1、今日距中考,Come on,class!,英語書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練 2018.6.4,劍河三中 楊冬春,中考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),1. 0分檔 空白 或亂抄一段文章。 2.1-2分 只寫出與要求內(nèi)容相關(guān)的一些詞語，語言錯誤多。 3. 3-5分 能用句子表達(dá)，錯誤多，只能勉強(qiáng)猜出作文意圖。 4.6-8分字?jǐn)?shù)與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點(diǎn)不完整，行文不連貫，錯誤較多，基本上不影響總體理解。 5.9-11分字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，基本含所有要點(diǎn)（2點(diǎn)9-10）行文較連貫，詞匯不夠豐富，有少量語法錯誤。 6.12-14分字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，含所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)規(guī)范，條理清晰，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯比較豐富，有少量語法

2、錯誤。 7. 15分符合要求（80-90）書寫規(guī)范，含所有要點(diǎn)，條理清晰，邏輯嚴(yán)密，詞匯豐富，沒有語法錯誤，能恰當(dāng)使用諺語、格言、復(fù)合句等給文章添彩。,Alice is my a best frend, she come from Canada. she very tall but he likes sports. I dont know if does she like swim? She sings good and she do well in dancing, we all very like she.,去掉,friend,comes,is,and,she,去掉,likes,swimm

3、ing,well,does,去掉,her,very much,Lets play the game找錯（比一比，誰最快）,我們的寫作“現(xiàn)狀” 1.審題不清，抓不住要點(diǎn)，東拉西扯。 2.單詞拼寫錯誤。例如：frend 3.動詞缺失。例如:She very tall. 4.前后不一致（數(shù)、人稱、時態(tài)、主謂不一致等）例如: She come from Canada. 5.中式英語 例如 : We very like her. 6.綜合性錯誤：包括單詞大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號以及形容詞副詞的混淆，連詞的缺失誤用，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整等。 .,書面表達(dá)寫作技巧,審,列,加,連,美,健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增

4、大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,寫作第一步：審,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,2018貴陽市一?？碱},寫作第二步：列 根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn),如何度假 調(diào)查報告 倡議假日休閑 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時 人稱：第三人稱,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,A lot of peopl

5、e Some people Some other people A few people Enjoy your vacation.,列,travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents.,work.,加,加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。,寫作第三步：,A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.,How do peopl

6、e spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.,Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,連,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部分銜接自然。,寫作第四步：,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. Accordin

7、g to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,連,美,選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。,寫作第五步：,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation an

8、d here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few peo

9、ple have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美,即學(xué)活用(2016黔東南州中考) 養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，成就好人生。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你從日常行為習(xí)慣及學(xué)習(xí)等方面談?wù)勅绾纬蔀橐幻细竦闹袑W(xué)生，以“How to be a good student”為題寫一篇英語短文。 要求：1.語言正確，行文流暢，書寫規(guī)范； 2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右； 3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名或所在地名。,How to be a good student As a middle school student, I t

10、hink its important to have good habits, which can make you a good student. First, I get up and go to bed on time. I often take part in some meaningful activities with my friends in my spare time. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish my homework by myself. I also help other

11、classmates with their lessons, and we often help each other at school. Third, I always obey the school rules, respect my teachers and get on well with others. In a word, I think Im a good student.,how to write a good composition,開頭:開門見山 中間 結(jié)尾:與主題相呼應(yīng) 強(qiáng)勁有力,書面表達(dá) 五步法,（審-列-加-連-美）,抓要點(diǎn) 找連接詞 造好句 連句成段,Homework,(2017黔東南州中考) 一直以來, 隨著孩子不斷長大, 很多父母與孩子之間的溝通變得越來越難, 交流更是令人頭疼的問題。究其原因, 主要是父母的教育內(nèi)容和管理方式跟不上孩子成長的需求, 甚至老套; 而孩子由于本身年齡和認(rèn)識的局限性, 缺乏主動和父母交流的想法和勇氣?？稍谕瑢W(xué)們的心里, 確實(shí)是有一肚子的話要和父母說的。假