1、短文改錯(cuò),Proof-reading,To stand by a tree stump waiting for a rabbit,There was once a farmer worked very hard 1._ every day. One day when he was hoeing(鋤草) in the2._ sunshine, he suddenly listened a low sound 3._ “Peng!”. He turned and hurried to the tree. He found a rabbit dying. He took held of the 4.

2、_ rabbit and was exciting. “What a rabbit! Ill 5._ have it to dinner!” Then he had a good idea, 6._ “Why cant I wait for more rabbits here? Its cool under the tree.” So he dropped off his hoe and wait there. But day after day, there 7._ had no more rabbits coming. What was worse, 8 _ all the his cro

3、ps were dead.The story tells 9._ us that you want to get something, you must 10._ work hard for it. Remember, “No pains, no gains!”,who,heard,hold,excited,for,waited,were,the,if,Correct one students composition,How to make progress in proof-reading,近五年浙江省高考短文改錯(cuò)測(cè)試內(nèi)容一覽表,主要包括兩類錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，以及主、謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤

4、。例如：,NMET2000： Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. NMET2003：She liked it very much and reads it to the class. Of course, when my mother was asked, “Have you” _,are,_,一、動(dòng)詞形,read,指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯(cuò)誤。常表現(xiàn)為將名詞復(fù)數(shù)寫成單數(shù)。例如：,NMET2001： so that Ill get good marks in all my subject. NMET2003: Their wo

5、rd were a great encouragement to me. _,subjects,words,二、名詞數(shù),常考的錯(cuò)誤形式有：連詞but， and， or和so的用法錯(cuò)誤，以及冠詞的用法錯(cuò)誤等。例如：,NMET2000： She was smiling but nodding at me NMET2001： It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. NMET2001： We may be one family and live under a same roof. ,and,or,the,三、冠詞連詞常

6、光顧,短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)冠詞的考查主要涉及冠詞的誤加和漏用，有時(shí)也考查不定冠詞與定冠詞以及零冠詞的用法區(qū)別(包括 a 與 an 的區(qū)別)。其中，涉及最多的是，當(dāng)一個(gè)單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時(shí)，其前漏用不定冠詞；另外，冠詞在一些習(xí)語中的用法也是一個(gè)重要考點(diǎn),After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened. (2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were. (3)Some people read the books or watch television while others have spor

7、ts. (4) Good health is persons most valuable possession.,an,a,a,注意形容詞和副詞以及比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)的用法在句子中的作用和具體用法。這也是高考短文改錯(cuò)題的?？键c(diǎn)。例如：,NMET 2004 : I would describe myself as shy and quietly. _ NMET 2005 : He asked angry if we had finished the work. _,quiet,angrily,四、還要注意形和副,NMET2001： My parents love me and will do all

8、 they can make sure NMET 2002: We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. _ NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. _,這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有現(xiàn)在分詞、過去分詞，動(dòng)名詞和不定式錯(cuò)誤。例如：,to,visited,talking,五、非謂語，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟,主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、

9、少詞和搭配錯(cuò)誤。例如：,NMET2000: Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher. _ NMET2003: My teacher advised me to keep diary. _,a,a,六、習(xí)慣用法要記住,不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類；不同的語境要選擇不同的詞語。只有對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和成分作細(xì)致的分析，才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。例如：,NMET 2004 : I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. _ NMET 1997：I live in Beijing，where is t

10、he capital of China. _,why,which,七、句子成分多分析,NMET 1995 : The Greens did his best to make me feel at home._ NMET 1998 : He drove too fast, and the police stopped her ._,their,八、邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注,與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤。如稱謂上的張冠李戴，人名、地名、時(shí)間、方位等方面的錯(cuò)誤，是這類錯(cuò)誤的考查對(duì)象。,him,動(dòng)詞形，,名詞數(shù),還要注意形和副,非謂語，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟,習(xí)慣用法要記住,Summary,冠詞連詞常光顧

11、,邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. The

12、re was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,7.,8.,9.,10.,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._ father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._ a big one. It was almost as taller

13、 as the room! 3._ They put them in the corner of the sitting 4._,_,On,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,動(dòng)詞形,介詞短語常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記住,還要注意形和副,邏輯關(guān)系須關(guān)注,room. Kate was covered it with a lot of 5._ Christmas light. The sitting room looked 6. _ really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _ a fire burning in the fire place, b

