讀后續(xù)寫之動作描寫簡單有效的六個微技能基礎(chǔ)技能：1.運用具體動詞替代籠統(tǒng)動詞

2.運用恰當短語替代普通動詞

中階技能：3.增加修飾成分

4.構(gòu)造動作鏈

高階技能：5.多角度描述肢體動作

6.構(gòu)造動作面

如何使動作描寫更飽滿？感知:結(jié)合語境,如何優(yōu)化表達？1.Becauseofhislies,shelookedathim.Becauseofhislies,sheglaredathim.2Withonlytwentysecondsleft,Irantotheline.Withonlytwentysecondsleft,Irush/dashedtotheline.3.Withonlytwominutesleft,heatehismeal.Withonlytwominutesleft.Heswalloweduphismeal.4.Sheheardhermothersayquietlyasshewalkeddownthehall,"Don'twakeyourdadup."Sheheardhermotherwhisperedasshetiptoeddownthehall,"Don'twakeyourdadup."Skill1：ChooseAccurateVerbs用精準動詞代替籠統(tǒng)動詞generalwords（籠統(tǒng)詞）concretewords(具體詞）

walktiptoe(躡手躡腳地走)rundash/rush(猛沖)

lookglance(瞥見)glare(怒視)stare(凝視)

say/talkchat(閑聊)whisper(耳語)cryweep/sob（啜泣)

eatbite(咬)chew（咀嚼)swallow(吞下)Skill2：Chooseproperphrases用恰當短語代替普通動詞start/begingetdowntodoingdecidemakeupone'smindcryburstintotearsrememberkeepinmindtiredwornoutseecatchsightofattractappealtoSkill3.加介詞短語/副詞修飾動作ThefiercewolfstaredatMacwithits__sharp/bloody/frightening/scary/terrible______teeth.__________Immediately/Instantly/Hurriedly/Breathlessly______(adv),hejumpedoffthebicycleanddashedintothecar.Asthehungrywolfwasalmostreachinghim,Mac’seyeswerewideopen____infear/panic/horror/shock_.(in/with+名詞)Skill4：分解動作，形成動作鏈Actionchains把動作過程分解成一連串的動作，構(gòu)造動作鏈，讓你的動作描寫既豐富又生動！擁抱hug.→__沖向前__>__跳起來_>____一把抱住__shedashedforward,jumpedupandhuggedtheboytightly.連續(xù)的動作，直接用并列謂語表達:__Sb.謂語A,謂語Band謂語C思考：跳入湖前有哪些動作動作鏈Moreexamples思考：跳入湖前有哪些動作Theboys

rushed

excitedlytothelake,

tookoff

theirclothesand

jumpedinto

thewater.孩子們興奮地沖到湖邊，脫下衣服，跳進了水里。jumpedintothewatertookofftheirclothes+rushedtothelake+孩子們跳入湖中嬉戲=沖向湖邊_+Theboys

rushed

excitedlytothelake,

tookoff

theirclothesand

jumpedinto

thewater.孩子們興奮地沖到湖邊，脫下衣服，跳進了水里。jumpedintothewatertookofftheirclothes+rushedtothelake+孩子們跳入湖中嬉戲=Iputonmycoathurriedly,grabbedmybagandrushedtoschoolthismorning.rushedtoschoolgrabbedmybag+putonmycoatIputonmycoathurriedly,grabbedmybagandrushedtoschoolthismorning.rushedtoschoolgrabbedmybag+putonmycoat+=思考：匆忙上學(xué)前有哪些動作我早上匆忙去上學(xué)動作鏈動作鏈句型1Practice1.我在臺上開始唱歌→____掃視觀眾_>_____深吸一口氣___>______開始演唱______I

