1、分類寫作五、建議信 全國高考英語二輪突破分類寫作五、建議信 全國高考英語二輪突破a global village 地球村master English 掌握英語be aware of 意識到have a good command of sth. 某事掌握得很好two aspects 兩個方面keep sth. in mind 記住English composition 英語作文memorize English words 記憶英語單詞control ones temper 控制某人的脾氣let out ones anger 釋放怒氣an effective way 一個有效的方式get rid

2、of 擺脫remain optimistic about sth. 保持樂觀【必備詞語】a global village 地球村【必備詞語】lift ones spirits 振奮某人的精神improve ones reading ability 提高閱讀能力be alarmingly shocking 十分令人震驚的ironically 諷刺地get used to the phenomenon 習(xí)慣于這個現(xiàn)象have a bad effect on 對有壞影響dustbin 垃圾箱set up specific rules 制定具體的制度develop good habits 培養(yǎng)好的習(xí)慣

3、with the joint efforts of sb. 有了某人的共同努力cover a wide variety of 涵括各種各樣的broaden our horizon 開闊我們的視野【必備詞語】lift ones spirits 振奮某人的精神【必備1. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. 我十分喜歡它，主要有以下兩個原因。2. Almost perfect as it is, it should make more improvement in some area. 盡管它近乎完美，它在一些方面仍需要

4、改進(jìn)。3. And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects. For one thing, . For another thing, . 我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的問題主要在于兩個方面。一方面， 另一方面，4. Therefore, its my hope that you can give us some practical tips on how to . 因此，我希望你能就給我們一些實用的建議?！竞镁淅收b】1. I like it very much mainly 5. Here are some suggestions which I

5、 hope will be of some help to you. 這里是一些建議，希望會對你有幫助。6. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around. 我想學(xué)校是否能夠在周圍多放些垃圾桶。7. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. 我相信，有了老師和學(xué)生的共同努力，我們學(xué)校會在不久的將來成為一

6、個更令人快樂的地方?！竞镁淅收b】5. Here are some suggestions w1. Id like to give you some suggestions that may help you learn your math good.1. good 改為well2. If you will need to buy a good smart phone at a low price, I will suggest a Hongmi Mi3.2. 刪掉第一個will【單句改錯】3. We all know that it is always very hard to startin

7、g in a new school.3. starting改為start1. Id like to give you some s4. I found it difficult to express myself in English, and my English teacher advised me that I practiced more.4. practiced改為practice5. As for your future major, I think most suitable thing for you is teaching Chinese as a foreign langu

8、age.5. most前面加the【單句改錯】6. I sorry to learn that you havent adapted to the new life there.6. 在I后加am4. I found it difficult to exp7. Playing football not only make us grow tall and strong but also gives us a sense of team spirit.7. make改為makes8. I hope everything will be OK and you will soon make some

9、 friend in the new city.8. friend改為friends【單句改錯】7. Playing football not only m9. Why not ask him to give a explanation for his being absent from the meeting yesterday？9. a改為an10. I think you should grasp the opportunity and go to abroad for further studies.10. 刪掉to【單句改錯】9. Why not ask him to give a

10、e【2011全國卷：讀者給報刊建議】假定你是李華，你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報正于創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：1. 說明你是該報的忠實讀者；2. 贊賞該報優(yōu)點： 1) 兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞 2) 介紹名人成功故事；3. 提出建議：刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章?！菊骖}滿分佳作賞析】 【2011全國卷：讀者給報刊建議】【真題滿分佳作賞析】 滿分佳作（一）Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Im a regular reader of yo

11、ur newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,

12、which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.Sincerely yours,Li Hua滿分佳作（一）滿分賞析用到mainly for the following two r

13、easons解釋原因的總起句，體現(xiàn)了對寫作句型的熟練掌握。cover(覆蓋范圍、包括)一詞用得地道；還用上了so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句。Equally attractive are(同樣吸引人的還有)這是地道、不同于一般模板的連接手段，表示與上面First提到的內(nèi)容并列；本句還有which引導(dǎo)的定語從句和to make the world a better place這樣地道自然的表達(dá)；這樣的句子是提分的句子。用到suggest加賓語從句，從句動詞用do或者should do。滿分賞析滿分佳作（二）Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the

14、5th anniversary of Global Mirror! As a loyal reader, I have learnt much from your newspaper, including reading daily news. It is obvious that Global Mirror enjoys high popularity for a series of advantages. First, it not only includes domestic and foreign news but also makes a detailed analysis full

15、 of remarkable insights. Besides, it introduces different celebrities success which motivates readers not to give up but to pursue their dreams whatever happens. Of course, they can avoid the detours in their progress. Almost perfect as it is, it should make more improvement in some area. For exampl

16、e, considering many readers thirst for English study, it will be a good idea to publish some articles dealing with approaches to English learning.Sincerely yours,Li Hua滿分佳作（二）滿分賞析a loyal reader(一位忠實的讀者)，這個短語體現(xiàn)了作者的詞匯能力。用到It is obvious that.加主語從句的句型；enjoy high popularity(享有很高的聲譽(yù))，體現(xiàn)了作者平時的積累。用到not only

