1、課題中考寫作專練主備武艷華集體備課力義年班九學科英語導學時間累計課時導學目標1 .分析中考寫作失分的原因以及了解中考評分標準.2 .掌握中考的寫作思路與寫作技巧.3 .學生能標準寫出一篇高質(zhì)量的作文,同時做到同學間相互欣賞,相互點評.重難點掌握中考失分原因,并且盡量防止；掌握中考寫作思路和技巧；能標準寫出一 篇局質(zhì)量作文.自主預習你能把文章中的錯誤找到改正嗎？Alice is my a best friend, she come from Canada. she is very tall, hair is very long . he like sports. but I don 't

2、 know if does she like swim? She likes chinese,and she do well in it,we all very like she. 初中階段寫作常見錯誤改正1 .We at school from Monday to Friday.缺少成分2 .There are some grass or flowers beside the roa d.主謂 致3 .I think go to school by bus is the best way .動名詞做主語4 . They don' t know how to do 缺少賓語5 .The

3、y have been teachers yesterday.時態(tài)6 .He teaches our English.人稱中考英語作文評分標準一檔13-15分包含所有要點,應用了較生宜的諦言結構和詞匯,用詞準確、語法正確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚,具有較強的諦言運用水平.二檔10-12分某本包含所有分點,應用了較生富的諦言結構和詞匯,句子較通順,表達較清楚,但有少量錯誤.三檔7-9分內(nèi)容包含了發(fā)數(shù)要點,語言表達過于簡里子不夠通順,有局部語言錯誤,根本上不影響總體理解.四檔4-6分只包含了少數(shù)要點,語言/、標準,句子無條埋,行文/、連貫,語憫與勾 .言錯誤嚴重,影響理解.五檔1-3分只寫出與

4、要求的內(nèi)容相關的一些信息詞語,語言錯誤多.六檔0分 空白任何寫好一篇作義,書面表達七步法審-列-加-連-美-查-譽節(jié)約資源,保護環(huán)境從我們身邊的小事做起.Li Ming是一個注重 低碳生活的中 學生,假設你是他,請以 My Low-carbon Life 為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文, 簡單描述自己的 低碳生活.要點：(1)每天步行上學；(2)離開教室時,關燈、電視等；(3)不用水時,記得關水龍頭,循環(huán)使用水；(4)充分使用紙張(5)不使用塑料袋.參考詞：on foot, turn off, tap(水龍頭),reuse, make full use of, plastic bag寫作要求：(

5、1)內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點,可適當發(fā)揮,但不要逐條譯；(2)不得透露考生姓名、學校等信息.一審二列三加開頭結尾四連選擇適宜的連詞,使文章不枯燥,有條理五美寫好詞句,美化文章,如動名詞做主語,感慨句,從句,名言諺語等常用的連詞短語first, second, then, finally/at last, To begin with,on the one hand, on the other hand, but, however, though, because, because of, as, thanks to, as a result of if, unless, what' s

6、 more,besides, Such as/for example, In order to/in order that,in a word總之,I think, I' m afraid, as you can see, as we all know,To be honest,說實話by the way, Inmy opinion, not only.but also, ,either.or ,neither.nor ,both.and常用諺語You' re ner too old to learn.活至U老,學到老.Where there is a will, there

7、is a way.有志者,事竟成.Never say die.永不氣餒/永不言敗.No pains, no gains.沒有付出就沒有收獲.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上無難事,只要肯登攀.Rome is not built in a day. 冰凍三尺,非一日之寒.Well begun is half done.好的開始,是成功的一半.Knowledge is power.知識就是力量范文My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I like having a low-c

8、arbon life.I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and wat

9、er flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paperfor us tois necessary, s I often make full use of paper. It' s importanta low-carbon life to protect the environment.作業(yè)請用寫作七步法寫這篇文章同學們在討論會上都踴躍發(fā)言.請根據(jù)以下詞匯,以“To be polite student6為題用英語寫一篇短文談談你的看法.字數(shù)80作左右.要點：1.在校對老師有禮貌；2.按時完成作業(yè),不抄別人的；3.積極參加各種課外活動；4.在公共場合對人友好,禮待他人；5.給老人和帶小 孩的人讓座；6.不亂丟垃圾.提示:at scho