anxiouslyglancedat

theaudience,

took

adeepbreathandbeganto

sing.2.妻子擁抱躺在病床上的丈夫_____走上前__>____彎下腰_>___緊緊抱住___Wifewalkedforward,bentdownandhuggedthehusbandtightly._____動作鏈句型2Doing/Havingdone,句子看到戒指后，妻子感到很震驚______Seeingthering,shefeltshocked.2.同時發(fā)生的動作，可以用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語表達。我父親拍拍我的肩膀，鼓勵我永遠不要放棄我的夢想__Myfatherpattedmeontheshoulder,encouragingmenevertogiveupmydreams.1.狀從（while,when,as,before,after）句式總結(jié).1.狀從（while,when,as,before,after）1.受驚嚇的Mac沖到車的后座，在狼襲擊到他之前把門關(guān)上了。__ThefrightenedMacdashedintothebackseatofthecarandslammedthedoorbeforethewolfstruckhim.→2.2.并列謂語動詞（sbdidsth1,didsth2anddidsth3）麥克毫不猶豫跳下自行車，沖向車的后門，猛然地關(guān)上車門。__Macjumpedoffthebicyclewithoutanyhesitation,dashedtothebackdoorandslammedthedoorheavily.→3.3.非謂語doing(sbdidsth1,doingsth2或者doingsth1，sbdidsth2）想到狼血淋淋的嘴，麥克嚇得要死，踹不上氣。___Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,breathless,Macwasnearlyscaredtodeath.→4.獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)4.獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)(n./pron.+doing/done/adj./prep.phrases…)→__Themanagersatquietlyintheoffice,(his)eyesclosed.→Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigid（僵硬的）withanger→________Theboystoodthere,hisfacerigidwithanger.→心嚇得狂跳跳下自行車；沖進車里；腿抖緊握把手；用力關(guān)車門扭頭往后看狼有多遠心嚇得狂跳跳下自行車；沖進車里；腿抖緊握把手；用力關(guān)車門扭頭往后看狼有多遠Skill5：describebodyactionsfrommulti-perspectives從頭部手部腿部呼吸心跳等多角度描寫肢體動作低頭；抬頭；點頭；搖頭；轉(zhuǎn)頭；陷入沉思；撓頭dashinto;fleeaway;slipinto;dragone’slegs;quickenone’space;struggletoone’sfeet;kneeldown;runwithallone’sstrength心情低落；心融化了；心跳的很快；激動得直跳；心痛one’sheartsink/melt;beatfast;poundwithexcitement;one’sheartache緊緊相擁；投入sb.懷抱；揮舞手臂；舉手；拍肩膀；摔門；手抖低頭；抬頭；點頭；搖頭；轉(zhuǎn)頭；陷入沉思；撓頭dashinto;fleeaway;slipinto;dragone’slegs;quickenone’space;struggletoone’sfeet;kneeldown;runwithallone’sstrength心情低落；心融化了；心跳的很快；激動得直跳；心痛one’sheartsink/melt;beatfast;poundwithexcitement;one’sheartache緊緊相擁；投入sb.懷抱；揮舞手臂；舉手；拍肩膀；摔門；手抖lower/bend/raise/nod/shakeone’shead;turnone’sheadaround;belostinthought;scratchone’shead緊緊相擁；投入sb.懷抱；揮舞手臂；舉手；拍肩膀；摔門；手抖hugtightly;throwoneselfintoone’sarms;waveone’sarms;raiseone’shand;patsbontheshoulder;slamthedoor;one’shandstremble____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________最常用的4大動詞：露出燦爛的笑容；臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩；喜悅洋溢在臉上；苦笑；歡樂涌上眼眶；露出燦爛的笑容；臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩；喜悅洋溢在臉上；苦笑；歡樂涌上眼眶；看到；盯著；怒視；掃視；眨眼；目不轉(zhuǎn)睛；直視;大哭；抽泣；擦去淚水；抑制淚水；淚水流下臉頰；淚水模糊了視線；眼含淚水耳語；責(zé)罵；吹口哨；尖叫；喊叫；好奇地問；安慰；繼續(xù)說；打斷說；咆哮catchsightofstareat;glareat;glanceat;blink;can’ttakeone’seyesoff…;lookintoone’seyes;catchsightofstareat;glareat;glanceat;blink;can’ttakeone’seyesoff…;lookintoone’seyes;burstoutcrying/burstintotears;sob;wipethetears;holdbackone’stears;withtearsstreamingdowntheface;tearsblurone’svision;tearswellupinsideone’seyesflashabrightsmile;facelightup/brighten;joyspreadone’sface;smilebitterly;joywellupinsideone’seyeswhisper;scold;whistle;scream;shout/yell;askwithcuriosity;comfort;add;interrupt;howlSkill6：構(gòu)造動作面Creatingawholepicture句型:句型:__Done/Doing,句子主干,doing句子主干,doing+doing_________________________________________________①Encouragedby①Encouragedbytheteacher'swords,LiHuaraisedhishandhigh,saying,“Ivolunteer.”②Encouragedby②Encouragedbytheteacher'swords,Tomhesitatedtoraisehishand,whispering,“ignore