17、but also連接信息。本句的精華之處也很多：有Besides的連接手段；有which引導(dǎo)的定語從句的句法手段；有motivate sb. not to do sth.和pursue their dreams whatever happens(無論發(fā)生什么都要追求自己的夢想)這些優(yōu)美的詞句。Almost perfect as it is這是一個讓步狀語從句的倒裝句，意為：盡管它已經(jīng)接近完美。本篇句句高級、詞詞優(yōu)美，怎能不給滿分？滿分賞析【2012四川卷改編：告訴老師學(xué)習(xí)情況和建議】 作文原題假如你是大學(xué)一年級新生李華。開學(xué)之初，你的英語老師Ms Li希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)

18、建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。 1. 對英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識； 2. 自己目前的英語水平； 3. 自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題； 4. 對英語教學(xué)的兩點建議。【模仿翻譯】 【2012四川卷改編：告訴老師學(xué)習(xí)情況和建議】【模仿翻譯】作文翻譯親愛的李老師，我非常高興您當(dāng)我們的英語老師。隨著世界變成了地球村，英語變得越來越重要，因此掌握好英語意味著我們可以通過一扇新的窗戶看世界。雖然我意識到其重要性，但我的英語掌握得不好。我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的問題主要在于兩個方面。一方面，我覺得很難記住英語單詞。而且，在寫英語作文上我也有困難，寫作時甚至犯一些愚蠢的錯誤。因此，我希望您能給我們一些如何記憶英語單詞的實用的方法另

19、外，如果您能教我們?nèi)绾螌懞玫挠⒄Z作文就更好了。謝謝您！誠摯的李華作文翻譯Dear Ms Li, I am very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. Though Im aware of its importance, I dont h

20、ave a good command of it. And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects. For one thing, I find it difficult to keep English words in mind. For another thing, I also have difficulty with my English composition and even make some foolish mistakes when I write. Therefore, its my hope that y

21、ou can give us some practical tips on how to memorize English words. Besides, it would be better if you could instruct us on how to write good English compositions. Thank you! Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear Ms Li,【2014安徽卷改編：解除困擾的建議】作文原題 為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長，某中學(xué)英文報開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Li Hua，收到一封署名為Wor

22、ried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點如下： 1表示理解并給予安慰； 2提出建議并說明理由。參考詞匯： temper n. 脾氣，情緒【2014安徽卷改編：解除困擾的建議】作文翻譯嗨，憂心人，知道你現(xiàn)在如此難過，我很遺憾。事實是，每個人都會有事情看起來不對勁的時期，因此你不需要過于擔(dān)憂。重要的是要控制你的情緒，這樣你就不會做一些你會后悔的事，說一些你會后悔的話。以下是三條有用的建議：首先，把你的感受告訴你相信的人。這是一個釋放憤怒且對人對己無害的好方式。其次，到戶外去，和朋友去活動活動，因為體育運動是

23、擺脫憤怒的有效方式。最后，對未來保持樂觀，這對提高你的情緒有幫助。我希望你會很快平靜下來，和平常一樣。你的，李華作文翻譯Hi Worried, Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to control your

24、 temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips. First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is

25、an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future, which is helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Li HuaHi Worried,【2008全國卷：建議如何學(xué)好中文】假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫回信。 1. 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 2. 看中文書刊、電視； 3. 學(xué)唱中文

26、歌曲； 4. 交中國朋友。June 8, 2008 Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Best wishes,Li Hua【全真考場】 【2008全國卷：建議如何學(xué)好中文】【全真考場】 【2008全國2卷：建議如何學(xué)好中文】June 8, 2008Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here

27、are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. To begin with, it is a good idea to take a Chinese course, where you can follow the teacher and get help from your classmates. Next, reading some Chinese books and magazines will help you to improve your reading ability. You can also wat

28、ch some Chinese programs on TV, which will improve your listening ability. To make sure that learning Chinese isnt too dull, it would be a good idea to learn to sing some Chinese songs. Last but not least, if possible, make some Chinese friends, so that you can learn languages from each other. Looki

29、ng forward to receiving your letter written in Chinese. Best wishes, Li Hua【2008全國2卷：建議如何學(xué)好中文】【2011浙江卷改編：建議應(yīng)對亂涂亂扔】假設(shè)你是高中生李華，有感于校園中存在的隨意涂寫(to scribble) 和亂丟垃圾(to litter)的行為，請用英語給校長寫一封信。信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容： 1. 說明寫信目的； 2. 對這些行為進(jìn)行批評； 3. 提出建議。June 8, 2011Dear Mr. Headmaster, I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Sen

30、ior 2. Yours faithfullyLi Hua【2011浙江卷改編：建議應(yīng)對亂涂亂扔】【2011浙江卷改編：建議應(yīng)對亂涂亂扔】June 8, 2011Dear Mr. Headmaster, Im Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 2. Im writing to tell you that it has been alarmingly shocking to see so much scribing and littering in our school, but ironically, seemingly everyone prete

31、nds to get used to the phenomenon. Without doubt it not only brings our school under a cloud, but also has a bad effect on students mind. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behaviour. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Yours faithfully,Li Hua【2011浙江卷改編：建議應(yīng)對亂涂亂扔】【2012遼寧卷改編：對教材的看法與建議】假定