。,提示詞婚禮 wedding,中國(guó)結(jié) Chinese Knot,紅包 red packet,代表 stand for Dear Tony, Its great to receive your letter. Im writing to tell you something about Chinese red. I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red. Yours, Li Hua,One possible version

16、: Dear Tony, Its great to receive your letter. Im writing to tell you something about Chinese red. As we all know, Chinese red is one of the most popular colors in China, and it is deeply loved by people of all ages. The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and fortune.

17、 Whats more, it can bring people good luck as well. When the traditional Chinese Spring Festival is coming, Chinese red will come into your eyes whenever and wherever you are. When you attend someones wedding,ceremony, what impresses you most is Chinese red. On these occasions, Chinese red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese Knots, red pack