試卷第試卷第頁(yè)，總20頁(yè)※※題※※答※※內(nèi)※※線※※訂※※裝※※在※※要※※不※※請(qǐng)?zhí)健}※※答※※內(nèi)※※線※※訂※※裝※※在※※要※※不※※請(qǐng)?zhí)健乙部梢浴?so)博物館疏于管理，展品積灰，門廳冷落，急需改善。(whose)【答案】44.WhatonearthhasmotivatedXiaoWang'senthusiasm/initiativetomajorinelectronicengineering?45.Onlinepaymentbringsconveniencetoconsumersatthecostoftheirprivacy.Tomyparents'satisfaction,thediningroomofthisapartmentoverlookstheCenturyParkoppositethestreetandsoitiswiththesittingroom.或者WhatmakesmyparentsreallysatisfyisthattheycanseetheCenturyParkfromthediningroomofthisapartment,socantheyfromthelivingroom.Thismuseumisnotwellmanaged,whoseexhibitsarecoveredwithdust,andtherearefewvisitors,soeverythingisbadlyinneedofimprovement.或Themuseumwhosemanagementisreckless,whoseexhibitsarepiledwithdustandwhoselobbyisdeserted,requiresimmediateimprovement.【解析】motivatesbtodosth激發(fā)某人做某事，onearth究竟，majorin以…為專業(yè)，enthusiasm/initiative熱情/積極性，故翻譯為WhatonearthhasmotivatedXiaoWang'senthusiasm/initiativetomajorinelectronicengineering?onlinepayment網(wǎng)上支付，bringsconvenienceto給…帶來(lái)方便，atthecostof以…為代價(jià)，privacy隱私，故翻譯為Onlinepaymentbringsconveniencetoconsumersatthecostoftheirprivacy.Tomyparents'satisfaction令我父母滿意的是，后者也那樣soitiswith。也可以用主語(yǔ)從句Whatmakesmyparentsreallysatisfy表語(yǔ)從句thattheycanseetheCenturyParkfromthediningroomofthisapartment。overlooks俯視，oppositethestreet街對(duì)面，livingroom起居室。故翻譯為Tomyparents'satisfaction,thediningroomofthisapartmentoverlookstheCenturyParkoppositethestreetandsoitiswiththesittingroom.或者WhatmakesmyparentsreallysatisfyisthattheycanseetheCenturyParkfromthediningroomofthisapartment,socantheyfromthelivingroom.notwellmanaged/managementisreckless疏于管理，becoveredwithdust/bepiledwithdust被灰塵覆蓋，fewvisitors游客稀少，bebadlyinneedofimprovement/requiresimmediateimprovement亟需改善。故翻譯為hismuseumisnotwellmanaged,whoseexhibitsarecoveredwithdust,andtherearefewvisitors,soeverythingisbadlyinneedofimprovement或Themuseumwhosemanagementisreckless,whoseexhibitsarepiledwithdustandwhoselobbyisdeserted,requiresimmediateimprovement.評(píng)卷人得分48．WriteanEnglishcompositionin120）-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明后中學(xué)的李華，你的朋友李楠給你寫了一封信，告訴你他要開(kāi)發(fā)一個(gè)新的APP,用這個(gè)軟件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，給出理由（信的格式已給）?！敬鸢浮緿earLiNan,Hearingthatyouhavedevelopedanewappofstudentssharingclothes,Ifeeltrulyproudofyournovelidea.Personallyspeaking,Iamwillingtosharemyclothesonyourapp.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,itwillbewonderfulformeifIlearnthatsomeonethatIbarelyknowofcansharemyhappinessofwearingmyclothes.Itfeelslikeyouareemotionallyconnectingsomeoneinyourclothes.ThenImaynaturallywishtoknowmoreaboutthatparticular“someone”andprobablyfurtherdeepenourrelationship.Intheend,agoodfriendshipbetweenmeandmyclothesmatemightbebuiltbasedonourcommonclothes.What'smore,ifotherstudentscantrymyclothesthroughtheapp.Inturn,Ialsocantrytheirnewclothes.Therefore,studentscanweardifferenttypesofclotheswithoutactuallyspendinganymoney.What'smoreimportantisthatsharingmyclotheswilltakefulluseofthem.Intoday'smaterialsociety,therearesomanyparentswhopreparelotsofclothesfortheirbeloved

childrenfordifferentoccasions,suchasadressfortheparty,gymsuitforindoorsports.Moreover,theclothescanonlyrealizetheirtruevalueaftertheyareputonaperson'sbody.Tosummarize,sharingmyclothesonyourappbenefitsothersandme.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封關(guān)于共享衣服觀點(diǎn)的書信?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)提示可知，本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封關(guān)于共享衣服觀點(diǎn)的書信，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)如下：①開(kāi)發(fā)一個(gè)新的APP，用這個(gè)軟件共享衣服；②表示祝賀；③自己的觀點(diǎn)；④理由；⑤總結(jié)。第二步：根據(jù)關(guān)鍵要點(diǎn)，確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：developanewapp（開(kāi)發(fā)了一款軟件），shareclothes（共享衣服），feelproudof（感到自豪），emotionallyconnectsomeone（情感上連接某人），realizetheirtruevalue（實(shí)現(xiàn)真正的價(jià)值）等。第三步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題以及句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，使之自然流暢，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面?！军c(diǎn)睛】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，內(nèi)容完整，過(guò)渡銜接嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)自然，符合書信的要求，其中不乏亮點(diǎn)句型。定語(yǔ)從句的使用Tobeginwith,itwillbewonderfulformeifIlearnthatsomeonethatIbarelyknowofcansharemyhappinessofwearingmyclothes.名詞性從句的使用What'smoreimportantisthatshar