14、ut the Christmas 8. _ tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his 9. _ parents singing and dancing happily. 10._,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,動(dòng)詞形,還要注意形和副,動(dòng)詞形,名詞數(shù),冠詞連詞常光顧,改錯(cuò)類型統(tǒng)計(jì)表,“1126”原則 “1225”原則 “1117”原則,0,1-2,1-2,8-6,1. Error word (錯(cuò)詞)： （1）名詞，動(dòng)詞，形容詞和副詞的形態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。 （2）冠詞，介詞，代詞，連詞和動(dòng)詞等用法上 的錯(cuò)誤。 （3）邏輯

15、關(guān)系方面的錯(cuò)誤。 （4）句子結(jié)構(gòu)的錯(cuò)誤。,2. Unnecessary word (多詞)： （1）抽象名詞物質(zhì)名詞泛指前多加冠詞。 （2）定語從句中多了與關(guān)系代詞相當(dāng)?shù)拇~或名詞。 （3）形容詞或副詞的比較結(jié)構(gòu)中多詞。 （4 ）受母語影響及物動(dòng)詞后加了不該加的詞。 （5）不帶to的不定式 作賓補(bǔ)時(shí)帶了to （6）某些時(shí)間狀語叢句多了介詞。 （7）固定搭配有畫蛇添足的現(xiàn)象。,3. Missing word (缺詞)： （1）動(dòng)詞不定式少了符號(hào)to （2）單數(shù)名詞泛指時(shí)缺不定冠詞a或an. （3）動(dòng)詞后少了介詞或副詞等小品詞。 （4）習(xí)慣表達(dá)或固定短語中缺詞。 （5）受母語影響將形容詞或介詞作動(dòng)

16、詞而使句子缺少謂語動(dòng)詞。,注意解題規(guī)范,嚴(yán)格按照示范規(guī)定的符號(hào)改錯(cuò)，在原文錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、 刪除或修改某個(gè)詞。 “”、“”、“”、分別代表錯(cuò)詞糾正、缺詞填補(bǔ)、多詞刪除，切忌用文字說明或用箭頭表示。,錯(cuò)誤類型：多詞，缺詞，錯(cuò)詞,Competition,Rules: Each group has the right to choose one number. The group who can correct all the mistakes within the shortest time will be the winner. As a team member, if you know the

17、 answer, just speak it out as aloud as possible.,Which one would you like to choose?,(1),(2),(3),(4),多詞,1.Great changes have been taken place in our hometown.,2. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant.,3. He has made a great progress in his English study.,4. Now let me to int

18、roduce our school to you.,5.A great many of students like singing.,6.He married with a beautiful girl.,缺詞,Our flight to Paris was delayed because the heavy frog.,2. The press conference is be held tomorrow.,3. Ill unable to control myself and forget all about my study.,4. His daughter plays piano ve

19、ry well.,of,to,be,the,You are lucky,5.I found strange that she had not come yet.,6. They eager to know everything about China.,are,it,I love camping. Its my favorite way to spent the summer vacation .Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experienc

20、es I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesnt cost many

21、 to camp, and what I believe its the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.,spend,exciting,ever,cooked,wonderful,and,trees,much,to,More difficult,1. They dont want me to do any work at family. 2. For the most part, students working to earn money for their own use. 3. He collected some in

22、formations about computers. 4. Earning their money allow them to spend I will never forget the day when we spent together. He as well as his sister are a League Member.,home,work,information,which,錯(cuò)詞,allows,is,6 tips that you should pay attention to,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改. 大小寫不改. 詞序錯(cuò)誤不改. 在綱外生詞不改(帶漢語注釋的詞). 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅

23、限一詞. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分,Tips,Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends, while I chose to take part-time job to gain experience and earn some money. I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addr

24、esses on envelope. The pay were 10 cents per envelope. I headed for the company, feeling sure I would easy finish 300 envelopes in five hours and to earn the money. Actually , I only finished 200. now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.,08 浙江高考,decided,a,for,was,easily,it,us,envelpoes,Challenge yourself,Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.Wh