語法的正確和錯誤直接關(guān)系到雅思寫作能否6分以上。了解語且改正（做完之后對照參考答案，了解這些錯誤的原因）SchoolsshouldrewardtopstudentswhohavehighestIftheyspendtoomuchtimeonhousework,theymaynothaveenoughtimetodotheirwork,inthatcase,theymayperformpoorlyintheworkplace.Weencouragementosharehouseworkwithwomen,itdoesnotmeanthathouseworkshouldbeallocatedtohusbandandwifeThereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosetospendholidaysoverseas.ThepercentageofpeopletraveledbybikeoronfootdecreasedComparingwithfossilfuels,nuclearpowercanprovidemoreenergyanditdoesnotproducecarbondioxide.Forthosestudentswhodonothaveself-controlprobablywillmimicthosewrongbehaviorfromTVprograms.Ifthehouseholdtaskscouldbedividedaccordingtothefamily'ssituationwouldbebetter.Parentsbuyalargetyoftoysmaydistractchildrenfromtheirstudy.Somescenicspotsaresopopularthateveryyearthenumberoftouristswho modateexceedstheirrealcapacity.ThetimewhichspendsinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolledUsingfossilfuelswillproducecarbondioxide,whichisakindofgreenhousegascausesglobalwarming.Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,whichtherearemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,wherehavemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.Manypeopledonotunderstandthathowimportantitistoprotectwildanimals.ThenumberofAustraliantouristsincreasedto20Itseemsreasonablefor ernmenttorestricttheuseoffreshwatertoprotecttheenvironment.Whentheriverpolluted,fisheswouldAsthe ernment’smoneyislimited,whichisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.Bycontrast,althoughthesalesofapplesintheUKincreasedslightlyfromonemillionto5.5millionpoundsin2004.Toomuchmakesstudentsstressfuland Studentsareeasiertofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.Takingpartinsportsactivitiesinsparetimecandeclinethestressatwork.Ifcriminalscouldreceiveeducationandtraininginprison,theywouldavoidtocommitcrimesagainaftertheyarereleased.Astherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,people'slivingstandardhasimproved.Childrenwholackofparents'loveandcaremay sensitiveandintroverted.IfchildrenareallowedtowatchTV,parentsneednottopanythemallthetime.Travellingabroadcanbroadenchildren'shorizonsandhaveabetterunderstandingofforeigncustomsandculture.Schoolsshouldrewardtopstudentswhohavehighest解釋解釋 前面需要冠詞改：SchoolsshouldrewardtopstudentswhohavetheIftheyspendtoomuchtimeonhousework,theymaynothaveenoughtimetodotheirwork,inthatcase,theymayperformpoorlyintheworkplace.解釋：獨立的句子之間相連，需要有改：Iftheyspendtoomuchtimeonhousework,theymaynothaveenoughtimetodotheirwork,andinthatcase,theymayperformpoorlyintheworkplace.Weencouragementosharehouseworkwithwomen,itdoesnotmeanthathouseworkshouldbeallocatedtohusbandandwife解釋：獨立的句子之間相連，需要有notmeanthathouseworkshouldbeallocatedtohusbandandwifeThereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosetospendholidaysoverseas.解釋：therebe句型本身就是完整的句子，不能再出現(xiàn)其它謂語動詞，需要使用定語從句或者分詞來修飾名詞peopleholidaysoverseas.改：Thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosingtospendholidaysoverseas.Thepercentageofpeopletraveledbybikeoronfootdecreased解釋：句子里面不能出現(xiàn)兩個謂travelleddecreased，如改：Thepercentageofpeoplewhotraveledbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.改：Thepercentageofpeopletravellingbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.Comparingwithfossilfuels,nuclearpowercanprovidemoreenergyanditdoesnotproducecarbondioxide.解釋：使用分詞做狀語的時候，要和主語保持一致 被用來和化 做比較，所以應(yīng)該使用過去分詞改：Comparedwithfossilfuels,nuclearpowercanprovidemoreenergyanditdoesnotproducecarbondioxide.Forthosestudentswhodonothaveself-controlprobablywillmimicthosewrongbehaviorfromTVprograms.解釋：加了for以后變成了介詞短語，變成了句子的狀語，導(dǎo)致這句thosewrongbehaviorfromTVprograms.Ifthehouseholdtaskscouldbedividedaccordingtothefamily'ssituationwouldbebetter.