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[2022年汕頭一模讀后續(xù)寫】閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Afteraverymeaningfulconversationwithmydadabouttheolddays,wecameupwithanobjectthatwebothrememberedclearly.Itwasmyveryfirstbicycle.MymindtoldmeIgotitwhenIwasseven,whowascheatedtorideitforfiftyyardsalonethefirsttimeItried!Mydadputtogetherallthesmallpiecesofthebicyclefromabeautifulmaterialthathecalled,"Yourowncar."OfcourseIknewhehadsomemagicalability,butIdidn!tthinkhecouldmakesuchanawesomeobject.Headdedtheseatandthepedals(踏板)sothatIwouldnothaveanyproblems.MydadrecalledthebicyclewasthesmallesthecouldfindwhileIrememberhowhugeitwas.IwassoafraidofitandtherewasnowaythatIwasgoingtocontrolthatmonster-sizedmaterial.Thebicyclewasleftinmybackyardasadecorationforamonthbecause1refusedtorideit.Honestly,Iwasscaredtotryit.Afteramonth,mydadgavemealecturetoteachmewhatbeingamanwasallabout.Iwasfinallydeterminedtotryit.MydadwasproudofmeandIfeltverymanly.HeandIwenttotheparktoseewhatwecoulddothere.Theparkwasemptywhenwearrived.Ihadnodoubtthatmydadtoldeverybodynottobetherebecausewehadtouseit.Ifeltsorryforotherpeople,butIwasproudtohavesuchanomnipotent(全能的)personasmydad.Wefoundasmoothandopenspace.MydadwasholdingthebackpartoftheseattomakesureIdidn'tfell.HepromisedmethatIwasnotgoingtofallbecausehewouldberunningrightbehind,holdingthebicycle.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.【文本解析】故事大意:文體為personalnarrativewriting,敘述的是個(gè)人第一次的騎行經(jīng)歷。文本較為簡(jiǎn)單。具體情節(jié)為作者我在爸爸的鼓勵(lì)和幫助下第一次學(xué)習(xí)騎自行車,在爸爸再三承諾會(huì)扶著自行車后座后我不知不覺地騎了50yards,轉(zhuǎn)頭卻發(fā)現(xiàn)爸爸早就放開了手…必須要回答的問題:Paral:Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.HowdidIfeeloncethebicyclemoved?Howwoulddadrespond?WhywouldIturnaround?Para2:1turnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.WhatwouldhappentomewhenIturnedaround?WhatwouldIsaytomydad?Whataboutmyfirstridingexperience?DidImakeiteventually?語言積累:騎車心理描寫ContrarytothefirsttimeIrode,Ichangedmyattitudetoitandmadeuptobebrave.ItwasnotunexpectedthatIkeptmybalanceandrodesmoothlyonmyown.Challengingthoughitwas,Ieventuallyovercomeitandhadagoodcommandofit.Immediately,Iwasenvelopedinpanicwithmyheartbeatingviolently.騎車動(dòng)作描寫Feelingalitterscaredbutconfident,Itiredmybesttocontrolthebicycleandmovedatalowpace.Anxiousanddesperate,Icriedatthetopofmylungsinanattempttomakemyselfheardbymyfather.Then,Irechargedmyselfandgaveasecondtry.結(jié)尾句Isucceededinconqueringmyinneranxietyandriding.Fromthisunforgettableexperience,Ialteragreatdeal.Iamalwayswillingtotrynewthings.Afterseveralminute'stry,Imadeit.Thismyfirstbicycletripwasaturningpointforme,showingthatIgrewintoabraveboy.Incredible5itdidn'ttakelongbeforeIcouldcontrolmybicyclemorepractically.【范文展示】Istartedtopedalandthebicyclemoved.Sweatwellingonmyforehead,Itriedmyutmosttokeepthebalancebycontrollingthehandle.SortofafraidasIwas,ImademyselfcalmdownbecauseIknewmydadwouldkeepprotectingme.WhatIneededtodowasholdingthebarsandkeepingpedaling.Withitmoving,Ifeltitwasn'tasdifficultaslhadexpectedandevenbegantospeedup.SodelightedwasIthatIwantedtoyelloutandsharemyfeelingswithmydad.Iturnedaroundandfoundmydadwasnotbehind.Agreatsenseofshockandscareseizedmeandmymindsuddenlywentblank.MybodybeganshakingandIfelloffthebicycle.Lyingontheground,Ifeltgreatpainsonmylegs.ThenDadapproachedandsaid,“Bemanly."Regainingmycourage,Iclimbedontothebicycleagain.Iheldthebarstightlyandmad

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