1、建 議 信,文體概述,建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關問題的一類信件。建議信不是投訴信，觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。內(nèi)容通常包括： (1) 說明寫信目的; (2) 提出建議與改進措施并給予忠告; (3) 表達希望建議被采納并期盼回復。,假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W好中文。 注意：可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開頭語已給出。 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to lea

2、rn Chinese well._ _ Best wishes, Li Hua,參加中文學習班； 看電視，報紙，雜志； 學唱中文歌曲； 交中國朋友；,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practi

3、ce with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also m

4、ake more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes, Li Hua,Step4.典例 （2014.安徽高考）為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了“HEARTTOHEART” 專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie,收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，讓正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。 內(nèi)

5、容要點如下：1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說明理由。（參考詞匯：temper n.脾氣，情緒） 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語已為你寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,多與人交流； 參加課外活動； 積極面對生活；,Hi Worried, I am sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The true is that everyone will have such a time when things seem to be going wrong , so ther

6、e is no need to worry too much about it . The important thing for you is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything that youll regret later . Here are three useful tips: First , If I were you , I would talk to someone I trust about how I feel . It is a good way to let you

7、r anger out without hurting others or yourself . Second , join in outdoor sports or play team games with your friends ,which can help you to get rid of anger . Third , you might as well be optimistic about your future. A positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope y

8、ou will get out of trouble soon . Yours, Jamie,1. 給某人提建議 _ 2. 如下 _ 3. 在做某事時遇到困難 _ 4. 利用 _ 5. 向某人征求意見_,ask sb. for advice/turn to sb for advice,give sb. some advice (on),as follows,have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.,make use of/take advantage of,常用語塊,6. 制訂計劃 _ 7. 認為有用 _ 8. 參加 _ 9. 聽從某人的建議 _ 10. 把考

9、慮在內(nèi) _,take sth. into account/consideration,make a plan/schedule,findhelpful/useful/beneficial,take (an active )part in/participate in,follow/take ones advice,11. 得到改善 _ 12. 有所好轉 _ 13. 依我看來 _ 14. 我已收到你的來信，得知你 _,get improved,change for the better,in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view/ as far

10、as Im concerned,I have received your letter saying that you,1. 你就向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設性的建議。 2. 我覺得如果能夠?qū)苡袔椭?1. You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.,2. I feel that it would be beneficial if,套用句式,3. 我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。 4. 我相信你會考慮我的建議的。 5. 如能看到我會非

11、常開心的。,3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.,5. I would be more than happy to see,4. I trust youll take my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.,常用套語,A建議信開頭常用句式(照應材料,表明寫作意圖) I am very glad to hear that you want to I know you have trouble

12、inafter reading your letter I am writing to you for the purpose of I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you. You have asked me for some advice with regard to and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. You have asked me for my advice about/on My suggestions are as follows. I think

13、 you can make it if you follow the advice below,B. 表達建議（body） 1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that 3. If I were you, I would 4. Why not ?/ How (What) about doing 5. is a good/great idea. 6. You may consider doing 7. It would seem/seems to me t

14、hat you could 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should,First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After that,/ In the end,/ Finally, /Meanwhile, /Whats more,/ In addition,/ Besides,/ Furthermore, ,1.Since y

15、ou like it so much ,why not join the cartoon club? 2.You might as well tell him the truth. It would be advisable to tell him the truth. 3.In my opinion ,it doesnt make any sense to complain about it . I dont think it any good complaining about it. It would be a nice idea for you to read English ever

16、y day. It would be beneficial if you could read English every day. 5.It would be wise of you to have a face-to-face talk with him. I think it advisable for you to have a face-to -face talk with him.,C.建議信結尾常用句式,I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration. I hope you will find these

17、 proposals/ suggestions/ recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 5. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. In the end, I will be glad if you find my

18、 suggestions useful.,如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆蓋了所有的要點 應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。,要點全,詞匯,句型 （高級）和語法多樣化（較復雜）語言地道,連接詞,Step6 課堂小結 (1) 說明寫信目的，涉及主題； (2) 提出建議與改進措施并給予忠告; (3) 表達希望建議被采納并期盼回復。 *溫馨提示*：無論哪種體裁我們都要記住一條黃金法則，四個寫作步驟（1審題，2圈要點，3列句子，4連句成文） 兩個注意（1注意細心檢查，2注意規(guī)范書寫）。,Step7.課外作業(yè) 假設你是李華，最近你的美國筆友Bob打算練中文毛筆字，他來信向你請教如何練好毛筆字。請你給他寫封信，提供一