解釋：有一個條件狀語從句，主句卻沒有主語改：Ifthehouseholdtaskscouldbedividedaccordingtothefamily'ssituation,itwouldbebetter.Parentsbuyalargetyoftoysmaydistractchildrenfromtheirstudy.解釋：不能拿一個句子去當(dāng)另一個句子的主語改：Ifparentsbuyalargetyoftoys,itmaydistractchildrenfromtheirstudy.Somescenicspotsaresopopularthateveryyearthenumberoftouristswho modateexceedstheirrealcapacity.解釋：modate是“接待”和“容納”，這個詞的主語應(yīng)該是旅游景spots改：Somescenicspotsaresopopularthateveryyearthenumberoftouristswhothey modateexceedstheirrealcapacity.ThetimewhichspendsinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolled解釋：定語從句的主語which，指代time，時間“被花在看電視上”，是timetime改：ThetimewhichisspentinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolled改：ThetimespentinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolledUsingfossilfuelswillproducecarbondioxide,whichisakindofgreenhousegascausesglobalwarming.解釋：定語從句里面出現(xiàn)了兩個謂語：is和cause，所以后面用了定語從句that來修飾greenhousegas改：Usingfossilfuelswillproducecarbondioxidewhichisakindofgreenhousegasthatcausesglobalwarming.Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,whichtherearemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.解釋：which叫作關(guān)系代詞，在定語從句里面擔(dān)任主語或者賓語。這句話的定語從句therearemorejobopportunities已經(jīng)是完整的句子，所以把which改成where，where是關(guān)系副詞，等于inwhich，在從句aremoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,wherehavemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.解釋：這里的定語從句需要一個主語，而不是狀語，所以需which，關(guān)系代詞作為定語從句的主語改：Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,whichhavemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.Manypeopledonotunderstandthathowimportantitistoprotectwildanimals.使用普通的賓語從句，就把疑問詞how去掉。改：Manypeopledonotunderstandhowimportantitistoprotectwildanimals.改：Manypeopledonotunderstandthatitisimportanttoprotectwildanimals.ThenumberofAustraliantouristsincreasedto20thousands.Itseemsreasonableforernmenttorestricttheuseoffreshwatertoprotecttheenvironment.解釋 是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式的前面需要冠詞改：Itseemsreasonableforthe ernmenttorestricttheuseoffreshwatertoprotecttheenvironment.解釋：這里的污染是指河流被污解釋：這里的污染是指河流被污染，需要使語態(tài)改：WhentheriverispollutedfisheswouldAstheernment’smoneyislimited,whichisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.解釋：這句話里面有原因狀語從句，有定語從句，卻沒有主改：Astheernment’smoneyislimited,itisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.改：Theernment’smoneyislimited,whichisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.Bycontrast,althoughthesalesofapplesintheUKincreasedslightlyfromonemillionto5.5millionpoundsin2004.解釋：這句話只寫了讓步狀語從句，卻沒有主改：Bycontrast,thesalesofapplesintheUKincreasedslightlyfromonemillionto5.5millionpoundsin2004.Toomuchmakesstudentsstressfuland解釋：stressful是修飾“造成壓力的事物”，而修飾“人的壓力大”應(yīng)該使用stressed。例如tired修飾人，而tiring修飾事物。StudentswhorarelywatchTVmaybelimitedtogain解釋：知識面受到局belimitedtodosth.這樣的句型，這改：Students rarelywatch Studentsareeasiertofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.解釋：這種句式屬于典型的中式思維改：Studentsaremorelikelytofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.改：Itiseasierforstudentstofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.Takingpartinsportsactivitiesinsparetimecandeclinethestressatwork.解釋 是不及物動詞，這里需要使用及物動詞改：TakingpartinsportsactivitiesinsparetimecanreducethestressatworkManyyoungpeopledecidemovetocitiestolookforbetterjobs.解釋：decide作動詞的用法是decidetodosth.這些動詞用法在福改：ManyyoungpeopledecidetomovetocitiestolookforbetterIfcriminalscouldreceiveeducationandtraininginprison,theywouldavoidtocommitcrimesagainaftertheyarereleased.解釋：avoid作動詞的用法是avoid ngsth.這些動詞用法在福利改：Ifcriminalscouldreceiveeducationandtraininginprisonwould comm