1、書面表達(dá) 應(yīng)試策略,一、近幾年湖北省高考書面表達(dá)命題特點(diǎn),二、寫作要求,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的完整性,詞匯運(yùn)用的準(zhǔn)確性,語言的得體性,上下文的連貫性,字?jǐn)?shù)及書寫,三、2007年湖北高考書面表達(dá),假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華，你校與本地一所國際學(xué)校經(jīng)常舉辦聯(lián)誼活動。你計(jì)劃在重陽節(jié)組織學(xué)生到養(yǎng)老院去慰問老人，擬邀請國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生參加。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生會主席Tony寫一封信。 要點(diǎn)：向老人贈送禮物（鮮花、自制賀卡）； 為老人提供服務(wù)（做清潔、陪老人聊天）； 為老人表演節(jié)目（唱歌、跳舞）。 注意：1.詞數(shù)為100左右； 2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 3. 已給出的信的開頭和結(jié)

2、尾不得抄入答題卡。,2007年湖北高考書面表達(dá)評分實(shí)例 () We can give the old men and the old women some flowers and cards for celebrate by ourselves. We can help the old men and the old women clean their rooms and talk with them. We can singing and dancing to give the old men and the old women to look. I think they will very

3、 happy.,（5分）,分析： 1.該答卷的詞數(shù)為56，未達(dá)到規(guī)定詞數(shù)，影響信息內(nèi)容的完整； 2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)雖都有涉及，但有很多語法結(jié)構(gòu)方面的錯(cuò)誤，詞匯項(xiàng)目有限； 3.缺乏語句間基本的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。,分析：1.基本上表敘清楚了題目規(guī)定的所有主要內(nèi)容； 2.時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)（一般將來時(shí)）； 3.采用了一些簡單的連接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，如：also,of course,As; 4.語法、詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤較前面大大減少，但從準(zhǔn)確性角度考慮仍存在一些問題。,（15分）,() I think it is very helpful to us and the old men in Nursing Home

4、. We can learn many things from those. We will give them flowers and cards which made by ourselves. We also can help them with cleaning and we can join them to chat together. Of course, we may prepare some programs, just like sing- ing, dancing and so on. I think the old men who are always alone wil

5、l be very happy and will feel that they are at homes. As students, dont we ought to help others? Please think about it.,(24分),分析：1. 語言錯(cuò)誤較少； 2. 行文流暢，應(yīng)用了較豐富的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯； 3. 有效地采用了不同的連接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次清楚； 4. 英文書寫工整漂亮，卷面整潔。,() The main activities are as follows. Firstly, we would like to give the elderly our pr

6、esents, such as flowers, cards made by ourselves. This will creat a good atmosphere for our activity. Secondly, well serve the elderly, doing the cleaning and chatting with them. At last, several programmes, which are well prepared, are going to be presented to them. These include singing and dancin

7、g. What do you think of it? It is a meaningful activity, isnt it? The elderly is in need of our care, and you can also learn more about our culture. The elderly has contributed a lot to society, now it is time that we thanked them.,四 、基本步驟,審題,抓要點(diǎn),擴(kuò)展成句,連句成文,檢查謄寫,1、 語言的準(zhǔn)確性、得體性,a good man kind, honest,

8、 generous, selfless, brave, warm-hearted, sympathetic, honorable Eg: Peter is a good man.,to die to pass away, to leave us, ones heart has stopped beating Eg: Premier Zhou died, and we felt sorrowful.,五、能力儲備,2. 正確使用有關(guān)連接詞,時(shí)間先后：,first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while,轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)

9、系：,but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless,因果關(guān)系：,because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that,讓步關(guān)系：,though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that,表列舉：,for example / instance, takefor example, thats to say, in other words, as follows,表總結(jié)：,in sho

10、rt, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated,遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：,whats more, in addition, furthermore on one hand on the other hand,條件關(guān)系：,if, unless, as long as, on condition that ,3、固定詞組和句型的使用,a. 表 “我認(rèn)為” _ playing computer game is a waste of time.,I hold that/ I accept the idea that A

11、s far as Im concerned/ As far as I can see It seems to me that/ from my point of view,b. 表 “一就” _the child saw his mother, he cried.,as soon as, on/upon doing the moment /instant / minute, immediately, hardly/scarcelywhen, no soonerthan,4、注意語言表達(dá)的多樣性,Large crowds of tourists to the zoo will make traf

12、fic jams.,Large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .,Some of my classmates are for the opinion .,Some of my classmates are in favor of the opinion.,5. 適當(dāng)使用較復(fù)雜的句法結(jié)構(gòu),a. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.,a. The ship didnt sink because of the efforts of the ca

13、ptain.,b. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,b. But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk.,六、實(shí)際操練,你所在的班級將要舉辦一次主題為 “What Can We Do for Our School?” 的英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，要求從以下四方面中任選二個(gè)進(jìn)行闡述，并舉例加以說明。 1.關(guān)心他人； 2.美化校園； 3.愛護(hù)學(xué)校設(shè)施； 4.營造良好的學(xué)習(xí)氛圍 注意：1.不要在書面表達(dá)中出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校

14、名和本人姓名，否則 本節(jié)判為零分 2.詞數(shù)：100左右； 3.參考詞匯：愛心love and care; 校園campus; 設(shè)施facilities; 氛圍environment ； 4.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，且不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。 Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something. _Thank you for listening.,Hello, everyone. Its nice to speak about what we

15、 can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.q,The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan. Besid

16、es,never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class. If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.(評論）,Thank you for listening.,One p

17、ossible version,七 、總 結(jié) 建 議,切中題意，不漏要點(diǎn), 卷面整潔； 語言得體、準(zhǔn)確、連貫、多樣； 積累“語言經(jīng)驗(yàn)”, 培養(yǎng)“語言意識”； 觀察品味，模仿訓(xùn)練；,討論類書面表達(dá)模式,P1: Recently our class has had a discussion about whether senior students should surf the Internet .,p2: Some of my classmates are in favor of They say They also say whats more ,P3:However， other stud

18、ents are against the idea， saying that so One the other hand， other students think They suggest， however， ,P4: I n my opinion ,1.,1.The railway owners would not take any chances , so they hired many hunters to fore wildly into the bison along the tracks . 2.The bison were left to rot slowly where th

19、ey fell . 3.As a result , the insects which lived on these plants also died out. 4. This in turn produced less food supply for birds , the prairie dog and wolves . 5. Thus the change in the number of bison had an effect on the whole wildlife chain of the plains . 6. After being hunted and killed for

20、 almost 90 years , the bison were finally left alone . 7. These efforts were not in vain .,對比是通過對兩種或兩種以上的不同事物，或者同一種事物的不同情況進(jìn)行比較，從而得出結(jié)論。對比是說明和論證的常用方法。 運(yùn)用對比寫作時(shí)要注意： 明確對比的目的，弄清楚通過對比到底要說明什么。 表示對比的常用語： 表示相似點(diǎn)的有：like; likewise; similarly; in the same way; also; equally; too; as等等。 表示不同點(diǎn)的有：unlike; however; but; yet; while; though; although; even though; instead; on the contrary; in contrast to; on one hand . , o