2025年小學英語畢業(yè)考試模擬卷：英語寫作思路拓展與2025年作文結構優(yōu)化試題考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______Part1:WritingPractice-ThoughtExpansionChooseonetopicfromthefollowinglisttowriteashortcomposition(about60words).Pleaseuseyourimaginationandprovidedetailstoexpandyourideas.1.MyIdealSchoolImagineyourdreamschool.Whatisitlike?Whatsubjectsdoyoulikebest?Whoisyourfavoriteteacher?Why?2.ASpecialGiftSupposeyoureceiveaspecialgiftforyourbirthday.Whatisit?Describethegiftandexplainwhyitisspecialtoyou.3.TheFutureRobotThinkabouttherobotsofthefuture.Whatcantheydo?Wouldyouliketohavearobotasyourfriendorhelper?Whyorwhynot?Part2:WritingPractice-StructureOptimizationWriteacomposition(about80words)aboutyourfavoriteseason.Followthestructurebelowtomakeyourwritingclearandorganized.*Paragraph1:Introducetheseasonyoulikebestandgiveonereason.*Paragraph2:Describewhatyouusuallydoorseeduringthisseason.Useconnectingwordslike"first","then","finally".*Paragraph3:Explainwhyyoulikethisseasonintheend.Uselinkingwordslike"because","so".Part3:WritingPractice-IntegratedTaskReadtheshortpassagebelowandthenwriteacomposition(about100words)continuingthestory.LastSunday,Lilywenttotheparkwithherfamily.Theweatherwassunnyandwarm.Theysawmanypeopleenjoyingthemselves.Lilysawalittlebirdwithaninjuredwingontheground.Itlookedsadandlonely.Lily'sfathersaid,"Weshouldhelpthepoorbird."So,theygentlypickedupthebirdandtookittotheanimalhospitalnearby.Thedoctorhelpedthebirdandsaiditwouldbeokaysoon.Lilyfelthappyandproudbecauseshehaddonesomethingkind.試卷答案Part1:WritingPractice-ThoughtExpansion1.MyIdealSchool*答案:Myidealschoolisverybeautiful.Ithasbigwindows,alargeplayground,andalibrarywithmanybooks.Ilikesciencebestbecauseit'sfuntolearnabouttheworld.MyfavoriteteacherisMs.Lee.Sheiskindandmakeslessonsinteresting.Ilearnalotfromher.*解析思路:該題要求發(fā)揮想象，描述理想學校。答案圍繞學校環(huán)境（美麗、大窗戶、大操場、圖書館）、最喜歡的科目（科學）以及最喜歡的老師（李老師及其原因：善良、有趣）展開，內容具體，符合小學生認知水平，并使用了基本的連接詞。2.ASpecialGift*答案:Ireceivedaspecialgiftformybirthday–asmallrobotdog.It'sverycutewithbrightcolors.Itcanbark,wagitstail,andevenfollowmearound.WhatmakesitspecialisthatitkeepsmecompanywhenIfeellonely.It'slikearealfriend.*解析思路:該題要求描述一個特別的禮物。答案明確了禮物是“機器人狗”，描述了其外觀（可愛、亮色）和功能（叫、搖尾巴、跟隨），并重點解釋了其特別之處在于能陪伴自己，排除了物質價值，突出了情感價值，思路清晰。3.TheFutureRobot*答案:Futurerobotswillbeverysmart.Theymightcookmeals,cleanhouses,orevendrivecarsforus.Iwouldliketohavearobotasafriendbecauseitcouldplaygameswithme,tellmejokes,andhelpmewithmyhomework.Itwouldmakemylifemorefun.*解析思路:該題要求想象未來機器人。答案首先預測了未來機器人的能力（做飯、打掃、駕駛），然后說明愿意擁有機器人朋友的原因（玩游戲、講笑話、做作業(yè)），邏輯連貫，從能力到個人愿望，思路拓展較為合理。Part2:WritingPractice-StructureOptimization*答案:Ilikespringbestbecauseit'stheseasonofflowers.Inspring,everythingbecomesgreenagain.First,thetreesstarttogrownewleaves.Then,colorfulflowerslikecherryblossomsanddaffodilsbloomeverywhere.Finally,theweatheriswarm,andwecanflykitesinthepark.Springismyfavoriteseasonbecauseit'sfulloflifeandbeauty.*解析思路:該題要求按結構寫favoriteseason。答案第一段點明主題（喜歡春天，原因：花的季節(jié)）。第二段描述春天景象（樹木長葉，然后花開），并運用了"First","Then","Finally"連接詞，符合段落要求。第三段總結原因（充滿生機和美麗），運用了"because"鏈接詞，結構清晰，邏輯性強，優(yōu)化了文章結構。Part3:WritingPractice-IntegratedTask*答案:Lilyfeltsadseeingthehurtbird.Sheandherfamilyquicklytookittotheanimalhospital.Thedoctorexaminedthebirdcarefullyandgaveitsomemedicine.Whilewaiting,Lilysatnearthewindow,talkinggentlytothebird.Soon,thebird'swinghealedwell.Thedoctorletthemtakethebirdhome.Lilyandherfamilywalkedthebirdbacktotheparkthenextday.Theysetitfree,watchingitflyintothe