1、書面表達(dá)專題,-建議信How to write a letter for advice,如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn) 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。,要點(diǎn)全,詞匯,句型 （高級(jí)）和語(yǔ)法多樣化（較復(fù)雜）語(yǔ)言地道,連接詞,寫作攻略 1.建議信是向收信人對(duì)某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告。 2建議信有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。 3建議信要寫出寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。因此建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、

2、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。,建議信寫作的注意事項(xiàng)： a這類文章一定要符合英語(yǔ)信件的基本格式。 b這類文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容： 首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。 主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。千萬(wàn)注意不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。 結(jié)尾段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要注意有禮貌使讀者容易接受。 注意事項(xiàng)：語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對(duì)方感受。,常用套語(yǔ),A建議信開頭常用句式(照應(yīng)材料,表明寫作意圖) 1After I read your letter in the newsp

3、aper, I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to 3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of - 5. You have asked me for my advice with regard toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.,B. 表達(dá)建議（body） 1.first，firstly，secon

4、dlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile, whats more 2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that 4. If I were you, I would 5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to sug

5、gest that you can,C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式,1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. 2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 5. I

6、n the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.,假如你叫孫軍，是恩施高中的學(xué)生，要給市長(zhǎng)寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：,參考詞匯: 穿行 thread ones way 天橋 overpass,第一步：審題 養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：,第一人稱,一封信,建議政府采取措施舒緩交 通擁擠的狀況,說(shuō)理邏輯性,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板,Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter asking for m

7、y advice on how to (引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議) As to , I suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心). Im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望). Since

8、rely yours, Li Hua,Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with

9、you to further details. Good luck with you. Yours, XXX,第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型,學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對(duì)著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家長(zhǎng)接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過(guò)街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。,學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對(duì)著大街,stand next to primary face/be faced with the main street,Theres a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.,Our school stands next t

10、o a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.,推薦句型：There be+并列句,非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu),Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.,潤(rùn)色小建議,Next to a primary school,將介詞短語(yǔ)提前（全倒裝）,stands/lies/is our school , faced with / facing a main street.,可將stand next to替換為高級(jí)詞匯/短語(yǔ),be lo

11、cated next to (near/beside/by),border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to與毗鄰,在對(duì)面 be opposite to,The traffic is busy during the rush hours.,高峰期交通繁忙.,traffic. during the rush hours,During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that,During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.,so

12、. that,with結(jié)構(gòu),With so many cars and buses going on the road, ,潤(rùn)色小建議,“高峰期”可意譯:,at peak time， a large current of cars and people,“交通繁忙”可譯為:,traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞 be choke up with be crammed with 被堵塞/塞滿,加之孩子小,家長(zhǎng)接送,交通更擁擠,sendto, fetch. ,非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu).,Many parents send their young children to school and f

13、etch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.,Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier., which.,加之孩子小，家長(zhǎng)接送，交通更擁擠 Whats more, pick up. make. To make things worse/ whats worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more

14、 crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. Whats more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by

15、their parents owing to their young age.,making the situation more serious.,making the traffic heavier可意譯為：,so. that.=tooto,The children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.,making 可替換為：,causing, leading to, resulting in,“s

16、endfetch” 可替換為短語(yǔ)：,pick up,潤(rùn)色小建議,學(xué)生過(guò)街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn),thread ones way，when doing,It is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.,固定句型It is +adj. for to do.,Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.,潤(rùn)色小建議,2. Some are exposed to danger wh

17、en crossing the ocean/ sea of cars.,靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行意譯：,適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞：,it is extremely dangerous，it is of great/ tremendous danger,政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。,suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do such as,My suggestion is that the government should,表語(yǔ)從句,固定句型 It is high time that(虛擬語(yǔ)氣),It is high time th

18、at relevant authorities took some measures like building,I suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.,簡(jiǎn)單句,1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, ,潤(rùn)色小建議,2. Aimed at solving these problems, the government should,A. 適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過(guò)渡句）,The government should pa

19、y more attention to it and try to solve it.,B. 語(yǔ)義的意譯,3. Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build,C. 添加形容詞和副詞,I strongly suggest, active/effective measures,第三步. 連句成文,但要注意：篇章的連貫性,Ne

20、xt to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. _, its crammed with cars during the rush hour. _ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. _, its of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _, it is high time that relevant authorities to

21、ok some measures like building an overpass.,A. As a consequence,B. According to the phenomenon stated above,C. When it comes to traffic jams,D. What makes things worse is that,A.,C.,D.,B.,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,反面范例,不推薦字體,優(yōu)秀作文范例1,優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生能靈活地處理各個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，大量運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，連詞等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個(gè)性和語(yǔ)言功底。,優(yōu)秀作文范例2,優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生的書面整潔，字

22、體美觀，運(yùn)用there be句型，介詞短語(yǔ)，從句，非謂語(yǔ)，套用句式等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。,優(yōu)秀作文范例3,優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生運(yùn)用倒裝句，so that句式，精彩的表達(dá)以及虛擬語(yǔ)氣等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語(yǔ)言功底。,優(yōu)秀作文范例4,優(yōu)點(diǎn)：該考生最大的特色是運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯等來(lái)提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語(yǔ)言底蘊(yùn)。,優(yōu)秀作文范例5,優(yōu)秀作文范例6,Congestion n. 阻塞, 擁擠, 充血,適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板,Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make som

23、e conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(依我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Yours, XXX,Dear Bob, Im glad to receive your letter ask

24、ing for my advice on how to (引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建議) As to , I suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議). Im sure (預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心). Im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua,假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫回信。 要點(diǎn)： 參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班； 看中文書刊、電視； 學(xué)唱中文歌曲； 交中國(guó)朋友。 注意：可適當(dāng)