1、Basic writing skills,Ways of writing good sentences,2008年廣東省高考 英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作 寫(xiě)作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)第一節(jié) 基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作(共1小題，滿分15分) 你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的一名志愿者，負(fù)責(zé)編寫(xiě)奧運(yùn)比賽項(xiàng)目的英語(yǔ)介紹。,寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下中文提綱，編寫(xiě)射擊項(xiàng)目的英語(yǔ)介紹：背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀(jì)末才發(fā)展成為一項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。1896：第一次成為奧運(yùn)項(xiàng)目1904：中斷 1928：中斷 1932：重回奧運(yùn)會(huì) 1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運(yùn)射擊比賽 現(xiàn)狀：穩(wěn)步發(fā)展，1896奧運(yùn)會(huì)只有三項(xiàng)射擊項(xiàng)目，現(xiàn)今有17項(xiàng)。,寫(xiě)作要求

2、只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。, Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympics. H

3、owever, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,廣東08高考基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作范文：,句子表達(dá)有何亮點(diǎn)？, Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed

4、into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympics. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the spo

5、rt becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.,廣東08高考基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作范文：,句子表達(dá)有何亮點(diǎn)？,How can you make your sentences better and more beautiful or complex?,1)借助一句多譯方法 2)借助非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ) 或 with 結(jié)構(gòu) 3)借助豐富句型：用好復(fù)合從句 (定語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句）,方法一

6、. 一句多譯（students handout）,這本書(shū)花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. The book cost me 300 yuan.,Practice 一句多譯,昨天下午他才來(lái)。 He came here yesterday afternoon. It _that he came here. He _come here _ yesterday afternoon. It was not until yeste

7、rday afternoon that he came here. _ yesterday afternoon did he come here.,was yesterday afternoon,didnt,until,Not until,Rewrite the sentences,方法二. 用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 使句子簡(jiǎn)潔高檔,（1）Most of the artists who had been invited to the party were from South Africa.,Most of the artists _to the party were from South Africa.

8、,（2）Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park in order that they could keep healthy.,Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park _ _healthy.,invited,to keep,方法二. 使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞) 聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息,他們變的很激動(dòng). _the news, they got exci

9、ted. 2. 盡管被告知許多遍, 他仍然重復(fù)這個(gè)錯(cuò). _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀請(qǐng)發(fā)言,你應(yīng)該在會(huì)議上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Practice,方法三.豐富的句式,Sentence patterns Are Always Useful,The dog jumped into the river and pulled the girl to the ban

10、k. It was the dog that jumped into the river and pulled the girl to safety. The square is near the Great Wall Hotel. Near the Great Wall Hotel is the square. You will have to work hard for years to speak good English. It will take years of hard work to speak good English.,強(qiáng)調(diào)句,倒裝句,It 作形式主語(yǔ) 句型,1. To h

11、is surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句） 2.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型),_is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式,It was _ that he knew wha

12、t had happened.,Study hard _youll make rapid progress.,What surprises him,and,not until he had read the news in the newspaper,Use different ways to describe one sentence. Make sentences by using non-predicate. 3. Sentence patterns are always useful,Summaries:,寫(xiě)作要求 1.使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。 2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章

13、結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。,大試身手：寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容：介紹動(dòng)畫(huà)片,Lets make preparations.,.,First step :,步驟一：使句子內(nèi)容完整性將所給信息整合成5個(gè)句子,這個(gè)動(dòng)畫(huà)片以羊群和狼群生活的草原作為背景。 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。 喜羊羊聰明伶俐，樂(lè)觀勇敢。 灰太狼總是帶著一頂帶補(bǔ)丁的黃帽子。 無(wú)論怎樣，它總是抓不住羊。 故事童趣但不幼稚，益智卻不枯燥。 由于取得巨大成功，至今卡通公司獲得很多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)，并推出了玩偶，圖書(shū)，游戲等相關(guān)產(chǎn)品。,嘗試整合信息,步驟二：找出句子所需的詞匯，短語(yǔ)并翻譯,Second step :,Useful words and expressions:,以為背景

14、草原 羊家族 樂(lè)觀 有趣 益智 至今 推出 獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng) 相關(guān)的,be set in/on grasslands goat family optimistic/ hold a positive attitude toward life funny/ interesting inspiring up to now put forward award relevant,Lets translate the simple sentences!,., .,Translate the following sentences:,這個(gè)動(dòng)畫(huà)片以羊群和狼群生活的草原作為背景。 喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。 喜羊羊聰明伶俐，樂(lè)

15、觀勇敢。 灰太狼總是帶著一頂帶補(bǔ)丁的黃帽子。 無(wú)論怎樣，它總是抓不住羊。 故事童趣但不幼稚，益智卻不枯燥。 由于取得巨大成功，至今卡通公司獲得很多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)，并推出了玩偶，圖書(shū)，游戲等相關(guān)產(chǎn)品。,嘗試整合信息,這個(gè)動(dòng)畫(huà)片(cartoon series )以羊群和狼群生活的草原作為背景(is set on )。 1.This cartoon series is set on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live. 故事童趣但不幼稚(childish)，啟智卻不枯燥。 （arebut not） 2.The stories are funny but

16、 not childish, inspiring but not boring.,（使用 定語(yǔ)從句）,喜羊羊(Pleasant Goat )是羊族的小英雄。 Pleasant Goat is a little hero in the goat family. 喜羊羊(Pleasant Goat )聰明伶俐，勇敢樂(lè)觀。 Pleasant Goat is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life. 合并上面兩個(gè)句子為一句 （定語(yǔ)從句） 3. Pleasant Goat who is clever, brave and h

17、olds a positive attitude toward his life is a little hero in the goat family.,灰太狼(Big Big Wolf )總是戴著一頂帶補(bǔ)丁(patches)的黃帽子。 （with介詞短語(yǔ) 做定語(yǔ)） The Big Big Wolf always wears a yellow hat with patches. 無(wú)論他怎樣努力嘗試，總是抓不住羊（讓步狀語(yǔ)從句） No matter how hard he tries ,he can never catch any goats. 合并上面兩個(gè)句子 （非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞-wear） 4.

18、The Big Big Wolf ,always wearing a yellow hat with patches, can never catch any goats, no matter how hard he tries.,由于取得巨大成功，至今卡通公司獲得(win)很多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)(award)，并推出了玩偶，圖書(shū)，游戲等相關(guān)產(chǎn)品(relevant products )。 介詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ) (because of) 5. Because of the great success of Pleasant Goat and Big Big wolf, up to now the cartoon c

19、ompany has won a lot of awards and put forward relevant products such as toys, books and computer games.,This cartoon series is set on the grasslands where the goats and wolves live. The stories are funny but not childish, inspiring but not boring. Pleasant Goat who is clever, brave and holds a positive attitude toward his life ，is a little