SectionⅤWriting—旅行宣傳手冊旅行宣傳手冊是旅行行業(yè)對外宣傳、吸引旅客的一種重要方式。經(jīng)過景點介紹讓讀者對景區(qū)產(chǎn)生一種激烈的旅行神往。一、基本構(gòu)造第一部分：介紹旅行景點的基本信息，如地理地點、人文環(huán)境等。第二部分：詳細介紹其旅行特點。第三部分：總結(jié)陳說以吸引讀者前往旅行。二、增分佳句(一)介紹景點的基本信息1．Itislocated/liesin...,withanareaof...2．Itcoversanareaof...,withahistoryof...3．...,locatedin...andcoveringanarea

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China’smostfamousscenicspots.4．Thehistoryof...datesbackto...5．Ithasbecomethemostpopulartouristattractionsince...(二)介紹景點的旅行特點1．Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchas...2．Youcanenjoy...,whichhasahighreputationbothathomeandabroad.3．With...,...is/areattractingmoreandmoretourists.4．Aninterestingfeatureof...is...5．Withitspleasantclimate,richnaturalresourcesisoneofChina’smajortouristcities.6．Atripalong...willenableyoutogettoknow...

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100詞左右的短文應(yīng)征。1．位于廣州的東北方向，離廣州約

198公里。2．由五個縣(county)構(gòu)成，人口約324萬。3．歷史悠長，名勝眾多；萬綠湖(WanluLake)景點優(yōu)美；湖水清亮；魚類眾多。4．博物館中有各種恐龍(dinosaur)蛋化石(fossil)，吸引了來自全球的旅客。第一步：審題構(gòu)想很重點一、審題1．確立體裁：本文為說明文；2．確立人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第三人稱；3．確準時態(tài)：主要使用一般此刻時。二、構(gòu)想第一部分，基本信息：地點、人口和歷史。第二部分，景點介紹：詳盡介紹萬綠湖。第三部分，總結(jié)：發(fā)出邀請。第二步：核心詞匯想周到1．have_a_long_history悠長的歷史2．lie_to/in位于3．be_..._away_from_...離有遠4．consist_of由構(gòu)成5．have_a_population_of_...有的人口6．places_of_interest名勝7．be_one_of/among_...是中之一8．a(chǎn)_variety_of各種各種的9．display/be_on_show展出10．from_all_over_the_world/from_every_corner_of_the_world來自全球第三步：由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)1．河源市有著悠長的歷史。(主謂賓構(gòu)造)Heyuan_has_a_long_history.2．它位于廣州的東北方向。(主謂構(gòu)造)It_lies_to_the_northeast_of_Guangzhou.3．離廣州約198公里遠。(主系表構(gòu)造)It_is_about_198_kilometers_away_from_Guangzhou.4．河源市由五個縣構(gòu)成。(主謂構(gòu)造)The_city_of_Heyuan_consists_of_5_counties.5．它大概有3240000人口。(主謂賓構(gòu)造)It_has_a_population_of_about_3,240,000.6．河源市有很多名勝。(Therebe句型)There_are_many_places_of_interest_in_Heyuan.7．萬綠湖是此中一個典型。(主系表構(gòu)造；oneof...Wanlu_Lake_is_one_of_outstanding_examples._

；outstanding)8.湖水清亮，魚類眾多。

(so...that...)The_water_there_is_so_clean_that_there_is_a_variety_of_fish_in_it.9．有好多恐龍蛋化石。(Therebe句型)There_are_many_dinosaur_egg_fossils.10．它們在當?shù)夭┪镳^中展出。(被動語態(tài))They_are_displayed_in_the_local_Museum.11．它們吸引了來自全球的旅客。(主謂賓構(gòu)造)They_attract_visitors_from_every_corner_of_the_world.第四步：句式升級造亮點1．用“Heyuan＋with...＋謂語動詞lie＋fromwhich＋定語從句”連結(jié)句1、2、3Heyuan,_with_a_long_history,_lies_to_the_northeast_of_Guangzhou,_from_which_it_is__about_198_kilometers_away.2．用此刻分詞短語作定語連結(jié)句4、5The_city_of_Heyuan,_consisting_of_5_counties,_has_a_population_of_about_3,240,000.3．用oneexampleofwhich指引定語從句連結(jié)句6、7There_are_many_places_of_interest_in_Heyuan,_one_example_of_which_is_Wanlu_Lake.4．用倒裝句改寫句8So_clean_is_the_water_there_that_there_is_a_variety_of_fish_in_it.5．用句型“Therebe＋n.＋過去分詞作定語＋此刻分詞作結(jié)果狀語”改寫句9、10、11There_are_many_dinosaur_egg_fossils_displayed_in_the_local_Museum,_attracting_visitors_from_every_corner_of_the_world.第五步：過渡連接聯(lián)成篇Heyuan,withalonghistory,liestothenortheastofGuangzhou,

from

whichitisabout198kilometersaway.ThecityofHeyuan,consistingof5counties,hasapopulationofabout3,240,000.Therearemanyfamousplacesofinterest

in

Heyuan,oneexampleofwhichisWanluLake,aninvitingtouristdestination.Socleanisthewatertherethatthereisavarietyoffishinit.Inaddition,