Unit2I'llhelptocleanupthecityparksSectionB(3a-3c)Writingworkinanoldpeople'shomecheerupsickchildrenVolunteerworkcleanupthecityparkshelpkidswithhomeworkgiveoutsomeoldbooksWhatdoyouvolunteertodo,ifyouareavolunteer？Iwouldliketosinganddance.tellstories.I'dliketocheerupsickkidsinthehospital.Whatothervolunteerworkcanyoudo?寫作案例

某兒童之家正在招募一批志愿者,你想成為其中的一員，請(qǐng)你給該服務(wù)機(jī)構(gòu)寫一封自薦信和你的志愿計(jì)劃。80詞左右1.周日去兒童福利院做一些義務(wù)工作：幫助打掃房間、給孩子們捐贈(zèng)故事書、給他們講故事等。2.你可以教孩子們唱歌、跳舞，也可以教他們學(xué)英語。3.你對(duì)志愿者活動(dòng)的感受。查美連列審審題：體裁、主題、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)列提綱：開頭、中間、結(jié)尾、重點(diǎn)詞句連詞成句、連句成篇運(yùn)用連詞、過渡語句美化、豐富篇章檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、句法連貫、邏輯明確用5步寫作法分析應(yīng)用文體裁

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第一人稱人稱審題1.Whichvolunteerjobdoesthewriterwanttodo?2.Whenishefreetodothejob?3.Whatarethewriter'sinterestsandhobbies?4.Howcanhehelptodothejob?5.Whydoeshewanttodothevolunteerjob?Volunteeringatachildren'shome.OnSundays.Heloveschildren.Cleantherooms,giveawaysomestorybookstothem,tellstories,teachchildrentosinganddanceandteachchildrenEnglishBecausehe'llgetpleasureandimprovehimself.問題法豐滿寫作內(nèi)容DearSirorMadam,

Iamwritingtoyouaboutvolunteeringatachildren'shomeonSundays.IlovechildrenandIwanttovolunteertolookafterchildren.

I'llhelpthemcleantheirrooms.l'llnotonlygiveawaysomestorybookstothembutalsotellthemstories.I'mgoodatsinginganddancingandIcanteachchildrentosinganddance.IspeakEnglishwellandIcanteachthemEnglishaswell.SoIthinkI'dbegoodatthisjob.

Fromtheactivities,I'llgetpleasureandimprovemyself.IamsureIwillbeagoodvolunteer.Yourstruly,xxxxbeginningbodyendingSummary點(diǎn)明主題描述活動(dòng)說明感受volunteeringinachildren'shomeI'llhelptocleantheirrooms.I'llgiveawaystorybookstothemandtellthemstories.Icanteachchildrensinganddance.I'msureIwillbeagoodvolunteer...WhichvolunteerjobHowtodoitFeeling小試身手

某養(yǎng)老院正在招募一批志愿者,你想成為其中的一員，請(qǐng)你給該服務(wù)機(jī)構(gòu)寫一封自薦信和你的志愿計(jì)劃。80詞左右。參考詞匯：

singtotheold,cheerthemup,playgameswiththeold,tellstoriestothemDear...IamwritingtoyouaboutvolunteeringinOldPeople'shomeontheeveningsfromMondaytoWednesday.Iaminterestedintalkingwiththeold.First,IreadmanystorybooksandIcantellthemstories.Second,I'mgoodatsinginganddancingandIcanteachthemtosinganddance.Last,Iloveplayinggames,soIcanplaygameswiththeold.IthinkI'dbegoodatthisjob.

Fromtheactivities,I'llgetpleasureandimprovemyself.IamsureIwillbeagoodvolunteer.YourstrulyxxxOneexampleAssessment(評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn))language(語言)6分structure(結(jié)構(gòu))3分content(內(nèi)容)9分

handwriting(書寫)2分

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spellingorgrammarmistakesgoodsentences

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cleanandtidyhowtodoitsummaryandopinionSummaryvolunteer

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