1、英語(yǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練,Wu Guangmei,WRITING,A Good Writing(佳作欣賞),As is known to all, computers play an important role in our daily life. Its convenient to have a chat with friends. We can not only search information, but also go shopping on the computers. On the other hand, computers have many disadvantages. First o

2、f all, they will waste our money. Secondly, they will have a bad effect on our study. Thirdly, they will do harm to our eyes.,寫作訓(xùn)練的步驟,1.仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱； 2.圍繞要求，寫出句子； 3.添加過渡，確保連貫； 4.認(rèn)真眷寫，卷面整潔。,仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱,1.要求文句通順，無(wú)明顯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，意思完整； 2.所給信息必須全部用上，提示詞匯僅供參考； 3.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，意思連貫，語(yǔ)言通順，書寫規(guī)范； 4. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,步驟一：句子內(nèi)容完整性將所給信息整

3、合成5個(gè)句子,1 得到信任，高興，激動(dòng)； 2 不僅是知識(shí)的考查，而且是誠(chéng)信的考查； 3 更放松，會(huì)考得更好。 4 一些學(xué)生作弊； 5 無(wú)法及時(shí)獲得老師的幫助。,2. A test of honesty,3.,4.cheat,5.,步驟二：句子所需的詞匯，短語(yǔ)和句型,1 得到信任，高興，激動(dòng)； 2 不僅是知識(shí)的考查，而且是誠(chéng)信的考查； 3 更放松，會(huì)考得更好。 4 一些學(xué)生作弊； 5 無(wú)法及時(shí)獲得老師的幫助。,1. trust,典型病例,1.單詞拼寫問題 2.名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問題 3. 主謂一致問題 4.時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)問題 5.代詞(主格、賓格)問題 6.Chinglish現(xiàn)象,添加過渡，確保連貫,Th

4、anks to,As a result of,Because of,Due to,因?yàn)?添加過渡，確保連貫,whats more,moreover/furthermore,in addition,besides,另外(遞進(jìn)）,添加過渡，確保連貫,therefore,so,thus,結(jié)果,添加過渡，確保連貫,whats more,moreover,in addition,besides,另外(遞進(jìn)）,添加過渡，確保連貫,On the contrary,However,轉(zhuǎn)折,But/yet/while,添加過渡，確保連貫,In a word,總結(jié),In short/brief,Generally speaking,添加過渡，確保連貫,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion,個(gè)人觀點(diǎn),I think/believe,書面表達(dá)評(píng)價(jià)表,Put down the composition; Read it again and again, try your best to recite it.,Homework,好詞的應(yīng)用